The Era of Rebirth

Twins, interesting? I can't accept that there is a brother who looks the same in the novel. And there is a high probability of a bloody plot, which to be honest is a bit discouraging.

The current author really has no self-awareness at all. Why don't you read your own works if you don't know what to write? It's really amazing. . . .

Halfway through, I felt that there was a problem with the outline. For example, although a brother followed his mother, the protagonist switched to science. Is this to help the family's electronics factory? Don't see the risk? In the future, if your brother comes back to divide this factory, no father will refuse. After all, they have no conflict. And then there is the idea of ​​buying a stake in the garment factory. He didn't explain the specific value of the factory, and he didn't even write down the machines clearly, so just get 60%? Shouldn't we earn 60% of the processing fee while earning the money from the order? From what you wrote, the factory is not big, so why do you write that the order price is 64 cents? ? Logic and writing need to be improved

What the hell, it turned into a youth campus after it was released? ? ? If you are already the owner of a company with 5,000 people, why should you organize a student union and run for class cadres? ? ? ? Has the author changed? ? ? ?

Very well written, keep up the good work

If you continue to write like this to help his father develop the company but the shares are with his father, there will definitely be a bloody family ethics drama. After the company becomes bigger, the foreign brothers will know about it and will definitely come back to compete for shares. Such a huge benefit. Others have inheritance rights. It will definitely be difficult for his father to do it by then, but the shares will definitely be distributed to his other son.

The protagonist is so mentally retarded. He treated his brother like this after being reborn. There must be reasons for the adults to separate. He still acts like a child.

The uncomfortable part at the beginning is that this book will have negative reviews. In fact, you can delete it if you don't read it. But you can't understand the negative reviews. New authors must be given time to hone their skills.

All I can say is that this want-it-all model is over. After all, antitrust doesn't come out of nowhere. What you wrote makes people think of antitrust very easily, so I stopped reading.

I can't understand these twins at all. What's the use?

I found that all the novels written by Jay Chou fans are not good, they are all kinds of weird and illogical.

The beginning is very good, I have the desire to read on, the author, please give it a try! Don't abandon your manuscript! 😡

After reading Chapter 39, I couldn't stand it anymore. The pace was fast and the logic didn't make sense.

Twin brothers, what should they do if they make the wrong mistake?

The logic doesn't make sense! ! ! Running account! ! !

I recommend the new book "Civilization Template" Brand-new creativity is not rebirth, but better than rebirth. The story takes place on the banks of the Songhua River in 1986. With the help of AI, Chen Quan experienced junior high school mathematics leagues and Olympiads, and reached the pinnacle of his life. After college, he entered the fields of semiconductors, physics, measurement, display and other fields and became a world-renowned scholar

Such a mature writer cannot be a newcomer, but he only has one work. Do you know the author's other works? IntroductionIntroduction

Funny! What are the faces of a bunch of prostitutes?

Now whenever I see school articles, I get annoyed and leave.

The first three chapters were a bit unbearable, they were too bland. It cannot be said that the school had a bad start, but that the urban novel school had a too homogeneous start. For someone like me who has read hundreds of novels, most of them urban, there is no novelty anymore. Now when I look at the beginning and then look at the table of contents, I can tell the general plot of the first few dozen chapters and how it is written. It looks so boring.

Pig's feet was in a car accident and fell into coma. The twin brothers can help take care of him. After waking up, he found that his face had been changed and began to take revenge. During this period, the heroines discovered that they fell in love with the male protagonist after the face change, and helped the male protagonist overthrow the twin brother. Finally, the hero told the heroines that the fact that his face had been changed was that it was his brother who had just reversed the situation. The heroines finally let go of their burdens and lived happily with the male protagonist after the face change.

It's hard to imagine that the protagonist still has the energy to do this and that in school.

I hope the author can strengthen the description of details and the rationality of the plot to make the story fuller.

The author's naming is really frustrating

Recommended new book "Civilization Template" It is not time travel, not rebirth, and not systematic, but it combines all the advantages of the above types. In general, it can be regarded as a science and technology article + a science fiction article + a suspense article. Other innovations are also used in the text, such as apocalyptic memory. Only the unknown is wonderful. The story takes place on the banks of the Songhua River in 1986. With the help of AI, the protagonist Chen Quan moves towards glory. Please collect, recommend, and test poison.

I just want to see how Rencube develops and what kind of business it can develop.

It was written in a mess, what the hell, after reading a few chapters, I was immediately persuaded to quit.

It was written in a mess, what the hell, after reading a few chapters, I was immediately persuaded to quit.

This is a mess, eunuch!

I don't know why I don't have a sense of immersion, and I feel dissatisfied with the popular urban Internet business articles.