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I'm speechless. Just send your own genius to an almost hostile force when laying the foundation in the early stage, and make him look like a proton. Are you not afraid of the other party's evil intentions? In order to promote the plot, you don't care about anything? If we continue like this, no matter how many geniuses we have, they won't be enough, right?

In your setting, Dongtian is a latitude. Is that latitude a parallel world or something? I never figured it out after watching the movie. If what you call Dongtian is a separate universe, how do you define a parallel universe?

Haha, let me tell you a joke: Immortals who can rub alien gods on the ground, refine the way of heaven, and even travel across the multiverse, don't even know how to make bows and arrows, or how to grow grains 😆

Cultivation technology exploded and developed in batches. This shows that the enemy is also strong enough to bubble. It may be the Western Protoss, or it may be an alien civilization. Cultivating Qi has great weaknesses in the early stages, such as the body and the soul. Although he is a hexagonal warrior, cultivating various arts is not easy.

After seeing Pokémon and One Piece, I have no desire to continue reading.

What is this written about? Such a good beginning was written in vain. I thought I had found another book that I could read, but then I traveled to Pokémon, and the pirates were confused, and it was a different latitude, which was awesome. It's because it's hard to write about cultivating immortals, or there's nothing else besides Japanese comics.

You might as well write about a multiverse, with as many planes as stars, with the main universe as the center

Fuck your Japanese comics

How do you divide the dormitories according to age or something else? You have to write clearly.

The beginning was good, but it fell apart after Chapter 10, especially Chapters 13 and 14. On the one hand, it was written about childish resistance, and it was also said that if you don't resist now, your mind may change later, but then won't what you actually do remain the same? Is it any different from the other person's proposal to come back and solve it after getting stronger?

It feels okay, a monthly pass~

Can the author not continue writing without a system?

What do you want to write about? The world of cultivation and Hogwarts, a great fusion? I wanted to watch Marvel, but it was a mess

Is there an opportunity for the Four Saints and Ten Philosophers of the Martial Arts Temple to compete with each other? I don't know who is more powerful! In the future, if you have the opportunity, you can meet those outstanding people in history. The First Emperor may not be able to see him because of his identity, but there should still be opportunities to listen to the lectures of various scholars.

When I saw the school plot, it would be appropriate to set the school plot in college, and high school would be okay, but if the setting is for a six-year-old child, and the protagonist is a reborn child, that would be no problem. Everyone looks like a reborn child. I don't know if that's a problem? This subject matter is good, but the author's writing is too inconsistent. When I think about the students in this university campus life, they are all six-year-old children, and I feel that nothing is right. If the author wants to write this, why does he need to set it to six years old? Isn't it okay to start directly as a college student? High school students can do it too. But you are writing about children who have just graduated from kindergarten, but you are acting like a college student. This cannot be explained by maturity.

Can the protagonist bring a bit of modern war thinking to his subordinates when he is fighting in another world? Machine gun and artillery fire coverage. Taking into account the logistics issues, it is okay to get some heavy artillery to hit key nodes. Then what about air power, reconnaissance, positioning, bombing and beheading. It is not used for world problems. Spell version of drones will also work. Unrestricted warfare methods such as land mines and roadside bombs can damage the enemy's morale, as well as beyond visual range strikes.

Come on, if you don't have a monthly ticket, I'll give you three recommendation votes.