A Monk in the Hokage World: Dizang
人在火影，武僧地藏
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 975k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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423Chapters
5.1kRecommendations
21.3kFans
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A detective living in the world of Naruto, within the feudal daimyo system of Japan.
I'd believe you if you said this was Conan fanfiction.
The idea that national fortune can negate illusions is too outrageous. If the national fortune of a castle lord's chef can negate the protagonist's illusions, then how did Danzo control the daimyo?
Long Review - An Ambitious Fanfiction
Having caught up to the latest chapter, one can see that a relatively realistic Naruto world is slowly unfolding. The author is very ambitious; he is trying to build a realistic Naruto world that differs from the original work. In this world, there are ninjas, commoners, samurai, and bureaucrats. They lived in the same world as the ninjas, influencing them and being influenced by them in turn.
Unfortunately, I have no liking for the bald monk protagonist, nor do I like Buddhism. No matter how much ancient Confucian and Taoist masters have interpreted and localized Buddhism, they cannot change the fact that Buddhism is essentially a demon—deceiving, fooling, exploiting sentient beings for sustenance, using sophistry, and no matter how lofty its packaging, its true nature remains unchanged.
Am I reading a detective novel? A huge portion of the story is about me being a detective, basically filtering readers, right? This is ridiculous! What kind of detective work is this Naruto fanfiction?
It's pointless. Since you've already deserted, why not take this opportunity to leave the ninja profession? This is just changing your skin and continuing to be a ninja.
Is this really Naruto fanfiction? The drawn-out crime-solving plot goes on and on, but even fighting a random samurai takes over ten minutes. It's just filler, completely missing the point.
Writing about crime investigations in the middle stages is fine, but you need to understand what readers expect from the book's title and synopsis. The beginning was actually quite good, but from chapter 20-something onwards, dozens of chapters became unrelated to the story, focusing on a detective plot that wasn't engaging.
The introduction of D&D monks into Naruto was exciting, but the first detective story was frustrating. If the story continues at this pace, it feels like the main plot is lost, which is a bit disappointing.