My Girlfriend Is Weird

The suspense at the beginning is set up well, and I haven't read it since I added it to my bookshelf. When I saw the comments, many people said they didn't understand them, and their opinions were very different from the author's. I'm surprised that Qidian still has some articles that I couldn't understand? I read it carefully to the latest chapter and would like to share my feelings. It's probably this story: the male protagonist can predict, get into a car accident, see the mirror spirit, and find that his girlfriend is abnormal, and he is sent to a mental hospital by his girlfriend's mirror. After he comes out, he finds out the truth. In fact, his girlfriend's self mirrors me (the reason has not been written yet), but they are worried about each other and do not confess. When they meet the mirror demon, they want to contact the official, but the official is afraid of the new society composed of strange people, and it is deeply hidden. , There was a misunderstanding when it was not found; the interspersed tracking by He Miao and others was obviously the work of the psychiatrist; Tang Xin's serial murder case should be controlled by another weird mirror demon; the heroine who was being chased should be someone from the New World Society. After contacting and communicating with the male protagonist, it was self-defeating. Instead, it was suspected that Li Weilan and other official organizations were villains and strangers, but it seemed that there should be strangers undercover inside. . . So far, the world view roughly shows the early stage of the invasion of the Mirror World. There are very few superpowers, strangers, and weirdness. Personally, I think the heroine should be special. Her ego can counter the Mirror Self. She is now in a symbiotic state. I don't know what will happen in the future. . . 1. The pace is very slow! Author, do you plan to compete with "Mortal"? He is a great master. People nowadays like fast-paced and refreshing articles. How many people can you retain when you put it on the shelves? 2. What is the main line? I've written 170,000 words, and I haven't had a single confrontation with Weirdness. The only time I encountered the Mirror Demon was when I was an audience member. 3. The writing style is okay, the writing is fluent, and the IQs of the protagonist and supporting characters are all online. It is indeed more comfortable to read than a brainless novel, and I haven't seen any embarrassing plot yet. 4. The writing is very detailed, with a lot of foreshadowing. I looked at the casually written times and places. I paid special attention to compare them, and they were all very rigorous. 5. The power system has not been explained clearly. I still don't know what level the protagonist is, but it doesn't seem to be a big problem. After all, I haven't killed the monster yet, but can we hurry up? 6. The world view is very blurry, and there is no movement at all from the invasion of the mirror world? According to the current progress of the investigation, it is estimated that the encounter between the two sides will be the finale, right? 7. Emotional issues. Although the current situation between the male protagonist and Lu Yitong is very realistic and understandable, they are really unhappy. Wouldn't it be a good idea to sprinkle some dog food on it and make the readers smile like their aunts? 8. Is there too many female protagonists? Although I like harem stories, to be honest there are not many that I can write well. 9. Many people commented on the problem of logic setting. Personally, I don't think it is a big problem. It depends on how the author solves the problem. The overall feeling is okay. The plot and characters are quite attractive. If you have the patience, you can give it a try. If I haven't met the official website yet, I will delete the book.

[Superpower + Suspense + Daily Life + Multiple Heroines] Are you afraid when you find that your girlfriend sneaks out in the middle of the night while you are asleep and comes back with the smell of blood? What do you do when you find out that someone who looks exactly like you and is ridiculously strong wants to kill you? Everyone has another self in their heart. When he or she materializes, weirdness is born. This is a heartwarming story. Communication +493981873 (with benefits 🙂)

It's good to read, but it's almost thirty chapters and I haven't finished explaining what these weird things are? The foreshadowing is a bit long

I don't seem to understand. It's almost 20 chapters and I haven't finished testing it yet?

I feel that the protagonist has been hurting the heroine. Although the heroine was strange at first, she did nothing at all. After the protagonist made a lot of thoughts, he stabbed the other party. In the end, when the heroine did not hurt the protagonist, she ran out to hurt the heroine psychologically. Maybe when the heroine needed the hero, the hero escaped in various ways instead of being honest and helping the heroine. Looks like something...

The writing is okay, but this kind of abuse of female protagonists is no longer popular. It made me sad to read it. In chapter 50, the male protagonist is flirting with other women, and the female protagonist escapes. It is really you.

I finished reading it intermittently, three points: 1. The foreshadowing is too long, and the entire superpower system has basically not been introduced so far 2. Since there is an official organization, situations like the protagonist will be taken over as soon as possible, and the person named Huang will also be taken over. In addition, the protagonist actually has no intention of asking the official for help. 3. Although I also like the harem, this is the first time I have seen such a mindless and disrespectful heroine.

It's well written and I read it in one sitting. Are all the heroines having sex for the first time? If yes, I will write a book recommendation post to help promote books.

Is the male protagonist a little too suspicious? Although it is normal to have a mentality of being frightened and subverting your cognition. But I personally don't like it very much... I understand, but I don't necessarily accept it if I accept it...

Personally I feel good, this feeling of slowly getting into a rhythm

Slow-burning novels are not suitable for newbies to write. At least I have accumulated some fans after writing a few books. It is okay to write like this if I have a guarantee. Otherwise, most of the slow-burning novels will be lost.

Some suggestions for the author: 1. Slow writing is not impossible, but the writing style and rhythm are relatively high, so it should not be written too plainly. For example, the misunderstandings in the previous dozens of chapters should either be written in a more thrilling and thrilling way to make readers feel nervous, or some jokes should be added to the misunderstandings so that the rhythm and mood do not change. Judging from the current finished product, the story is actually a bit flat. 2. I feel that the emotional description of the protagonist is too simple and restrained. For example, what many people criticized at the beginning was that since they were afraid of Lu Xiaotong, why didn't they run away? In fact, I wrote several times that I wanted to save her, but because I described the fear in detail at the beginning, I didn't describe the worries and concerns in detail later, so everyone only remembered being afraid. The male protagonist's love for the original Lu Xiaotong, the entanglement of wanting to run away and wanting to save her, how worried he was, how painful he was, how much he hated the monster, these can all be written in detail.

After reading it, I don't feel very good, and I probably won't add it to my bookshelf. The writing style of this book is okay, but the foreshadowing is too long. I only know the general power in chapters six or seventy, and the realm system is basically not introduced, and daily life is not like daily life. Of course, this only represents my personal opinion. Other readers can take a look and maybe they will catch their eye.

Is there too many female protagonists on the list? Why does the supernatural world need so many women?

What are you writing about? The foreshadowing is too long and it won't be popular.

You've already published three books with only over 200,000 words. You can't just write the same few hundred thousand words as the last one!

Well, I am one of the most popular people. Although it is a pity, I hope your next life will be better and I will come again.

Boss, please update it quickly, I like to see it. Thank you. You wrote it very well. I like your style so much. Need a tip or like? As long as you update, I will reward you every day

The previous book was very good and very well completed. Why not continue the urban rebirth?

There were problems with this setup from the start. . The male protagonist has already begun to doubt the existence of super powers. Either that loli or she can predict the future. Then why don't you believe that the heroine's superpower is resurrection and regeneration? This is too poisonous. .

You wrote the heroine Su Momo inexplicably. You didn't explain anything about her background at the beginning, but you wrote that she was so enthusiastic about what she did to her girlfriend and the hero. The first impression is very bad, written like a green tea who wants to poach someone. Let me ask you, who among normal people would like this kind of heroine?