Film and TV: I Journey Through the Heavens

If your skills are not good, then don't write about a female protagonist first, otherwise most people will be blocked by this.

Everything is fine, the setting is good, and the writing is just fine. But what the hell is that woman? It's so embarrassing that I jumped to watch it. It's no exaggeration to say that this is a woman who gave me goosebumps.

See the author's top post for comments. Regarding the heroine, I want to say The heroine should be a character in a movie or TV series. Zhu Tianwen travels through the heavens, and then there is an original heroine in this world, which is very discouraging. If you can't write a romantic drama, don't write a heroine. Just have a "lover" in each world. Don't take people through time travel. It's best to freeze time and return later. Of course, if the author's writing skills are good, he can set up a female protagonist. Many people don't like to read heroine or harem novels. It's not because readers don't like them at first, but because the author clearly doesn't have the writing skills and insists on writing them like this. Good heroine novels are written as harem novels, and harem novels are written as stallion novels, otherwise they are just dog-licking novels. If the plot is entirely driven by women, it will be inexplicably disgusting.

What's this book like? Isn't it cliche 😏😏? Is the protagonist going to save others or doing whatever he wants 😏😏😏? Is he a peerless good man (who only likes one woman) or is he a wanderer among flowers🌸😏😏😏

As for the heroine Diana, forget about the real heroine and it's too embarrassing to write.

What I have read so far is pretty good, but sometimes I feel like the protagonist has no brains and is not using his brain. Both I Am Legend and the Parasite Beast escape with bruises and bruises. The biggest difference between humans and other creatures is (humans use their brains and use tools). If the protagonist is a little prepared, he will not suffer so many injuries. For example, if I Am Legend wears an armor body armor, he will not get bitten on the back. The same goes for the Parasite Beast. If you go to the Parasite Beast's base camp without preparation, you can redeem points. At least make some preparations, think about it one day at a time. A qualified hunter will not easily confront the prey head-on. He will keep a distance after causing damage to the prey. If he harasses the prey from time to time, the prey will gradually weaken and die. If Goto beats the protagonist with wounds all over his body and then keeps a distance so that the protagonist gradually bleeds and weakens, the protagonist will escape on his own if he is afraid. That's right "escape"

What do you mean? Inexplicable evolution. It must be benign if not the author. I'm just afraid that one mutant will be gone. Ban whatever you want. I'm just complaining

As expected of a travel system, I really don't know what to say about the plot and missions. . When improving your physique, don't forget to improve your brain.

When writing about time travel, don't write about the ordinary real world, it will feel awkward.

Don't take it too seriously when traveling. The first two worlds are fine, but Iron Man doesn't feel so silky.