I Can Make Gaming Equipment

It doesn't matter if the writing is bad, but you must have a correct outlook on things. Just start stealing directly, even if it is your own parents' money, you will resolutely abandon this kind of rubbish.

It is recommended to run away after reading the free chapters. After the 5th chapter of the paid chapters, the poisons, such as Mary's poison, price poison, social system poison, and relationship poison will begin.

How should I put it? It feels like shit-flavored chocolate wrapped in an old lady's footcloth, an essay written by a primary school student, because the number of words is not enough to write a sentence, and there are ten detours. I can only take a look at one side, which makes me feel uncomfortable if I look at it too much. If I don't look at it, I don't know what is written. The dry food inside is like rice in thin soup. Although I feel that the writing is not meaningless. If you don't use your brain, you can still watch it. When the mind is empty, it is impossible to pay attention to details. It looked good before it was put on the shelves. I ordered 100 copies and found that it was watery. Reading this book made me feel like I had eaten a biscuit with a mouthful of phlegm on it. I listen to books. After listening for a long time, I found that I was still talking about the college entrance examination. If written in this way, this book would cost tens of thousands of dollars? It cannot be said that there is water in the article. I can only say that there are one or two articles in the water. To be honest, I really liked the part before it was released. Until the college entrance examination. Wow, that really is it. I want to complain, but I don't know how much to complain about. If you talk dryly, you will feel uncomfortable, but if you don't complain, you will feel uncomfortable in your heart. There are also many places where the previous text and the following text do not match. I don't want to talk anymore.

Very good idea, poorly written

Funny and stupid are two different things. The introduction, the beginning, the golden finger... All obviously have the potential to be popular, but they do all kinds of stupid things, just take the book down the sewer!

It's like this again. Before the protagonist wakes up, the highest city lord of level 7 is the biggest boss, the lord of the city. When the protagonist wakes up, any cannon fodder who comes as a soldier to do odd jobs will be level 6 or 7.

Is the author a newbie? If you are a newbie, I advise you to write according to your own ideas. I think this subject matter is quite interesting, but not all the opinions provided by readers can be adopted. For example, readers remind you which piece of equipment is very good. It doesn't matter if you write these, but don't worry about the ones that guide you to change the plot outline! ! ! This is very important. You are the author, and the book is written by you. In the end, no matter whether it is good or bad, at least it is your work. If it is controlled by readers, in the end, the book will only become a strange and sutured monster! ! There are many new authors who don't know this, and what they write in the end is simply inconsistent, to the point of being permanently punished... Of course, if you have never been affected, just pretend you haven't seen this comment. I'm just a bookworm, and I found your work and found it quite interesting. I don't want you to enter the palace or "go astray" (the serious one, I have been facing the wall for ten years if I want to be crooked), so I would like to give you a kind reminder ~

I thought the protagonist made the equipment himself, but it turned out to be junk that was synthesized by the system.

The plot and the main character's IQ are unsightly.

The author of Seven Points loves to be anti-intellectual! I can't understand the simplest logic! Adjust normal cognition!

The setting is still unreasonable. The elder sister can afford hundreds of millions, but the younger brother only has that little money? Tens of thousands would be enough to kill you! Obviously unreasonable setting! I don't know what to think!

It has a strong familiar flavor, this book won't go far

When I saw that the three o'clock medicine was sold for 10,000 yuan, I knew what the inflation would be like in the future. After looking at it, it turned out that it was just after the college entrance examination. It was worth tens of billions. This value was so messed up that I was speechless.

The subject matter is very good, but the author's writing skills are really poor.

Do you still want people to subscribe to your novel, which is poisonous as soon as it is put on the shelves? Farewell.

Even though prices have plummeted, I still like to write non-stop. I can't stand it.

When Chen Ping was kidnapped, I felt like he was really feeding me. I just couldn't figure it out. It was well written before. It's not that you can't look at headwinds, but what about your IQ? There's no reason why I'm posting a short review, just this paragraph

What a fucking retard, what a garbage time traveler

Let's talk about the shortcomings of the first half of the first chapter Lie down! Everything is ordinary and he just lies down. This is really a rare protagonist. Writing like this basically ends up being a eunuch. The system settings are unreasonable. The introduction is a+b=c. If you pick up an old kitchen knife, it will be directly turned into a new weapon without consumption. This shows that this system really can synthesize materials without consumption. There will be a big pit behind it! Mom's setting, your mother is actually a man! Actually, I only read half a chapter! Then there was a lot of crying in the comment area, hey, if you are a newbie... I have nothing to say, so let's leave it at that!

The writing style of this book jumps back and forth, repeatedly selecting readers. It seems that the author thinks he has too many readers. In the early stage, the protagonist is obviously a selfish villain who succeeds. Many readers who are disgusted with the character have left. At this time, the remaining readers are those who can accept the selfish character (after all, if people do not serve themselves, they will be destroyed by heaven and earth) What follows is illogical There has been a big reversal, and she has directly become a Madonna-type personality. This is not to say that Madonna is not good, but you have obviously disgusted the remaining readers in the previous batch. Selfishness and Madonna are naturally opposites. Selfish people hope to be surrounded by Madonnas, but they can never become Madonnas themselves. Not to mention the chaotic performance of prices and combat power in the book (this is still a small matter, after all, it doesn't matter if you don't go into it deeply) The most serious thing is the reduction of intelligence. It is unbearable for the protagonist to become more and more stupid. The protagonist in your book has not hurt his brain, so why is he getting more and more stupid?

Also, the author can actually start thinking about controlling reviews, otherwise it would be bad to scare away new readers. You have the final say in your comments section. It is better to delete those unconstructive insults directly.

The setting is so unpleasant, this golden finger looks disgusting

Alas, when I wrote about the invasion of alien races, I started to get confused, and I started to go towards the harem, which was a bit like that.

The level rose too fast in the early stage and collapsed in the later stage. And I guess the author didn't want to write it well. It's a pity that there is a better subject matter. There are still many games that can be written.

Chapter 216 What the hell? There may be scenes between them in your novel, but from the perspective of the protagonist, they are just two passers-by, right? Are you looking for a ghostwriter? What the hell? I can't stand it anymore. You can do whatever you want, but I can't stand it anyway.

Why is such a beautiful book not beautiful? Full order for extra refinement

The pacing was chaotic in the early stage. The pace is so fast now. Is it about to end?

I hope the author can start a new book with this subject, make a good outline, and don't believe what is in the book reviews. At least the writing style is above average among the many authors I have seen. The subject matter is really good, reshaping the world view, and describing a diverse, exciting and novel world (emphasis added). This has always been the expectation of readers. Based on this, we can develop the story of the protagonist and show readers a character with rich emotions (each character is not a silly NPC, they have their own ideals, goals, and stories). The above suggestions are just what a little bookworm spent more than 10 minutes writing for the author. I don't know if he is a professional or not. I hope Brother Dao's next book will be a hit. I also read the new book, but it always felt a bit boring and gave up after reading more than 70 chapters. Personally, I still like the grand world view and novel and colorful stories. Shuangwen is really hard to swallow. I can only say that Shuangwen does suit most people's tastes.

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