Start with the Bishop

[New book evaluation] I have nothing to do recently, so I came to be Shennong There are only thirteen chapters at present, which roughly reveal three power systems, that is, the traditional Western three systems (knights, magicians and priests). So far it looks very good One suggestion is to think clearly about whether the protagonist wants to believe in religion or not. This point is actually quite important. Everyone has different tastes. Whether you choose not to believe it yourself but fool others into believing it, or you believe it yourself and lead others to believe it, it is a choice. So far, most of them depict the protagonist as being indifferent, treating God as a fool, and trying to fool others into believing. It makes people uncomfortable. Even if you don't believe it, you should respect it and show your unity with knowledge and action At present, it seems that the former bishops are rebelling, but the Holy Light has not abandoned them. There are two possibilities. One is that God has no specific thoughts, that is, the belief in your heart will give you strength. The other is that God has specific thoughts and actively intervenes or approves his actions. If you want the protagonist to believe in religion, it is best not to use a god who is like a person. No one likes to condescend to others, but if the other person is not like a human being and has no specific thoughts, then it is different. Let's talk about it for now

The causes and consequences must be written clearly. The strangest part of the plot is why the protagonist takes in the female knight. It was understandable when she was threatened at first, but then you said she wanted to leave on her own, and you wanted to keep her here. There is no reason at all. Is it the protagonist's warm-heartedness or some other reason? You have to write it out, right?

I really want to be tolerant of the author, but your plot is too old. Old does not mean classic, it may just mean the aesthetics of the novel... Also, Chapter 100, the second-level royal archbishop, haha... Is there something wrong with it? Otherwise, the protagonist will not take the path of transcendence, and use tactics as a mortal, either to continue on well, or to become a mage... The protagonist in Chapter 100 must have intelligence or intelligence, strength or strength, all relying on a "kind heart" (yes, in my opinion, the protagonist has many "good deeds", like a virgin bitch, such as sympathizing with the mob who kill people on the street...) Li Li is wrong, the book should be more enjoyable no matter what! ! ! If the author is so stubborn, then I can only wish you happiness... Then the knight who was rescued was a princess. There was a sister who awakened the talent of a mage, hired a retired boss, met a mage that the nobles liked to play, the princess was forced to marry, and the king dragged the princess hard to let the protagonist develop... Haha...

The author is not careless at all! Mr. Pastor? ? ? ? ! Shouldn't he be called a priest? This is the first chapter and I haven't finished it yet.

The writing is quite good. I'm just a little disappointed. I probably won't be able to see the true positive representation of the Holy Light in this life. . . At the starting point, any attribute can be just. Only the Holy Light is either extremely dark or gleaming, or is surrounded by conspiracies. . . This direct holy light is magic. Why bother. .

I won't say anything else, it's only right to kill someone to pay for your life. A group of rebels who killed people were hanged but it was not a massacre. Why would the protagonist feel mercy? Everyone has to pay for their own choices. Treason is a serious crime in any country. Where does it come from that I have the confidence to let these people go?

After reading two or three chapters, I made some predictions. One, the god of the church must be the villain, two, the female knight must be the princess, and three, there will definitely be a sister, and this sister will either have a grudge against the kingdom or the church. In the end, the male protagonist will definitely fall out with either the kingdom or the church for his sister.

Looking at the first few pictures, the most basic question is that during the life-and-death struggle, the two sides are talking non-stop. Various contents are introduced, including introducing skills and introducing this and that. Can you have some brains? Even if the competitive sports players are fully committed when competing against each other, let alone a life and death fight, how can they be confused?

I found that the current protagonists all have a big characteristic, that is, they are not good at it but they still like to play around. (Of course, I am not targeting the protagonist of this book). They just don't like to improve their level honestly, and they like to engage in some side plots (Of course, I am not targeting the protagonist of this book). They just don't rush to improve their strength (I am not targeting the protagonist of this book). It's very annoying to watch.

Why did the protagonist take in the female knight in the first place? Religion is not what you like, is it possible that nobility is what you like? I'm afraid I didn't even have an hour when I first arrived in the different world, and I lined up at the speed of light. Is there something on your neck from behind? So urgent.

After reading ten chapters, the author's writing style is still good. But there are two things I want to complain about. First, he took the initiative to get into trouble as soon as he traveled through time. The protagonist was too worried. We readers know that the protagonist is protected by the author, but the protagonist himself doesn't know that. If you really want to get involved in trouble, it should be external factors that force the protagonist to get involved. The second is the nearly 100-meter-high city wall. This thing is 30 stories high. Let's not talk about how to build such productivity in the Middle Ages. How did the soldiers guarding the city get up and down? Is there an elevator? Or are they all superhuman, able to climb more than 30 floors wearing armor and still fight? Moreover, the medieval city was not very big, so it is probably not possible to see a ring of city walls directly in the city.

The protagonist's sister is called Yelena, and she is a white-haired lolita! Miss Frost Star, I am your fan! The white-haired lolita is the best in the world!

I haven't finished Chapter 2 yet, so let's open the browser! What novel are you reading?

Can the author be more careful with the names? It's really annoying to copy the names of historical figures.

The writing style has no highlights but no flaws. It's quite readable. However, the historical knowledge is a bit mediocre. It's about the same level as my students. I felt embarrassed when I read it. I suggest you mention less about the history of the earth and write less about the political structure, and focus on fighting monsters, upgrading or farming.

It's quite average, the writing is good, and it's quite comfortable to read, but to be honest, it doesn't have any special features. I probably won't be interested in reading it after two days... Maybe it's because I'm "old", but it still feels like a memory when I read it.

Why do I seem to have seen this introduction before? ?

As long as you dare to take out the Bible and read it, I will give you a vote for this book. Also, let me say that the Bible I am reading is a small book. The larger Bible has more words. It has maps of Jerusalem in the old days and the places where missionaries went, the Book of Songs, etc., And is divided into the Old Testament and the New Testament as shown in the picture

The protagonist defeats the enemy without touching the corpse. Bad review

So pretty! It's a very good Western fantasy sword and magic themed work. It's really beautiful. Be sure to write it down. I'll give you the remaining starting points.

No moles, some liberation theology

I don't like the position, it's a bit strange.

I heard that the author is going to do something big today

After reading the first thirty chapters, I haven't gotten to the point yet. Go back and practice hard.

It's finally on the shelves! Good books stand up.

I really like it, and I have been following it. It is also a novel about financial independence and not having sex in vain. It is the first time I vote monthly after using Qidian... The first few monthly votes will not be wasted. Anyway, good luck to the author.

When does the author plan to sign a contract and release it on the shelves? After graduation.

Come on, new writers, if you don't feel good, just cut it off and try again with a new account.

They were all wiped out by random updates.

Author, will you still study books in the future?