My Blind Date Is a Reborn Person

It's pretty good, but I haven't written about the love Shura scene yet... The other two buddies hope not to write about it. They don't mention their goddess's relationship with the opposite sex. They can just be passers-by.

Did the author change, or did he not want to write it anymore? What do you want to explain by posting these every day? Let someone else write a book?

Does anyone really call a girl "girl"?

It is recommended that the author take a closer look at his own plot structure. Although this is an online article, can you tell the story more clearly? Before one incident is resolved, another incident appears. Real life may be like this, things always come to you in piles, but this is a novel! If you want to talk about a beginning and a transition, you must have the arc of the characters, and there must be emotional resonance and explosion. You suddenly insert another event in the middle of telling a story, and the length of each event is very short, causing the characters' emotions to appear very abrupt and the plot to be very incoherent. No matter how many girls you write about the protagonist, what's the use? It would be better to tell each girl's story completely and clearly, and to clarify the emotional changes of the characters. Especially the plot of saving my childhood sweetheart, I couldn't stand it until halfway through. The whole plot is inexplicable, with a lot of new characters inserted in the middle, and an incomprehensible dog-finding plot. The solution to the incident has always been the Riddler from beginning to end. The heroine has obviously traveled through time. Doesn't she need to explain things clearly to the hero? Does being the Riddler help solve the problem? You might say that this is to leave readers with suspense. But my impression is that I don't understand what is going on. Qingmei has become an artificial intelligence and needs to be rescued in the game. So how to save her? This key question has never been answered. One or two chapters can be tolerated, and four or five chapters can be tolerated. From the beginning of more than 40 chapters to more than 80 chapters, it is still not mentioned. It's really a bit unbearable. To put it bluntly, the story is not told clearly. The motivations of the characters are unclear, the goals are unclear, and the methods to achieve the goals are also unclear. I really can't stand it anymore after seeing this point tonight, so I'll leave a comment and let's finish watching this episode tomorrow. If it continues to be like this, I might give it up.

The writing style is a bit immature, please do your best, author, I hope it doesn't collapse.

Maybe there's something wrong with me. Anyway, I think body swapping is a poisonous point, even though it's only for one day.

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A slave from another world suddenly appears in his room

I'm confused. It's the first time I've read a book in a long time.

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