A Monk in the Hokage World: Dizang

People become famous detectives under the Hokage, Japan's feudal daimyo system.

If you say this is a Conan fan, I believe it

The setting of national luck canceling out illusions is too outrageous. The national luck of a castle lord's chef can cancel out the protagonist's illusions. So how does Danzo control the daimyo?

After catching up on the latest chapter, you can see that a more realistic world of Naruto is slowly unfolding. The author is very ambitious. He is trying to build a real Naruto world. What is different from the original work is that there are ninjas, civilians, samurai and bureaucrats in this world. They live in the same world as ninjas, influence ninjas, and are influenced by ninjas. They are no longer the background panels of the original comics. The world of ninjas and the world of ordinary people are integrated in the book. So I said that the author is very ambitious. He is building a sandbox world called Naruto. The protagonist is his chess piece and his eyes. Judging from this point alone, the protagonist still has ideas. However, if I add a but here, this kind of slowly unfolding writing method, this kind of writing method full of historical significance, has extremely high requirements for plot and writing style. And this is fan fiction, not historical fiction. This way of writing means that the pace is slow, the upgrade is slow, and it is difficult to find a sufficient audience. Just like the first volume of this book, the author spends a lot of space describing a case that happened in the Daiming Mansion of the Country of Fire. From point to point, he is actually introducing the prosperity of the capital of the Country of Fire, the official structure of the Country of Fire, the accumulated internal conflicts, and the contrast between the bottom and the top when the Third World War came. These can be said to be Naruto, but they have nothing to do with Naruto. They can be said to be a historical text about the Japanese shogunate, but there is no big difference. Anyway, they just don't match the style of the original hot-blooded comics. I'm afraid it will be difficult to find a suitable audience. Of course, this is a matter of style, but other than that, this book is quite interesting. For example, the foreshadowing laid down in the first volume is revealed again in the second volume. Some ninjutsu and moves in the original work have also been expanded upon. In general, the author is sincere and ambitious, but it is a pity that he did not choose the topic well. I hope that after finishing this book, the author can publish a novel more suitable for this style.

It's a pity that I don't like the protagonist of the bald donkey monk, and I don't like Buddhism. No matter how the ancient Confucian and Taoist masters in my country revise and tamper with it to localize it, they still can't change the nature of the Buddha who is a demon. He deceives, fools, attracts all living beings to feed himself, is sophistry, and packages it in a high-level way, but it can't change its nature.

Am I reading a detective novel? A lot of space is spent on being a detective and screening readers, right? It's inexplicable, a Naruto fan is doing some shitty detective work.

It's boring. You're already a deserter. Why not take this opportunity to leave the ninja profession? Isn't this just changing your skin and continuing to be a ninja?

? ? ? Is this really written by a Naruto fan? Not to mention the long-winded plot of solving the case. It takes more than ten minutes to defeat a passerby samurai. I wasted for a long time and was speechless. I really missed the point.

Investigating crimes is okay in the middle of writing, but you have to figure out what the readers expect from the content when they see the name and introduction of the book. In fact, the beginning of the book was pretty good, but from the twenty-something chapters onwards, it started to involve dozens of chapters with incorrect writing and detective work, and the writing was not interesting. You personally feel that this book is a long one, and it will get better later, but we readers came in because of your title and introduction. I ordered sweet and sour pork ribs and you served me a big pork knuckle. I told you that the food you served was wrong. You said that the big pork knuckle is delicious. Do you think readers will buy it?

Naruto's introduction of DND monks makes people full of expectations. The first investigation makes people irritated. If the story is told at the same pace later, it will make people feel that there is no priority. Anyway, it is a bit disappointing.