Immortality in The Outcast

When I saw Chapter 15, I was really shocked. There were some in the chapter reviews who questioned Hua Tuo's worth? Let me tell you a joke, Hua Tuo, a surgical master who inherited and innovated the concept of traditional Chinese medicine and had a huge influence on later generations does not deserve to be remembered in history.

I read Chapter 11 and I couldn't stand it anymore. The main reason was the characterization of the protagonist. I didn't understand why he said he didn't want to interact with strangers and at the same time tried to interact with them. It was so serious and serious at the same time, and it didn't fit in with the introduction. Also, Lu Linglong kept grinding against the protagonist. The protagonist didn't make it clear that he didn't want to go, and it was hard for him to go there for several chapters. This is really a poisonous point!

This is a relatively good fanfic under one person, especially the setting of Wu Qin Xi, as well as the combined skills of Wu Qin Xi and Nisheng Sanli are very reasonable and do not exceed a certain range. In short, the writing style is OK, but the writing is relatively weak during the transition. (Five monthly passes plus a bonus! Say it super loudly)

The first part is pretty good, but it starts to get messed up when the protagonist kills his father. I don't know how the protagonist offended someone? It's nonsense to arrange a frame-up plot. This plot comes out of nowhere. If you want to catch him for research because he was blocked by some white light because you used both hands to check his memory, what kind of frame-up plot is there? After it's over, let the tiger go back to the mountain, and wait for thirty years to reach Hedong and Hexi?

A contemporary head of a serious family with thousands of years of history was killed by his son. What kind of villain can do such a thing? This clearly tells people that there is something fishy about this matter, especially the head of a family with medical skills who was killed. I feel that this book is going to be pornographic. It has strange magic and can't summon spirits.

To be honest, don't you think that Nadutong is too awesome? Nadutong is at best a semi-state-owned enterprise, not even comparable to the Wushu Association. Who will hang you with those powerful people!

It must be a single woman, it must be signed, and it must be worked hard

Okay, the latest chapter is out, Linglong indeed has other trump cards, trump cards that are not suitable to be used during the competition😄

The plot is rubbish, and the dialogue is awkwardly written. The dialogues in elementary school students' compositions are better than this. In order to make up the number of words, I used a bunch of exaggerated words I can only say rubbish.

So why can't someone from the Lu family use the Bright Soul Technique to look at the body of the protagonist's father? Zhang Huaiyi was able to extract memories even after he died for so many years. Although the protagonist's father was not strong, he had just died.