The Record of a Concubine Cultivating Immortality

In fact, I was not very optimistic about this article in the first few chapters, but after reading it, I realized that I seemed to have misread it. The first few chapters gave me the feeling that the writing style was a bit immature, but later on, I felt that the author was making obvious progress. Let's talk about the heroine first. Many readers think that the heroine is a little bit saintly, and they think it's not good for the heroine to be surrounded by trolls. In fact, not all heroines in fairy tales must be cold-hearted. The heroine in this novel gave me the feeling that she is transparent on the inside, plain and gentle on the outside, and as tough as a bamboo on the inside. She knows herself and knows the world. She understands what kind of environment she is in, which can be seen from how she deals with her father. Many readers feel that there is no need for the heroine to be gentle with some of the Qin family members who killed Qin Rongqian in the original book, but what can the heroine do before her wings are full? The heroine is naturally talented, but the difference between more and less family resources will directly affect the heroine's growth. I am a person who appreciates the ability to examine facts. Some readers like to see heroines who walk the high road alone, but I appreciate them all. I like heroines who are gentle, generous and mentally tough. I also appreciate heroines who combine pride and pursue the high road alone. I think every flower does not have to look the same. Different flowers have different beauty. Come on, author, I am looking forward to how far Qin Rongqian will grow in the end.

There was too much nonsense. When I first started reading it, I would go directly to the important parts, describing the heroine. But after that I didn't want to read anymore. I felt it was too troublesome and I couldn't write clearly, so I abandoned the article. There was so much nonsense that I couldn't even figure out who the heroine was 😅😅😅

It's so long-winded. The story is good. Can you please remove the detail on some things🥲

I don't think the writing is good. Even elementary school students can't punctuate like this. It's quite arty. The content is average. The plot is terrible. The protagonist is very naive and has a crooked outlook on life. I'm really speechless.

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Well, when I first swiped it on Kuaishou, I thought it looked pretty good. Why is it so cumbersome to open?

Xiao Hanyu is the male protagonist? The future man of the heroine is already decided when she is six years old. It would be better to find a rich man in the world and marry her. Anyway, there will be no difference in the outcome.

I really don't understand why the heroine is so good-tempered and is always a bad guy. Well, I prefer peers who are independent or have similar qualifications to the heroine. I'm really tired of seeing partners who drag me down. Also, the head of the Qin family has stopped pretending to be affectionate. The female supporting role with Wulinggen and her mother have more scenes than the female lead.

It's okay on Douyin, but after I came here there was too much nonsense. It feels like the number of words is all water

The purpose of the heroine's existence is to understand the physique of the direct disciple of the Jue Sect Master 😅 Thunderstorm got engaged to a fiancé at the age of 6 Tianlinggen was used as a predetermined cauldron to solve problems for others 😅

Overall, it's not a good read, and it's not particularly bad. Some people like it, and some people hate it, but I don't control the comments. I have deleted one person in the comment section who advertised Douyin, and replied to another person who directly greeted me with bad words, and banned her. Then I don't care about anything else. If the chapter comments disappear, when I go to correct typos in the plot, I change the next paragraph and they disappear automatically. Because I know a lot about it, I rarely ask you for monthly tickets, subscriptions, etc. The long comment that got the first likes from Qidian was not written by me. When I saw it, I still thought, wow, this girl is so nice. I didn't even think about it when I wrote it. You know, if you comment, I will correct typos and so on. Sometimes it is a mistake in the plot. I have to read hundreds of thousands of words and then correct it. It's very tiring, and besides correcting mistakes, I'm too lazy to do anything else. Although sometimes it is a bit sad to be affected. What I can guarantee is that no matter what my situation is, I will continue to update and work hard to write. Because I am very happy when I see people liking the characters in the book. Some people don't like it because my writing is not good enough, but I have a long time to improve. I will write better and better in the future, and one day I will write a world that more people like!

,, I really can't stand it. There is no distinction between priorities. Unlike the heroine, who is written in just a few sentences, the supporting characters are written in lengthy chapters. . . Why?

I hope that everyone will like this book and if you find any typos or inconsistent plots, please leave comments immediately. I will make corrections. I designed the entire worldview very carefully and will lay a lot of groundwork for the future. However, my brain is actually not that good. I will remember omissions and mistakes as I expand. I hope everyone will check and supervise me.

Has Mouyin started to promote all kinds of music and color books now? A description that is more verbose than an old lady in her seventies or eighties.

It's a bunch of nonsense, and it's not as good as the simplified version of the tweet. I'm really convinced.

It feels strange to read, like a sick beauty wiping her tears over and over while talking. It sounds weird. Maybe I'm not suitable for this style of writing, but the writing style is really too immature, and the characters don't match.

One chapter is full of nonsense. It basically revolves around the description of dispensable things. It takes several chapters to describe a character. In the last half a day, the setting is just a little bit. It takes a chapter to describe each character as soon as it appears, but that's not necessary. You can add a few sentences to describe it, and then complete the plot later. There is also a mess of background settings without focusing on the key points.

This book is full of nonsense literature. The main character is not written much. The rest is just to decorate other plots. What a shame.

If you see me using them frequently in this novel and feel that I am wrong and want me to correct it, then let me tell you, I will not change it. A group of girls are together, you would say they are together. A group of boys are together, you would say they are together. But what about boys and girls? You also said they were together. When you called him a boy, but then used this word to include girls in the crowd, I chose to refuse. I refuse, so I use the word it. If I use the word they for a group of people in my novel, it means they are a group of boys, or my input method is wrong.

This book made me feel disgusted when I entered the perspective of the heroine. The heroine had no mother since she was a child, and her father did not love her. She finally had a good spiritual root, but she was surrounded by calculations and no one trusted her, and she had no talent in other things. Her beloved grandfather actually took away the heroine's big opportunity. She had a very malicious aunt, her father was calculating and partial, and her master did not love her. The senior brother was a holy father, and the second senior brother arbitrarily believed that the heroine was not a good person. Some people will feel sorry for her experience, but on the other hand, Ruyi has a mother who loves her wholeheartedly, a sweetheart who treats her sincerely, a master who loves her, and a talent for alchemy. She suffered misfortune but also got better things. I can't stand this comparison. , Ruyi is the real heroine. Author, do you want to write about the whole process of the supporting character being a doormat? Even if the supporting character is kind and hard-working, he can't compare to the heroine who comes from a good background. Does this allow readers to put themselves in the shoes of the heroine and understand how to suffer from being a weakling? Why was the heroine misunderstood? Why did she go to save people and just pretend to be a good person?

Is this heroine sick?

I am speechless about the heroine's second senior brother (personal feelings after reading Chapter 103)

It's poisonous, very poisonous. Even though he's a time traveler, I feel he's no different from a native, or even worse than a native, which I can't understand. And the fact that the male protagonist set this setting in advance is really...

The biggest shortcoming of the author of this book is that unimportant things are repeatedly described, and unimportant character backgrounds are also repeatedly described. Readers like to understand clear and refreshing articles. Take a look at what is described in all five or six chapters! The heroine's background as a concubine can be briefly mentioned. The heroine is an adult who has traveled through time. To cultivate immortality, you need to fight monsters and beasts, enter secret realms, snatch treasures from the hands of many geniuses, and make troubles in the world of immortality. Let's see how the heroine uses wisdom, diligence and perseverance to rise to the top step by step in the world of immortality. I hope the author will not repeatedly describe the backgrounds of unimportant characters! ! You can't see the main plot this way

I really like this book. Is there still a chance to continue reading it?😭

I watched it when I was a senior in high school, and now I'm about to graduate as a senior. I hope I can see the ending in my lifetime 😭

I watched it on Hongxiu and Xiaoxiang. I really hate it when the update is discontinued. Is this an update? I really loved watching it at the beginning, but I never updated it.

This is my favorite novel. I really hope the author can complete it. The author will not abandon the article 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊