Elf, but I Am a Breeder

I was attracted by the introduction. There are so few written about Pokémon as a subject, I'm starving to death. First of all, I would like to give a big thumbs up to the author. It is not easy for anyone to write. Here are some insights from the transparent writer who updated by chance. Writing about Pokémon is difficult. It is difficult to grasp the relationship between humans and elves. They are not pets, but more like friends, comrades, and family members. They are very living existences. Compared with animals, they have more emotions, but after all, no one has really seen them. Therefore, I feel that in the articles I have read, there are very few brilliant descriptions of Pokémon's own emotions. And as the later years go, there are only a few that often appear, and the others are becoming more and more transparent, especially the mythical beasts. I think this is quite boring. Isn't the elf I cultivated delicious? Why do I deal with so many mythical beasts? Why don't they have their own responsibilities? Why don't they go with humans? It's better to write that the protagonist is so powerful in the end that he goes on adventures in various places. Meet mythical beasts, solve problems together, forge friendships, and meet again by fate, right? There is a living theater version of it, conquer it, conquer it, conquer it, it will be boring in the end, because it is not exciting enough, there is no freshness, and it is vulgar. It is strongly recommended to the author to be cautious when conquering mythical beasts. What I have seen so far is that my senses are okay, and there is nothing toxic about it, except that I don't understand how the protagonist makes friends so quickly, how much he gives to his friends unconditionally, and how pure a high school student is like a primary school student. Maybe there is a generation gap with current students? Times have changed. Nowadays, primary school students are precocious, let alone high school students. Let's not mention that the protagonist casually gives the energy cube formula, let's talk about choosing elves for his best friend, giving him a training plan, and telling him the direction of the team. Is this a friend or a son? The better the relationship, the more you should keep a good distance and a sense of space!!! Forget it about choosing an elf. There is nothing wrong with giving suggestions, but I don't understand the formula. A high school senior who has always been a poor student in the past suddenly has an advanced formula? If it is exposed and there is a little conspiracy, the outcome will probably not be too good. Does the protagonist have no worries at all? I think it's a bit unbelievable to designate a training plan after finishing it. Training elves is a relatively private matter. If you aim for a career, it is equivalent to a restaurant's secret recipe. If the protagonist is like this, if it is serious, it can be seen as stealing someone else's recipe and asking someone to pay for it as a thank you. If you really want to be a best friend, it shouldn't be Let him think and grow on his own. Once he becomes dependent, the probability of falling out will increase. I personally feel that the protagonist is less like a friend and more like a mother. This is not how leadership comes about! Sir! The correct posture should not be to guide friends to think for themselves. Self-training, centralized communication, mutual suggestions, and improvement! I have to mention here that you are reborn, and people from the original world are not fools. I personally feel that it is very crude to base your happiness on foresight. It is as crude as forcibly deducting the IQ of everyone except the protagonist. It's brainless and boring. What's more, if it is really a brand new world, who can guarantee that the game tactics will be effective, but it is difficult to solve the bug of commanding. I named Teacher Lu here, but the more I read, the more meaningless the book becomes, because there is actually not much difference between the incompetent protagonist and the unique beauty of the protagonist, and it will easily become boring in the later stage. Of course, I personally feel that the author can write whatever he wants. I am just a spectator, and I am a free prostitute. I have no intention of criticizing the author. Also, let's write about elves. The thing that you have to compromise is that the popular elves are indeed more attractive to readers. If you really write the dream-inducing tapir as the main force, I guess not many people will want to read it (from the deep resentment of the noobs who can't get the mini dragon in Pokémon Go). After all, if you really know it in all the illustrated books and love it in all the illustrated books, there probably won't be many people. The beginning of Super Sonic Bat can only be said to be neither good nor bad, especially when the protagonist is not from a civilian family. The cultivation of quasi-gods is too time-consuming, but parents cannot not think about the future of their children, so it is really up to them to make their own choices. Isn't it? Isn't it? Are the parents of the Great Celestial Empire so democratic? Of course, I don't think this is a big problem. The Super Sonic Bat develops quickly and has a relatively high upper limit. With three stages of evolution, it can beat a lot of elves. Otherwise, how can it be the standard equipment of the Rockets? The main thing is to draw people with good writing. At this time, character design is very important. I originally wanted to be the first person to determine the team when writing about elves, and the second person to set a keyword for each elf, which can make people remember it at first glance, tsundere? Internet addiction? Second grade? As stable as an old dog? Dragon fighting is very memorable. Who doesn't love dragon fighting? It is very important for the less popular elves to have a personality that has room for development. I thought at the beginning that if I wrote a fanfic, I would write about an ugly fish that had a bad temper and would do anything if it refused to obey. There were wounds all over the body, and it refused to be subdued by "me" and didn't want to talk to me. But in fact, it was because of its hatred of itself. The inferiority complex about his own appearance gradually became familiar to me when I was willing to accept it, but he was not willing to be subdued by me because he was very proud at heart, so he wanted to become stronger and become an excellent Pokémon. After being subdued, it would be better to write Pokémon dreams. I think it would be much easier to write Pokémon as simple people. Currently, I haven't seen any characteristics that are obviously different from other Pokémon in Superbat. However, I think it's very nice to write about the fact that in order to show off one's responsibility as a big brother and to forcefully perform skills regardless of the physical load, it should be a little more delicate. Don't "speak" and don't need me to "hear". There is unwillingness in the eyes of Little Batbat, a lonely look. I was anxious and ashamed, but it soon turned into an unprecedented determination to write. For example, I rushed over to pick up the Supersonic Bat, and said something accusingly. He was a little aggrieved, flapped his wings a few times, and anxiously wanted to defend, but in the end he said nothing, but his eyes were a little lonely, but soon he regained his fighting spirit and told me with his eyes that he was the eldest brother. How could the eldest brother be weaker than the younger brother. Balabala, this is a suggestion from a reader who said it's okay to watch the excitement and I don't need to write anything anyway. Slightly reduce the role of companions and add more training to the elves. How to exercise wings, how to strengthen the proficiency of moves, and how to grasp the timing of moves. After all, it is a new world. I think it is reasonable and interesting to talk nonsense within the scope of beavers. Most of the people who come to read fairy tales watch Pokemon, and a small number of them watch Sad Wind. I think, personally, the role of friends is a bit too much. Even if you write about the bond between people, it doesn't mean that you have to be together every day. You can just train separately, and agree to go out to fight together on the weekends. After the hearty battle, We had a pleasant barbecue together, cooperated with the elves, played with friends, and when we were tired, we lay down on the lawn together to talk about future directions, and joked with each other. Afterwards, we felt a little sleepy and took a nap. The protagonist accidentally found Suicune and touched his head. In this way, the bond of friends is also clear, and chatting and spanking between friends is more humane. (Ps, Suicune praised it, the appearance is really the best among the three, yyds) The last small opinion is that it is best to set a clear goal for the protagonist, whether he wants to be an ordinary breeder and inherit the family property, or whether he wants to be a more powerful breeder and start his own world. To be honest, the author thinks that you chose this name, and the implication is that although it is based on There is a small problem with ordinary Xiaolu who aims to be a breeder but is inexplicably super powerful. If he really aims to be a breeder, then he does not consider the relevant professional knowledge at all. From what I understand, a breeder is not just as simple as making energy cubes, but also the identification of Pokémon, how to cultivate a better appearance, how to enhance the healthy development of Pokémon's body, how Care and maintenance of trained Pokémon, how to improve Pokémon's character, etc. If you are a professional trainer, it is normal for you to write like this. But if the protagonist wants to be a breeder, it would be a bit strange to write like this. When Tingshu took the breeder qualification certificate, he was essentially to seek a better future and support the orphanage, so being strong is also one of the goals. If Xiao Lu is single It's a bit strange to be so focused on fighting if you just want to be a breeder. If it's for the martial arts test of the college entrance examination, then I think it's a bit strange. University is not divided into majors. Breeders, coordinators and trainers are not the same in nature. They must be divided into subjects, let alone the ranger type. Of course, this world view does not seem to be a normal Pokémon world, maybe I have misunderstood it. I think a lot about it because I like it. It's not about the author's attitude that you are in love with me. I write slowly and at my own pace. It's only the first hundred chapters and the story is not fully out yet. I'm still looking forward to it. Come on! It's quite a long comment. It's me as expected.

I feel that the protagonist is a winner in life, his parents are high-level intellectuals, he is rich (above average level, the one with the highest sense of happiness), he has childhood sweethearts, and best friends. The only thing he is unhappy about is poor grades, which is solved by cheating directly after traveling to the elf world. Having already cheated, and using the system, it is very outrageous. The work is very smooth, but it should be more like the data flow of novels in the game. I prefer the anime side, the description of emotions and elves (write the details and emotions of the elves to make people feel that that feeling really exists) So, bye

Pokémon cultivation does not rely on energy cubes. It is used to increase one or more of PM's gorgeousness. The spicy/astringent/sweet/bitter/sour marks on the energy cube can respectively increase PM's handsomeness/beautifulness/cuteness/smartness/strength Most of the gorgeousness exchanged by NPCs in the game have poor combat abilities In the animation, Xiaogang Tiantong is mostly a Pokémon cultivated with Pokémon ingredients. Energy cubes are purely used for gorgeousness contests. Pokémon has its own ecological chain. The fruit of the tree is used to create Pokémon balls and magnificence, and has no effect of making it stronger. They are also divided into carnivores and herbivores, and there are also Pokémon foods that are like cat food and dog food (I think this is what can increase the effort value of Pokémon 6)

Your introduction is interesting, but not reasonable enough. Huang Di and Rayquaza are more suitable, Entei and Groudon, Chiyu and Kyogre are also quite suitable. Shouldn't the First Emperor be the Holy Pillar King and the 12 Divine Pillars? (Quadruplets of the Three Holy Pillars) The terracotta warriors and horses can even be circled with elves such as giant clay dolls. The black and white dragon is more in line with Wang Mang and Liu Xiu. Wang Mang, a symbol of the ideal time traveler, was slapped in the face by Liu Xiu, the protagonist of the real era. The meteorite that shook Wang Mang's army was Deoxys. Don't ask about its relationship with Liu Xiu, but it was picked up by Liu Xiu. As for how Wang Mang traveled through time, you have to ask Celebi.

Pictures taken from others are called mythical beasts

After reading the reviews from book friends, I understood why I kept chasing this book. I really like the mythical beasts portrayed by the author. Rayquaza, who is keen on fighting, wants to be the strongest, but is confused by researcher Mewtwo, and Latios, who controls Rayquaza and wants to defeat Rayquaza (because Rayquaza often comes to Latias in order to fight, pretending to tease Latias in order to fight with Latios). The imprisoned Hoopa, the Tohoku Kyurem who loves to speak dialects, Victini who wants to stay by the protagonist's side, but because of fulfilling his promise and dreaming to travel around the world, has been locked up in the depths of the sea since birth. Dark Lugia who is like a child, Darkrai who is highly cooled and on call, Latias who disguises himself as a human to amuse the protagonist, and Deoxys who is full of mini dragons. Especially in the last few chapters, you can clearly see the changes in Deoxys. He has just been invisible in the air since he was born, watching everyone's protector quietly, and slowly under the influence of the protagonist, he has become a family member like Crossbat and Kirby. While the smile on Deoxys's face increases, he will also make some small jokes with the protagonist (for example, the protagonist is blocked by Mewtwo, and he is watching the fun below. For the protagonist The cry for help is ignored. ) The unique mythical beasts plus the protagonist's ordinary elves, the eldest sister with a cross-shaped bat, the gentle brother Kirby, the fire-breathing dragon who loves the pot, and the iron-clawed lobster with three axes, try your best. The Electric Shock Beast that learns from Zeraora, the Onion Ranger who keeps getting stronger and masters the art of swordsmanship, the Kettle that can make tree juice and beat it, the Shining Mini Dragon and Zoraya that are loved as princesses by everyone, are all what I yearn for.

I don't understand why the family can obviously arrange for a handsome and strong person, but no matter how hard it is, the elf descendants of his grandfather and father can also be arranged.

Gkd, I haven't seen such beautiful elf writing for a long time. Although it can be seen from the lines that the author is a newcomer and the writing style is a bit jerky, you can feel that the author is very attentive. The characters and plot have a refreshing feeling like country wheat, which reminds me of the first time I read the elf novel. At a time when old Elf books are constantly being completed and new books are difficult to produce, it is not easy to see such Elf books, and it also makes me admire the author's courage and confidence even more. (Especially compared to me who wrote four or five chapters but didn't dare to post them. Even if I post them, I can't guarantee that I won't be eunuched.) In addition, since there is a heroine, the emotional line must be well written, otherwise it will fall apart accidentally. Finally, I hope this book can end safely. Finally: "Come on, author ^ω^"

What stands before you now is 1999 Quartz League Top 16 1999 Orange League Honorary Trainer 2002 Johto League Top 8 2005 Fengyuan League Top 8 2006 Kanto Region vs. Pioneer Zone Dominator Top 4 of the Sinnoh League in 2010 Top 8 of the Zhonghe League in 2013 Runner-up in the Kalos League in 2016 Champion of the Alola League in 2019 Champion of the 2022 Eight Masters Championship The newly born world's number one champion 10-year-old Zhenxinzhen Xiaozhi this year

I didn't read the novel, but I just saw the title when I was looking for it. I thought the subject matter was very interesting. When I read the discussion, several people said that hierarchy is the best. I was bored and wanted to explain what I thought. Personally, I think the hierarchy should be the worst and ugliest setting in "Pokemon" novels. When you artificially divide elves into three, six or nine levels, then you will definitely not be able to write an interesting, fun, and life-like elf fanfic. For example, Xiaozhi's Charmander was abandoned by his former trainer in the anime for "poor qualifications." However, in Xiaozhi's eyes, it is a life, a living partner, and is not used as a fighting tool. I like the "Pokemon" anime because Ash and Pikachu get along warmly, encourage each other, and make each other stronger. Challenging the gym is not for success, but to prove that after partners work together, they can verify the results together. Pikachu can challenge the mythical beasts. The small Charmander, who is rated as weak, has the ability to fight the mythical beasts under the protection of Xiaozhi. In order to protect Xiaozhi, Pidgey evolved into a Pidgeot. If all are based on race, quality, and level, Charmander is the Little Wisdom Eye Bead, Pikachu is the Wisdom Eye Bead, and all Xiaozhi's elves are of super quality, and Xiaozhi is the "Lost Picker". In anime, most of the elves of the gym trainers are all kinds of weird. In the game, there are various racial values. If you apply it to the anime, it becomes, are the gym trainers fools? Why can't you find a demigod? What's the purpose of recovering and training this kind of garbage weak Pokémon? It also upgrades to a level. The demigod has grown to have so many more attributes than this garbage! It is best for everyone to choose high-quality demigod elves. Those who do not choose are garbage trainers who do not understand elves. In Pokemon novels, if there is no hierarchy, then you can live with the Pokemon, work hard, encourage each other, and grow with each other. This is my partner, and I am willing to work hard to become stronger for him. I see the mythical beasts dare not move, but for the sake of the trainer, I am willing to charge to the strong! The novel is not a battle game about Chiguoguo. There is no hierarchy. If there is a racial value, then all Pokémon are eligible to gradually become stronger, just like Sakaki's Styrofoam. If you use the game to set up Stylo, the racial value is so low that it is not worthy. In the game, they can't create a scene where players and elves can have fun together and trust each other, so they can only focus on capturing and fighting. This is a novel! Just write about combat, why not play the game? It's a big and small game. Mine is a demigod and yours is an ordinary elf, so don't look at it. You lose. Are you a legendary elf? You are unworthy of all your racial values, dreams, legendary elves, and world creators! Don't talk about off-site legends, we are just a Pokémon battle with 4 skills. Your Destruction Death Ray and my Destruction Death Ray have the same power and cost the same, so we draw a draw and move on to the next skill. Would this be interesting to write in a novel?

Since the author is extremely tough-talking, I specially subscribed to 100 chapters to evaluate the pros and cons of this book. The first point is the issue of writing. This is a matter of hard power. After all, he is a new author, so it is hard to say much. The second point is that the protagonist's background is too strong, and the protagonist has a golden finger, which makes the protagonist's personal strength not obvious. Third point, the emotional scene was too awkward. The straight-faced male protagonist somehow became enlightened and there was almost no change in the middle. The fourth point is that the author is somewhat lacking in some knowledge about Pokémon. The three things that impressed me the most are: the first is that the courage of the Boom Monster is not as good as the timid characteristic of Gu Niuniu; the second is the Charizard who can learn Freeze Punch; and the third is the use of poisonous Kettle against Yongjira who is defending with magic. Of course, there are some advantages. The small fantasy beasts written by the author are very cute. The elves in the protagonist group are not all the popular elves, but they are still very popular.

Charmander's tail fire is not that fragile. Officials have long refuted rumors that its tail fire is the embodiment of vitality and cannot be extinguished by water. It will only be extinguished when its vitality is exhausted. Just like Ash's Charmander, its tail fire was not extinguished because of the rain, but because of its poor health, being abandoned and heartbroken, coupled with fatigue and hunger, and being exposed to the rain and cold, so its vitality was weakened, which is reflected in the tail fire.

It's a great novel. The interaction with the elves is very good, and the battle scenes are also well drawn. I read them all in one go. It was very satisfying. But the number of words is too small. It didn't feel that satisfying.

If there is no difference in qualifications, then the strong will always be strong, monopolize resources, and cultivate a lot of ordinary elves at the level of mythical beasts. If you are willing to pile up resources, there are all kinds of mythical beasts.

It's rare to find a Kirby beast, but you didn't write down the level (this is the most fatal thing), just like the friend who made a comment before. If you are highly qualified and have learned a few skills, can you compare with the champion? Without that sense of substitution and obvious level stratification? Let me tell you the truth, if you write down the levels, write less details about the people around you, and focus only on the protagonist and the elves, you won't just be at the top at the starting point. Is it okay to get in the top five or the top three? Anyway, not writing the level is fatal. To be honest, I can't stand it. I quit after Chapter 31.

I came here to ask if there are any obvious poisonous points in this book. The elf novels I read recently almost made me die of poison. I have finished reading all the normal ones. This book has a lot of words, but I don't know what the content is. The poison resistance has been severely reduced at present. I am not sure if it is normal. I am afraid to read it (mainly there are more than 4 million words, but there are only more than 200 posts, which makes me a bit weak)

I just started reading it, only about 40 chapters in, and I have a question. The protagonist, Kirby, has gold qualifications, and the girl in skirts during the competition has orange qualifications, but one red qualification is missing in the middle. It doesn't mean that the higher the qualifications, the faster you learn skills. Why does Miss Skirts have so many more skills than Kirby? Don't you only get your first elf after taking a mock exam?

Everything else is pretty good, but there is no elf level display, so bad review. The system functions are not upgraded, not comprehensive, bad review.

I feel like I always rely on my own settings. Not to mention other things, the three heads of the dragon can use skills together when they evolve, but they basically disappear later. Otherwise, I can't imagine how others can interact with the three dragons and exchange damage. Against wave 1 and 3, the damage exchange is also a block and two outputs. Who can block it. As a result, it disappeared immediately.

I'm just curious if this book has a female protagonist (non-Pokémon)

It may also be my problem. The original story of Pokémon should be regarded as a travel novel or a road novel. When it is switched to a simulation business type (I don't know if it will be later), it is a bit unaccustomed to it, and the early stage gives people a contrived feeling. At least for me, it is quite uncomfortable to read.

I remember there was a novel where the protagonist said after winning, it was really an interesting duel after winning. Please give me the title of the book.

How did you fly from 1200 to 1800?

Please update more, I only saved less than 20 chapters, not enough to read.

It's pretty. Daily Guide recommends an appetizing article. Can the leave stamp be deleted? It's mainly because I'm used to listening to books, and from time to time I'll read out the leave chapter together. (Just forget it if you can't delete it)

I'll give you a ticket, update soon