The Big Pirate Starts by Poaching Kaido's Corner

I have read dozens of chapters and made a brief evaluation. The author's writing is good and his pirate knowledge is solid. It is readable and not too toxic. The protagonist is an ordinary person with a powerful Devil Fruit plug-in (Fenir, the phantom beast species). Being from Kaido's pirate group, he has a gentle personality and can skip the early training part. The writing is in the style of light novels, the plot is not passionate, and it is good at writing about daily life. I still like to have goals, dominate, prefer cool articles, and say goodbye.

This book is very good so far. I hope that Pig's Foot will not reach the imperial level when he goes to sea. He will be very strong as the second-in-command like Jhin. I hope it will not become Star Travels like the Impel Down City next door.

A surprising masterpiece among a bunch of pirate fics with blunt emotional scenes Yamato's reputation in the original work was really not good (Oda's fault) and Oda's status as NCF was too much dragged down, but in this book, the protagonist and his emotional scenes, apart from dragging them down, I just couldn't beat it, it's just sweet.

The character creation is very successful, the personality is distinct, and the detailed descriptions give people a beautiful feeling of youthful ignorance and hazy minds of boys and girls.

I have no favorite fanfic. To put it bluntly, it fits the sandy atmosphere of One Piece. The characters are all stand-alone. Everyone's role is consistent with the original work and has their own thoughts. The main theme is comfortable. To put it bluntly, the main theme of One Piece is not to dominate the world. There are other well-written fanfictions about becoming the king and changing the world, but this is not the core of One Piece. Reading this fanfic brought back my first thoughts. The mood I felt when I watched One Piece for the first time. I was sick and on vacation when I watched it for the first time. I was uncomfortable at first, but my thoughts were very comfortable, which alleviated a lot of pain. The yearning for freedom, the protection of friendship, and the struggle for ideals in the early stage of One Piece are generally humorous, but there is no ambiguity when it comes to action, and from time to time, there are two slanderous words that are both good and evil, which make people resonate with the plot. Some people say that this book The plot moves slowly, but just like Pirates, the protagonist group is laughing and joking, and even the daily plot makes people feel comfortable, just like a few old friends on an outing in early spring, the spring breeze is blowing, and the countryside is full of vitality. This is a bit like Hayao Miyazaki's painting style, but this book also has the protagonists bickering with each other, but it cannot make people bored. Like those so-called plots that emphasize upgrades, to put it bluntly, this kind of book can only make people feel bored. It doesn't matter if you skip chapters if you keep caring about the subsequent plot. The plot of this kind of book can be read over and over again. Each character is not a vase of the plot, but everyone has his or her own soul. Yes, everyone in the protagonist group is also constantly growing and finding their own goals. They are all dynamic. The author is really attentive in characterization, and the characters in the book are like walking out of animation.

I've read Chapter 50. I haven't gone to sea yet and I'm still training. The plot is a bit boring!

It's beautiful, especially Weihai in it.

As soon as the Nika Fruit was announced, some scenes were like a joke, such as Ace helping Luffy to block Akainu, and Flame helping the Sun God to block lava. I forgot about it.

Chapter 1045 "Zolong's swastika, Lu Chitian rushes out!" " Chapter 1046 "The Great Inventor Usopp, the ultimate ability of the Weather Rod, Nami's Thunder Half Moon Slash! Chapter 1047 "Am I actually the son of a half-demon?" Usopp uses the Underworld Zangetsusha! Chapter 1047 "Sanji opens all eight doors!" The demon Fengjiao Yaji is coming! " Chapter 1048 "The strongest blue ball, Chopper turns into a tailed beast and activates the tailed beast jade! Chapter 1049 "The Thousand-Armed Avalokitesvara Form of the Human Fruit Phantom Beast!" Robin transforms into a Buddha" Chapter 1050 "Franky, I will attack in Gundam form! Chapter 1051 "Brooke's Underworld Fruit Awakens!" The Reincarnation of Ash Whitebeard Resurrection" Chapter 1052 "Jinbei's Final Power! Transformed into the old mermaid Ariel" Chapter 1053 "Luffy's hair turns blonde, the legendary Super Nika" Chapter 1054 "What?" Luffy's substitute messenger turned out to be Krillin, a double attack from the Sun Fist! Chapter 1055 "Eat the Three Disasters!" Kaido becomes his final form! Chapter 1056 "Everyone in the country of Wano, raise your hands and share your energy with me!" Chapter 1057 "Kaido's life is in danger!" Come on, big brother who loves drinking! Chapter 1058 "Colorful Nika Fist!" Because we are the Straw Hat Pirates!

Pirates of the past: There are no useless fruits, only useless people! Today's pirates: There are no invincible people, only invincible fruits!

To be honest, I'm a little tired of watching so many One Piece fans, all of whom are Momonosuke and must die, but no one is willing to train him. Why don't we educate this little pervert? This guy is just a little bit lewd and obscene. Wouldn't this kind of thing be solved by just being thrown to a transvestite island for a few years?

Be careful when entering the trap: Kizaru in this fanfic is inexplicably diligent and can use top-level Haki at every turn. Don't tell me that Luffy is Garp's grandson. In the original novel, none of the supernovas died in Shampoo. In this story, Kizaru shoots at the protagonist's heart from high in the air. He also races thousands of miles and joins forces with Zefa in his twilight years to win. Kaido at his peak, not to mention Kaido's inability to break away from the higher-purity Kailuite later, and preventing Kizaru from blocking three (Quinn, Yamato who can be entangled with domineering energy, and the protagonist) when saving Kaidou, and also showing the fruit awakening (although I think the general should be able to awaken, but there is no natural awakening in the manga), did it really start to drift after it was put on the shelves?

The peak of Dzogchen in the later period of the quasi-general, the setting of the sand sculpture

In order to finish it on time, Oda brought the Kaido Pirates down in various ways. The Barbarian Overlord, Fei Liubao, the Three Disasters were so high in strength but lost inexplicably, the three main players of the Straw Hats cheated and cheated so well.

😁

Cracked open, everyone bears fruit. Phantom species. Nika form Enelu burst into tears

The writing of Kizaru is too buggy. If the author gives Kizaru time, one person can kill all the pirates except the four emperors. First of all, Kizaru does not have the ability to fly long distances at all. Otherwise, the Bubble Islands would be reached in a few seconds with his ability. Luffy and Supernova would not be able to survive. Kizaru will not break away from the fleet and act alone (crossing the sea, not on land). Secondly, Kizaru's speed is not that exaggerated. Chasing a supernova on the Bubble Islands requires the use of refraction of light. Not only does it have a certain forward sway, but the movement trajectory is obvious (seeing and hearing), otherwise Rayleigh would not be able to stop Kizaru at all.

Blackbeard planned for decades to snatch the Dark Fruit, but Luffy was not as lucky as to casually eat the Human Fruit Nika form.

When I wrote a fanfic, I kept it safe for the sake of the plot, but later I found out that the protagonist's deception in the original work was even more outrageous than that of the main character in the fanfic.

Silius

The latest episode of Luffy's awakening is a bit outrageous. Gear 5 is a bit like Jim Carrey's weirdo in disguise. His cartoon abilities are invincible and the laws of physics no longer apply. He runs directly back to the ghost island in the air.

The plot of the latest episode is really outrageous. Kaido can predict the future. I have to say that Kaido's configuration is too high. Overlord color entanglement + knowledge color to predict the future + fantasy beast species + super high defense and health bar + drunken state. Multiple modes. Defense, attack speed, dodge, no shortcomings. The entire hexagonal warrior, although Mr. Kai himself does not like to dodge attacks 😏

Teacher Kaidoo said that fruit ability is not necessary to dominate, and domineering is more important than fruit. So here comes the question. Isn't Luo and Kidd's fight against Auntie the benchmark for fruit > domineering? Let's not talk about the aunt fruit, why haven't you awakened yet? Her emperor-level domineering and domineering qualities seemed fake. If Teacher Kaidoo's words are true, then is Auntie a domineering crotch puller? If you can't control your abilities like Teacher Kaidoo, you can quit your addiction with one stick 😰

Just bullshit and call me "rubber fruit" for 20 years, but you tell me you don't? Can you become the Pirate King if you give me a piece of food?

Cute and Yamato

The only problem with this book is that the two plots related to Kizaru are a bit broken. The first plot where Kizaru penetrates the heart is inexplicable. It seems like fate and is particularly abrupt. According to this writing, the protagonist is targeted by Kizaru. As long as he does not stay next to Kaido, he will die. Even if he stays far away, Kizaru only needs to keep an eye on the protagonist and kill him when the protagonist is far away from Kaido. No one can catch him anyway. The second time Kaido was really killed in the plot. According to this way of writing, the original novel had no protagonist. How was Kaido rescued after being captured so many times? Kaido himself couldn't escape from the sea, so was it just Jhin and Quinn?

Dad Kaido's daily life

🙂 After reading more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist has a sense of innocence. He is friends with everyone, big brother, and aunt. If you like Luffy's naivety in the One Piece anime, you can check it out. Kaido's image is quite good. I have never watched anime and I can't accept this silly style. To be honest, I'm not afraid of trolls.

The opening style is okay. In the end, he started to play Oden within a few chapters? ? Oden, do you think you can play a role as hot as Momonosuke?

This book is much better than Tomato's Qiongqiguoguo. Although it's the same routine, the male protagonist in Tomato's book is really obscene. He makes dirty jokes with 12-year-old Yamato. It's really disgusting🤢🤢