Immortality in The Outcast

Having read up to Chapter 15, I'm truly speechless. There are actually people in the chapter reviews questioning the value of Hua Tuo's work? Let me tell you a joke: Hua Tuo, a surgical master whose traditional Chinese medicine philosophy was both inherited and innovated upon by his predecessors and whose influence on later generations was immense, doesn't deserve to be remembered in history?

I read 11 chapters and couldn't continue. The main reason was the protagonist's character development. I didn't understand why he kept saying he didn't want to associate with supernatural beings, yet he did. It was hypocritical and didn't match the synopsis. Also, Lu Linglong kept pestering the protagonist, and even though he didn't want to go, he didn't say so directly, resulting in several filler chapters. That's a major flaw!

This is a fairly good fanfic of Under One Person, especially the Five Animal Frolics setting, and the combination of Five Animal Frolics and Reverse Life Triple Technique are all very reasonable and do not exceed a certain range. Overall, the writing is okay, but the transitions are a bit weak. (Five monthly passes plus a featured post! I'm saying it super loudly!)

Everything was fine until the protagonist killed his father, then things went awry. I don't even know how the protagonist offended anyone. The whole setup of a frame-up is ridiculous; the plot just came out of nowhere. If he was trying to use his dual-wielding hands to investigate someone's memories and was blocked by some white light, and wanted to capture him for research, he could have just…

The current head of a respectable, thousand-year-old family was murdered by his son. What kind of villain could do such a thing? This clearly indicates something fishy is going on, especially since the person killed was the head of a family renowned for its medical skills. I feel like this book is doomed. He has supernatural abilities, yet he can't even summon spirits?

Honestly, aren't you guys overestimating Nadutong? Nadutong is at best a semi-state-owned enterprise, not even comparable to the Martial Arts Association. Who among the powerful would give you a second thought?

It must be a single woman, it must be a signed contract, and it must be done with effort.

Alright, the latest chapter is out! Linglong really does have other trump cards up her sleeve, trump cards that aren't suitable to be used during a martial arts competition 😄

The plot is garbage, the dialogue is awkwardly written—even a primary school student's essay has better dialogue. They just threw in a bunch of exaggerated words to reach the word count. It's just garbage.

So why couldn't we ask the Lü family to use the Soul-Clearing Technique to examine the protagonist's father's remains? Zhang Huaiyi had been dead for so many years and they were able to extract his memories. Although the protagonist's father wasn't strong, he had at least just died.