I'm in Tokyo, It's Just Old Days

The two young adult novels are almost impossible to read, they are basically harem novels.

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Damn it, the protagonist is not from the past, why is he afraid of mortals?

I feel that the protagonist is very weak, maybe because the time involved in the mystery is too short. Compared with other girls around 17 years old, they are very different. They are all around level 5, and it is really uncomfortable to watch.

Normally, in the Cthulhu system, this should not be the case. When a monster sees the protagonist, the protagonist's sanity drops, and the protagonist begins to resist. The protagonist is an ordinary person and fails to resist. The protagonist is attacked mentally. The monster uses the mental attack to discover the truth about the protagonist hidden under ordinary people. In the old days, when the monster looked directly at the indescribable existence, the monster's sanity returned to zero, and the monster went crazy.

(Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it) After reading the previous chapters, I always felt that it felt very random. The protagonist accepted his strange identity casually, others accepted the male protagonist casually, etc. The identity of the protagonist was briefly explained, but why others accepted the male protagonist was completely unclear. Is it because of the cat's passivity?

After reading a few chapters, the light novel flavor is too strong. Readers who like the genre have somewhat heavy tastes, either with hard-core plots or silly stories... I feel like they are not very suitable for this kind of dry daily love style. Personally, I prefer the chaotic ones. But come on, author.

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The protagonist is too weird. He was the only one who was knocked down by hallucinations. Everyone else was fine. He was hallucinated and charmed several times. What's the use of his old identity?

The author's writing is quite good, but the writing is not very good.

It's not bad. To put it bluntly, it doesn't feel compact and streamlined. It's a bit stitched together. The theme is not clear. What exactly is explained about killing monsters and upgrading? Make money to buy engravings? System flow? It feels a bit confusing. If that doesn't work, don't write about one incident or the past of each incident.

I really like this theme, and the main character is from the old days, but at the beginning, holding someone's foot, eh, the other person felt comfortable stepping on their hands to sweat, eh? ? ? Well? ? ? ? ? ?

It's pretty good. It's rare to see a p5 world view.

😭😭P5 Ah, rare and precious animals. I felt good after watching it, but I felt that the results were quite poor. When did it happen🕊️

The system harvests good wool, cultivates an old world personally, and then takes back the capital with profits to obtain a large amount of resources, and then keeps the protagonist's soul seeds and starts sowing them again next year.