Become a Savior from the Age of Ice and Steam

This is your first world, and you wrote it in a fancy way, adding everything into it? Don't you feel confused yourself? Are you enjoying yourself? In the first world, you can just add one if you think about it. Inexplicably, the background boss is thrown in, and the evil god is also thrown in. Add an ancient dragon, a war hammer, and a dark soul. Don't you think it's outrageous?

After playing Ice Age, I wanted to throw those unruly people into the heating tower and burn them as coal. I was so angry!

When I saw the Ice Steam Age coming in, I felt helpless and confused... I really wish that every world could only tell the story of this world.

Voting ends! Billions of zombies were overwhelmingly selected... The ending of the Ice Age world will be updated on the 24th of this month, and two readers will be drawn to receive a Steam Ice Age activation code. Above, thank you for your company. This is the first time for the author to publish a book. Maybe he is too self-indulgent. He is also aware of the problem. He is working hard to make progress in the second world!

I hope that the author has really played Ice and Steam Age seriously, and is not some idiot who criticizes unruly people regardless of the profound connotation of this game. (steam game time: 154 hours) (all achievements unlocked)

The painting styles of Ice Steam and Dark Souls are so different that it feels weird to write them together.

It gave me a headache, especially for someone who has never played other games except Ice Age. In the book, there is always an unknowable existence on the left and a great existence in the unknown abyss on the right. It makes me feel like the protagonist is an old farmer. Today the governor came to take a look at him, tomorrow the governor of the Northern Province came to take a look at him, and the day after tomorrow the central inspection team came to take a look at him. Do these people have anything to do with the protagonist? Maybe in the future, but does it have anything to do with him now? Then there is a base car with three letters in the barracks on the left. After the law is over, the game's law is also pushed. It's fresh, Dai Lao. You can't push a law and research a building by yourself.

There are too many backgrounds and everything is messy and messy.

It's very messy, really messy... It's messy with everything.

There are indeed few books on the Ice and Steam Age, so I like it. But this book is written in a mess

I didn't feel that the protagonist became stronger. Instead, there was too much nonsense.

A hundred chapters into the ice vapor era, the world ends. To reiterate: the theme of this book is fire! You can vote for the next world: 1. Dark Souls 3 Lothrik's prosperous period, before Guda became the Judge of Ashes 2. Monster Hunter: World, after the departure of the fifth group, the original village in the Old World 3. League of Legends Ancient Rune Wars 4. Alien Universe, the Homeworld of Engineers 5. Billions of Zombies 6. Spider-Verse X Special Shots (maybe called the Bug Universe)

This book is hard to read without any knowledge, and the ingredients are too complex. It is not recommended for newcomers, and even experienced bookworms should consider it (it's too confusing)

I thought no one wrote about this subject anymore

This chapter of Monster Hunter feels a little out of tune with the tone of this book. After all, the first two chapters are considered to be farming operations, but suddenly they become stand-alone novels. Of course, if the author treats this article as a welfare-type world that provides strength to the protagonist, that would be fine, but please try to reduce the length.

I don't know what you are writing (๑•̌.•̑๑)ˀ̣ˀ̣

The sword comes at the beginning? ? ? ? ? ? Doesn't anyone think it's poisonous?

After reading a hundred chapters, I honestly didn't understand it. Because there are too many worldviews in the background that I don't understand. If there was less background, Chapter 100 would be completely understandable. But there were too many, and in the end I was just confused!

If your novel is about a grand narrative, I hope you can add more foreshadowing. The first world ends after 100 chapters. The first world is too fast and the characters are too one-sided. The performance of the characters is a bit fake. I can only say so much as a reference only.

Is it all worth it?

Following the Age of Ice and Steam, the protagonist has another catastrophic start.

Let's go to the Resident Evil movie version next volume.

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With such multiple worlds, we shouldn't sew things from other worlds together.

Good luck, good luck, this is the first post-apocalyptic world with many elements from other worlds. It's great that it didn't crash.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

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