I Want to Be a General in the Qin Dynasty

If you don't pay for writing such a big IP, why don't you just watch the drama a few times? Who the hell is still here to watch you explain the plot?

There are many things in this book that are abrupt, illogical, and look awkward. You can tell by looking at it that the author is inexperienced and new to the industry. It can be said that in the eyes of the veteran author and old bookworm, there are a lot of things that need to be revised and improved in the first ten chapters alone. They are still far away from the passing line. But I can still read it. Let's see how far the book can go.

I just want to know what the state of mind was like when writing about the Qin Dynasty. After Shang Yang's reform was completely completed, the general trend of the Qin State could no longer be stopped. If you don't join the Qin State or wander around in Tianzong, you are not afraid of being overturned during the unification of the Qin State, right? They all like to go to Korea. Korea has organic Is it possible? Just a purple girl. How long have you been single? You can't walk when you see a woman, right? Look, Ying Zheng doesn't even have to go out. There are many beauties coming to your door. From ancient times to the present, power is the first element. If you can pick up others, you can't pick them down. As long as you have power, you don't have anything.

Personally, the author's magic changes are starting to fall apart. The originally good-for-nothing woman Zhao Ji was made to be so strong, and yet she was restrained by pig's feet at every turn. The more I look at it, the more unhappy I feel. Mo Gai is not just a random change🤮🤮

Many authors choose to start with Baby Fish. The parent-child package is so delicious 🙂

Frightened Salamander, Purple Girl, a must. 🙂 If you don't want the book Zi Nu, you really have to give up. If you don't want Yan Lingji, you have to accept Zi Nu 🙂

It's a lot unreasonable. The platoon leader died in the river. It is reasonable for you to die with military food in your backpack. It's unreasonable to bring sweet potatoes and sweet potatoes 🍠. I said why don't you take out your cell phone and lighter. Grenades. Smoke bombs. Flashbang. Sniper rifle. I want to know what tasks you did when traveling through time that required you to bring sweet potatoes🍠. 😰 I hope it doesn't appear again later.

husband and son

There are no negative reviews from Xiaomeng. Do you know why I like Master Xiaomeng so much... It's because Xiaomeng has no national enemies, no family hatred, no love, no hatred, no so-called dislikes and likes. The success of the container cup can be said to be the best among the best.

What kind of operation is it to go to South Korea to become an officer in order to join the Qin Kingdom? Is it because Ying Zheng will come to South Korea? Don't be kidding. Wouldn't it be better not to go directly to the Qin Kingdom? Just say that the author wants the protagonist to have been to the plot of Tianxing Jiuge, so there is no need to start and don't say that he is going to the Qin Kingdom.

It's so embarrassing. First, I didn't learn to swim, and then I learned how to swim. So my water skills are good, so do I know how to swim? Or the word "water" was nonsense in the previous sentence.

Can anyone come and kick this protagonist? That's great. If Zhao Ji had a brain, things like Lao Ai wouldn't happen. Moreover, if you write beautifully, you can show what kind of brain Zhao Ji has. The protagonist is so scared that it's inexplicable. It feels like the time traveler is only ashamed of Yi Xiaochuan's virtue.

Why do Jiu Ge like to be Aman and collect the startling salamander? I think the most beautiful one in Jiu Ge is Mrs. Pearl

Jing Salamander: I still can't figure out why there are so many takers rushing to lick a killer who is pregnant due to a mission.

Lady

Now that Li Kai has appeared, Han Wangan is already the King of Han. What is Chapter 23 about? It's planning for the treasure of Huoyu Villa, it's for ascending to the throne, it's Li Kai, it's so chaotic

Don't want! Bundle! Ayan! And! Han Xin! Make a pair!

The protagonist went to Qin and was supposed to show off his talents. As a result, I became more and more frustrated and humbled.