Forging Soldiers for All: Create Resurrection Armor at the Beginning

It's a pity. It started out well, but then it became the same.

To be honest, I was a little angry. I think the subject matter is quite interesting, but the writing is a pity. After seeing the chapter in the hospital, I felt that the setting was a bit crazy. In this hospital, treatment requires mysterious weapons, and doctors have become tools for binding mysterious weapons. So I don't think there is any need for the hospital to exist. Not to mention one person (like the disposable ones used by the hospital before), as long as there is something valuable that can cure diseases and save lives, don't you prepare some for yourself? As the article says, the main character's teacher will not survive if he is ten minutes late. Do you really want to save your life and save money? Then in terms of character design, the protagonist's IQ fluctuates between high and low. One moment he looks like a novice who doesn't understand anything, and the next moment he looks like a business tycoon who knows how to control the hospital. I like this kind of book with novel themes. It's interesting to read, but brother, don't be so messy. It doesn't matter if the theme is new or the story is old. You have to explain things clearly and smooth out the plot. The story and character settings are to serve the plot. You can't just add whatever settings come to mind for the plot.

It was a failure. It was supposed to be a very creative book. Unfortunately, some people were so unsatisfied that they failed to highlight the parts that should be highlighted and wrote a few chapters of nonsense. This turned it into a failure.

Even those who copy Tomato can't understand it, I'm really convinced

I feel like what the author is writing now is a bit unprofessional. All the people are forging soldiers, and now they are practicing, emphasizing personal strength. What does it have to do with casting? Of course, making good weapons requires strength, so there is no need to write in such detail about improving strength. Returning sword power, sword intent, etc., It is better to make more other equipment with special effects, and there is no need to keep making swords, other accessories, and armor. Now forging feels secondary.

Very good, it must have been a big hit ten years ago, or even five years ago. Now everyone can just jump and read it. It must be the kind of thing that can be read at a glance. Just look at the creativity. The author successfully made me relive the fantasy classic.

There are so many pretending to be slapped in the face that I've read too much and I'm bored. The good thing is that there are no four words, although, but. As for me, there are 2,000 words in a chapter of this book, but there are 80 buts, which makes me want to vomit and I can't stand it anymore! This book doesn't have that much! ! ! It's a pity that it's just pretending to slap someone in the face! Otherwise, I can still watch it!

Don't you mean to create resurrection armor at the beginning? Why does the chapter title look like a knife?

The new book is one chapter a day. The author is really confident.

It's been over a hundred chapters, and the pig's feet are still sitting in the school, cutting leeks. The worldview has always been about refining weapons and practicing. As for why we need to refine weapons and practice, we haven't mentioned a word yet. The bullshit of pig's feet and all kinds of awesome weapon refining are still just for self-entertainment, and are still useless to the world.

The creativity is nice, but the book is written like a white text, often forced to show off, and has a lot of retarded dialogue.

The city is full of B equipment, no danger, selfish, copying weapons, no skills, why should I buy all the chapters and poor coins?

I ordered twenty chapters and finished it in just a few minutes. It's not a book I wanted to read about refining weapons and affecting the overall situation. Basically, there is no way around the cultivation of Long Aotian, and there are several poisonous points that persuade me to quit. Good luck to the author.

The world view of the map is too small. It feels a bit boring to stay on the earth and pretend to be in the academy all day long. There is no pattern, nothing new, and it is easy to get tired. The pretense of the earth should have stopped in middle school. Now all the plots revolve around pretending in public, gambling, and reversals. You don't have to watch it to know what is going on.

I'm convinced, it's so annoying.

I haven't finished copying tomatoes yet, it's too boring.

There is a very simple poisonous point. The protagonist obviously knew that his family was facing financial difficulties and planned to solve the problem, so he designed and built rare equipment. However, because it was the first time, he was reluctant to use it himself, and did not sell it to subsidize the family as planned. So here's the question, there seems to be no limit to only designing one picture and building one piece of equipment at the same time. The protagonist can obviously do it, so why would he?

The subject matter is good and the idea is good. But at the beginning, your civilian salary will be too little. . . . One or two hundred monthly salary and then someone else lends the protagonist's family more than 10,000 per person's salary for several years.

The beginning is well written, but the more you write later, the more exaggerated it becomes. Come on, it's interesting to read when it's not on the shelves. But when you read it later, it makes you look like a primary school student.

The whole people are forging soldiers,,, who is going to farm, who is going to herd, who is going to do business, transporting goods, who is going to manage the city, all the people are going to forge soldiers, how does society work, and do races still exist?,,

The more I read, the more no one reads it. Should the author reflect on this?

Like the previous book, the idea is good, but the more I write, the worse it gets. I don't even bother to read it later, it's a waste of money.

The 60-second resurrection time of the resurrection armor is too buggy! The assassin is immediately unemployed!

A happy male protagonist with absolutely no setbacks and no villains

I feel that the combat power settings are broken. The pig's feet have a combat power of 60,000 or 70,000. I didn't mention the defense. The defense value added by the armor is only more than 100. The regular combat power of each cultivation level is not written out either.

Looking at the introduction, has the author ever thought about creating a transformer? Such as the Emperor's Armor

The simplest currency system is to design two sets of currencies, just like spiritual stones and gold and silver.

It's nice to read, but it doesn't feel immersive enough, and some parts don't satisfy the author's own worldview that he set for the book.

A large-scale pretentious face-slapping scene, if you like it, you can join it.

The subject matter is good, I look forward to the next batch of novels of this type