Family Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from the Ancestor of Jindan

Defeat the sky, the earth, the air! Kill passers-by at will. Others trade resources with you and kill them. If there is no protagonist like Goldfinger, he should be killed by others. Otherwise, it is unreasonable. If you encounter someone with a higher level than you, you can kill him casually.

I hope you don't ruin the character. This protagonist seems to have two lives. The first one is a cultivator, and the second one is doing everything possible to become an immortal, even if it is estimated that he will kill all the human race. At this moment, it is easy to have things that ruin the character, such as being too fond of the family. You need to understand the family's intentions. Righteousness is for the protagonist to become an immortal. If he is no longer useful, he can be thrown away like garbage. Never destroy the character. The most feared thing in novels is the destruction of the character. Then this Taoist couple. I wonder why people today understand them as wives. This Taoist couple should have appeared in the prehistoric era first, right? People who have lived for thousands of epochs may find that their only joy is to become enlightened. Are you telling them to marry a wife first? Are you mentally ill? How difficult is it to become an immortal? Do you still have time to go to your wife and take care of the house? I don't understand the basic logic. I feel that this Taoist couple is the most useless among the Dharma and Wealth couples. You can't expect that if no one talks to you about Taoism, you won't be able to achieve Taoism? Or is it that if you don't have brothers or relatives and friends, you're just a loser? But without these immortal cultivators, you're pretty stupid.

This is the feeling, a bit like the protagonist in the later stage of the novel written by "Go away".

It's not necessary to start talking about fan value after only a few dozen chapters. Although there will be fewer trolls, there will also be fewer comments and the popularity will be much less. It is recommended that 1 fan value is enough to speak. The trolls will not be given out even 1 starting point coin. This can effectively block trolls and passers-by will speak a lot more.

The writing is quite good, but there is a problem, a big problem, that is, every battle scene is dragged out, and the battle is not resolved simply. It can be understood when the weak fights the strong, but when you are obviously stronger than others, can't you just do it simply? Don't every Jindan real person describe all its magical powers. Once or twice, it seems exciting and shows that the protagonist's fighting IQ is high enough, but it becomes annoying every time, and it is not crisp at all.

It's so interesting, it's really good-looking, much better than those Madonna and retarded novels

The protagonist is exposed, but the author suppresses it, which makes me speechless. This kind of writing is not as good as not writing a good article. The fighting scenes are dragging from the beginning. Each time there is a huge advantage, it takes a long time. I don't know what to think. The core family is basically not of much help to the protagonist and is holding back the protagonist. There are various rebellious spies in the family. . . . .

Although this book also has some shortcomings, overall it is indeed quite good, but the results may indeed be unsatisfactory. This is not just the author's fault. This is a common problem with this type of novel, and the early results are not good. Just like your similar profit-oriented immortality novels, Immortal Mansion Changsheng and Haoyu True Immortal, which have relatively good results now, had very poor results in the early stage. The monthly votes were often outside the top 1,000, but now the results are good, especially Haoyu True Immortal. Basically, their grades only get better when they are close to 1 million words. So if the author hopes that this book will become popular immediately, it will be very difficult. If the number of words in this kind of fairy tale is too small, generally people will not want to read it. Also, if you want to get good grades, you don't just need to have more words. For example, Haoyu Zhenxian has many book friends who recommend it in the comment area of ​​the same category of immortality articles. Updates should preferably be stable. It is not acceptable to update from time to time, as this will easily lead to losing subscriptions. (The author of Immortal Mansion I am pursuing is also part-time. It is updated at 12 o'clock in the evening. Of course, the key to this division depends on whether your body can bear it) Don't neglect your own job. I have also seen situations where the novel is not popular and the job is gone. The above is just my personal opinion and may not be correct. If there are any mistakes, you can point them out. (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's quite good. The family cultivating immortality has passed its peak period, and now that it has settled down, there are novels that make people's eyes shine. Although there are only two chapters, the content of the article and the writing style are very good among newcomers. Liangcao is worth a try!

It's not my fault, it's the world's fault. I kill anyone I see who is unhappy and do whatever I want. That's how I feel.

This is quite suitable.

Well written, very strong, let's go now

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Pig's feet can be shaped well, like an ancestor

When will you start a new book? Please call me when you finish the book. Remember to kill decisively. I will definitely subscribe.

The writing is quite good, but the author must not be a eunuch.

If a new author wants to be famous and make more money at the beginning, I personally feel that the number of words updated every day should not be too few. There are too many authors who write three to four thousand words a day, but there are really not many authors who write 10,000 words a day.

It's so cute, book lovers who like dark literature should read it😊

One sentence. Looks good, the daily detoxification finally has some effect.

Another name change to become a member of the family! Can't you write that there are thousands of Xiu clan members in your tribe?

There has never been a cultivation novel about the character of this old devil. Those who are not interested in watching novice cultivators or those who unexpectedly embark on the path of cultivating immortals, but want to watch cautious mortals like Lao Mo cultivating immortals, can't get enough of watching them every day 😢

Can you write it without any trivial details? It's really watery, with a lot of nonsense and narration. Keep it up. I'll read it when I'm interested.

Why did the finale suddenly happen? I thought that after upgrading Yuanying, I would open a new map and go to land.

Are you kidding me, just this Taoist couple? If you use it, Taoist companions will be free of charge.

Now he starts to feel unhappy again, and suppresses the protagonist. I always talk a lot of nonsense and then develop a magical power of rebirth. Every time I go to Jinshan Dan Peak, I have to be reborn again. I estimate that this idea will be successful 80% of the time. The current plot is not as good as the previous one. You might as well start with Qi training. Now you are starting from scratch.

I feel that the words and sentences are not refined enough, and the description is a bit long-winded. However, the character of Tsukihime really hit my strike zone. This type of heroine is too rare.

Subscribed for 1,200, kept it, died? As expected, the update is a flaw

This book is great, come on, author!

I have almost forgotten the plot 😰 Hey, when did I read this book? 🙂

Come on, author, I've ordered it all and will continue to subscribe.