I Can Craft Game Gear

It is recommended to run away after reading the free chapters. After the 5th chapter of the paid chapters, the poisons, such as Mary's poison, price poison, social system poison, and relationship poison will begin.

How should I put it? It feels like shit-flavored chocolate wrapped in an old lady's footcloth, an essay written by a primary school student, because the number of words is not enough to write a sentence, and there are ten detours. I can only take a look at one side, which makes me feel uncomfortable if I look at it too much. If I don't look at it, I don't know what is written. The dry food inside is like rice in thin soup. Although I feel that the writing is not meaningless. If you don't use your brain, you can still watch it. When the mind is empty, it is impossible to pay attention to details. It looked good before it was put on the shelves. I ordered 100 copies and found that it was watery. Reading this book made me feel like I had eaten a biscuit with a mouthful of phlegm on it. I listen to books. After listening for a long time, I found that I was still talking about the college entrance examination. If written in this way, this book would cost tens of thousands of dollars? It cannot be said that there is water in the article. I can only say that there are one or two articles in the water. To be honest, I really liked the part before it was released. Until the college entrance examination. Wow, that really is it. I want to complain, but I don't know how much to complain about. If you talk dryly, you will feel uncomfortable, but if you don't complain, you will feel uncomfortable in your heart. There are also many places where the previous text and the following text do not match. I don't want to talk anymore.

Very good idea, poorly written

Funny and stupid are two different things. The introduction, the beginning, the golden finger... All obviously have the potential to be popular, but they do all kinds of stupid things, just take the book down the sewer!

It's like this again. Before the protagonist wakes up, the highest city lord of level 7 is the biggest boss, the lord of the city. When the protagonist wakes up, any cannon fodder who comes as a soldier to do odd jobs will be level 6 or 7.

Is the author a newbie? If you are a newbie, I advise you to write according to your own ideas. I think this subject matter is quite interesting, but not all the opinions provided by readers can be adopted. For example, readers remind you which piece of equipment is very good. It doesn't matter if you write these, but don't worry about the ones that guide you to change the plot outline! ! ! This is very important. You are the author, and the book is written by you. In the end, no matter whether it is good or bad, at least it is your work. If it is controlled by readers, in the end, the book will only become a strange and sutured monster! ! There are many new authors who don't know this, and what they write in the end is simply inconsistent, to the point of being permanently punished... Of course, if you have never been affected, just pretend you haven't seen this comment. I'm just a bookworm, and I found your work and found it quite interesting. I don't want you to enter the palace or "go astray" (the serious one, I have been facing the wall for ten years if I want to be crooked), so I would like to give you a kind reminder ~

I thought the protagonist made the equipment himself, but it turned out to be junk that was synthesized by the system.

The plot and the main character's IQ are unsightly.

The author of Seven Points loves to be anti-intellectual! I can't understand the simplest logic! Adjust normal cognition!

It doesn't matter if the writing is bad, but you must have a correct outlook on things. Just start stealing directly, even if it is your own parents' money, you will resolutely abandon this kind of rubbish.