Swallowed Star: Super Lottery Draw

The synopsis is already outdated, please revise it. If the author is a One Piece fan, then forget it. While I do enjoy watching One Piece, and could be considered a pseudo-fan, you've really gone too far. Comparing the three types of Haki to a Chaos Overlord-level secret technique? You're overthinking it. The three types of Haki are Observation Haki, Armament Haki, and Conqueror's Haki.

Three-colored domineering aura collided with the Chaos Overlord?

Overall, it's quite original, but I feel that killing off Hong is a bit absurd. Limiting things to protect Earth is one thing, but dying of old age... At least Hong Leishen did some work protecting humanity from monsters, right? After all, they had no grudge against each other.

The pacing was great initially, but it all went awry as soon as they entered Chaos City. Her reason for not becoming the Chaos City Lord's apprentice was that she didn't want to owe him a favor—why didn't she say that back on Earth? Why not just wait until you, the Void God, pull Chaos to godhood?

How does Shinra Tensei contain the law of stitching together space? Have you even watched Naruto? There's a limit to how much you can modify things! Haki and stuff don't really fit into the Devouring realm, do they? It's unnecessary.

All I can say is that the system is too complex and won't become popular.

It feels like the author wrote this before and after the book was released. Are you planning to finish the story of the Origin Continent in 200 chapters?

It's getting worse and worse. What are these recent pictures? What are they even doing?

It's a terrible ending. Other books try to salvage it, but this chapter says it's a cause for celebration—it's hilarious!

Are you sure that using your fists is better than having a weapon when you are of equal strength?