Becoming a Voidwalker, Starting with Naruto

It's very well written. It would be great if there was no real world. I would jump directly to the real world.

After being banned for a week, I can finally speak. The opening chapter is extremely brilliant. If he were not an experienced author, the author would be very talented in conceiving the story. Internet articles, like many popular literary and artistic works, are not the most critical in terms of writing style, values, and logic. The most important thing is whether the story is good or not. The opening story amazes me

The writing is really good, and it doesn't look like a newbie. I feel like no one is watching, and I'm afraid it'll be cool

It is strongly recommended not to include Chinese-Japanese words in your articles, such as "Hi", "Sou Ga", etc. It is very embarrassing...

When it comes to Void Walker, isn't your first reaction a bit shameful?

Author, the speed of chakra refining is not the standard for whether you are a genius, it is the quantity. Chakra is not internal power, but divine power. The better your bloodline, the more chakra you will have. It cannot be increased through training. It is almost the same as a template. You will not use it for a second.

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The writing is very solid, but unfortunately it's not my favorite style. It's a bit dull, and the plot progress is too grinding.

It's pretty good to watch, but the character of the protagonist is a bit broken. Didn't I say that he has no emotions before? Did I remember it wrong? The last few chapters feel more and more emotional. It looks a bit like Rimuru from the previous movie.

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