Genshin Impact: Yura Is My Sister

How embarrassing. . Guiding Poison certainly deserves its reputation. . .

Are you doing a direct exchange? Lawrence killed all the normal old, weak, women and children? Can Yura still have the Sharingan?

The author's subject matter is really very novel, breaking my three views and becoming a show in the weird world.

What should I say? Just wait for my news. I will give this idea to a friend of mine to create a second creation, and try not to let this idea become dusty.

How should I put it? It's a very good idea and quite innovative. But the writing is too poor and the plot structure is not very reasonable, which makes the writing awkward. I suggest the author calm down, keep this idea, delete the book and reopen it. This book is very innovative, and it directly enjoys the popularity of Genshin Impact and Naruto fandoms, and there is no sense of disobedience in inserting Uchiha into Lawrence. If the writing is better, and the plot and combat power system in the article are improved, there is a chance to become the top Genshin Impact fanfic,,, it is a pity that such a good idea

Good guys, Shisui and Sasuke? The third generation turned out to be Falga? Is it because the author didn't want to write the second half?

I think this subject matter is okay, but the author's writing style is a bit unsatisfactory. Does anyone know of a similar book? Can you tell me about it? There is a shortage of books.

Genshin Impact version of "Gomura Gunto: Eyes Legend"?

Looking at the introduction, Lawrence is one against seven?

The author writes great! ! It's truly unprecedented and unprecedented! ! ! Please support the author a lot! ! Buy without losing money! ! Come on author Don't make me sick

I'm back, no doubt a poisonous book, I can't even survive the first chapter... It's really embarrassing to the extreme. Those who haven't watched Naruto and those who haven't played Genshin Impact may be confused. Believe me, after you read Naruto and then get to know Genshin Impact, you will know how embarrassing this book is.

Nice idea. But the author's writing style is flawed and the plot arrangement is poor. There is always an awkward atmosphere between the lines. It just feels like it's forced to be sensational and fake. Good ideas are wasted like this.

If you watch it without thinking, you will find it refreshing

I read it in one sitting. Although it is not very good, it does not feel so exaggeratedly poisonous Could it be that my poison resistance is too high? I can't understand why the comment section is so full of curses

The author's writing has a lot of room for improvement

I tried my best but couldn't finish it. In fact, playing Uchiha Itachi in the Genshin Impact world is not a bad idea, but the pace of the article is too hasty, and the clan is exterminated at the beginning. This operation not only leaves readers no time to digest the discomfort caused by the forced blending of the two settings, but also leaves the author no time to express the protagonist's personality traits. It also forcibly destroys the character design of the original work, making it difficult for Genshin Impact players to enter. This kind of conflict makes the article filled with a lingering embarrassing atmosphere, making the protagonist explode on the spot, which in turn makes Naruto readers unable to accept such an "embarrassing weasel". This haste did not get better as the article progressed, but intensified. The simple "many years later" omits a lot of narration and directly inserts the traveler and Paimon. This kind of transition is too abrupt and almost completely knocks the reader's emotions out of the work. The above problems all occur in the three golden chapters, which are the most fatal. Forgive me for unreasonable speculation, is the author worried that the character of Genshin Impact will appear too slowly, leading to the loss of readers? But the familiar yet unfamiliar young Qin and Yura are enough to satisfy readers for a while. It might be better to expand the narrative protagonist a bit during this time. In this unfolding plot, more Mondstadt characters can be brought out more naturally, further stabilizing fan readers' sense of identification with the work. Also, should the setting of playing the role of Naruto in Genshin Impact be reflected in the title of the book? Please consider. It is advisable to play Itachi in the Genshin Impact world, and I am interested in reading books on this subject. Try to polish the outline.

Um, how should I say it? I can't be the only one who suffers.

After reading a few chapters, I can't bear it To put it simply, it's the Genshin Impact version of Naruto, and the Naruto version of Genshin Impact is okay But! The characters are completely undepicted and have no personality charm at all The plot is confusing and gives me a headache (It is worthy of being a daily guide)