Myth: Tiangang Disha

Killing someone is a drag, the writing is okay, but the plot is not.

The first volume of the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China was okay, but the second volume after Journey to the West was not good. I feel that the author did not write an outline. In fact, in the second volume, if you write about Ma Liang, The Book of Heaven, Calabash Baby, Liaozhai, Shushan, Sword of Immortals, etc., It would be better than jumping directly to the combat power system after Journey to the West. Invincible flow is not how you write it. Then, the seventy-two techniques of Disha and the thirty-six techniques of Tiangang were not written as they should be, and the descriptions were not enough. At the beginning of the third volume, I remembered taking food, medicine, demon slaying, pot of heaven, moving stars to change buckets, and nine breaths of Qi. It is recommended that the author can learn the routine of offering wine (Seventy-two Transformations of Earth Demon) and not put too much emphasis on upgrading. Telling a good story is also a way out.

The writing is okay, but the conception is problematic The characters are rigid and lifeless, probably because there is no outline, or the outline is vague and not detailed After reading dozens of pictures, the protagonist has no obvious personality, and his actions and thoughts are not consistent. In almost all events, the author makes the protagonist think and do this. , Rather than the protagonist himself having cheated and become invincible. He knows the future direction and the things he can do are not suitable for his own resources. The bold ones directly enter the palace, claim the name of invincibility, and gather the crowd to become emperor. The timid ones should not cause trouble, wait for it to fall on its own, and wait until it can withstand missiles to come out and claim immortality.

A great book certified by a twenty-year bookworm! ! ! Come on, author!

It's okay for a local native to have illusions about Western powers. How about a modern man in his thirties who travels back in time and actually believes that Western powers are wary of it? Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, does the author believe that the United States withdrew its troops from Iraq because it recognized its own mistakes and was wary of public opinion?

The main character is smaller. Since revenge. What else can you do to take care of the overall situation? Since you can kill Cixi. Can't you kill the Emperor and the President? Do you only know that you are in trouble? If a country invades, go to the capital of that country. Look which country dares to move. The layout is so small. Since the force has reached that point. Isn't it just nuclear weapons? Which country dares to move?

The more I look at it, the more something is wrong. As a cultivator in a republic where the world level is not high, I want to kill an old witch. Moaning and chirping, all kinds of calculations, worrying about this, worrying about that, what's the point of justice? Let her live a few more days and cut a few more fields? Then I read the author's previous book "Walking Historical Myth Begins with Lu Dongbin" and understood that I shouldn't have my hopes up. Slip away, no, I have to run right away.

Otherwise, don't touch history. If you do, be more careful. You don't mention Yuan Datou, whether Cixi should be killed, whether killing him will have any impact, etc. You are contradictory. Since you think Cixi should not die now, what happened to your master? Is co-writing your master's assassination of Cixi just to promote the plot for you? Now that you think Cixi should not die, why did your master die? What did you do earlier?

What the hell in the comment section? After killing Cixi and then killing foreigners, did it hit some people's pain points? Or is it because colleagues are jealous?

I just want to say one thing, if you think you are in a good mood and want to find some relief, you can read the book written by this author and another author Ninth Destiny. I guarantee you will be satisfied.

During the conflict with the mountain god, the protagonist becomes irritable and irritable, which makes him lose his mind 😥. He breaks into caves and kills mountain gods at every turn. It forms a separation and conflict with the previous character image. The protagonist is completely dominated, without any calmness or decisiveness to think for himself, make plans and make decisions. The plot conflict is really average.

The writing is very good, but there shouldn't be so many women. Firstly, most people don't want to read it. Secondly, there are too many such writings about women, and some of them are not good at writing, which makes them poisonous!

Just compromise, I don't even know what you want to compromise on? Killing the Queen Mother of the West will cause chaos in the world. Wrong. After killing the feudal officials from various places, they will make a dragon and snake rise from the land. The earlier the chaos, the better. Now the weapons of chaos are not very different. The chaos can only last thirty years. In the future, the chaos can last for hundreds of years. After the civil war, the last bit of vitality to rise is gone, so we can only When I borrowed money to extend my life, concessions were everywhere. I looked at Xiao Bai Zhang and saw that apart from revenge, I didn't see you doing anything for the people. But for the so-called people's livelihood, it's not possible here or there. Bai Zhang is grinding two Tiangang methods. Forget it, I won't say it anymore. I don't know what you want to do.

The first part is okay, but what the hell is the second one? I dare not kill Cixi and write dozens of chapters. I dare not do this or that. It's really frustrating. It's useless to practice Tiangang Earthsha. If you try to kill Cixi, you might as well wait for it to die of old age. Anyway, you won't kill it even if you drag it on. Still thinking about Yuan Shikai, who is he? Waiting for him to create a feudal dynasty? If cultivators are afraid of this and that, why should they cultivate? We have all traveled through time, we have force, and there are people, but we can't rebel? Now that we have spent so much money on cultivation, how can we not cultivate better when we build a new country? What are we worrying about?

The 70,000 words I wrote before were pretty good, not bad at all, and very logical. It just depends on what happens next! By the way, for the needs of the plot, the second technique has not been released in six years, so don't wait in the future, because if you want to kill some monster, just use two or three techniques, otherwise it will be a big poison!

From 91 to 93, regarding compromise and family arrangements, the more I watch, the more frustrated I become. Understand the righteousness? Righteousness is about power, not people. Let me tell you this, under the general trend, no one can die, not to mention the old witch and Yuan Datou, even Iron Fist Invincible and Chuan Linbei Leg can die. What meaning do you understand? Whose righteousness? Is it from Yuan Datou? What was Peiping like at the end of the Qing Dynasty and the beginning of the Republic of China? After you left, there was nothing like arranging maids, housekeepers, etc., But Jiuer, who was the first to tell you, stayed? She doesn't know the future, and neither do you? Are you pretending to be a native again now? The other one is Guiwu, an old gangster who has little success but more than failure. He could come and cause trouble when you were here. Isn't this family better after you leave? Count on the Bai family? The Bai family themselves can't handle this kind of thing. The protagonist still handled it. Is it selective forgetting?

When I saw Chapter 6, the old witch Cixi was a great master and died of poison.

The protagonist is reborn in the Tang Dynasty, bound to the Spring and Autumn Sword Armor Li Chungang template, and opens the gate of heaven with one sword. The Tang Dynasty was threatened by the immortal world. With one man and one sword, he killed eighty-one immortals at Nantianmen. I would like to ask all the immortals in the sky, who dares to offend our country, the Tang Dynasty? Come and take a look, just click in to watch.

The protagonist is uncomfortable without wearing a hat, so he has mastered the magical skill of cuckolding, and killing the old witch is equivalent to avenging his master.

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I want to write about the invincibility, but after becoming invincible, I wrap myself up with worldly threads. I am worried about this and fear of that. It makes me feel depressed. To put it simply, I am an invincible loser who entered the Republic of China.

I thought it was a refreshing article, but unfortunately the more I wrote it, the worse it got. The power level was just nonsense without any concept. Do you know what the concept of ten thousand kilograms of strength is? You wrote that it weighs as much as a hundred pounds, and it's okay to be punched more than a dozen times. If the shaman were so powerful, he would have rushed into the Eight-Nation Allied Forces and started killing 😰

The more you look at the fire, the bigger it gets. What did you write? You are so powerful and know history. Who is Cixi? Who is Yuan Shikai? I don't understand this, what should I write?

To be honest, this book only guesses at the back. Judging from the current writing, if you don't develop firearms, don't raise subordinates, don't develop an army, later, it is estimated that Cixi will be killed, or it will be the world of heavens. He dare not write about modern history, or he will be an ordinary warrior like an assassin. Unless it is very obvious to develop an army and establish a power, there is nothing interesting about it.

It's okay to subscribe, so I'll give a reminder to future generations. You can cancel it after watching the first world. What's written next is the same. Those who don't believe in evil can subscribe 🙂

Everything is written according to the original plot, it's a hodgepodge, poisonous points are everywhere, it's disgusting

It's the first time that free ones don't feel good anymore.

Chapter 91: Others use righteousness to tie him down like a dog, damn it! Reading this novel will make you mad!

In other words, they were tricked in by some kind of Tiangang Disha.

The protagonist is a loser and has a little bit of a bad mind. Anyone can plot against him and then find a reason to let it go.