Konoha: the Real Uchiha

Although I have only read a little bit of this book, I feel that it is a bit serious for myself.

What's the use of Susan's Eternal Kaleidoscope if it can only be turned on for forty seconds? Wouldn't it be nice to sell it and buy a popsicle?

Seeing the consumption of pupil power is outrageous, Amaterasu is 1% per second, Susana is 5% per second, and it increases by 5% at each stage. If Susan is used like the original, she will go blind if she fights.

I can't stand it anymore, too much personal work has been included. There are black spots in the third generation, but what you write here is mindless and black, pulling in everything and exaggerating. Even the death of the second generation was a conspiracy of the third generation, using his own life to step into a trap to drag the second generation to death? Is there any logic? Self-promotional text?

Your face becomes weird, your eyes become weird, and there is a weird smile on the corner of your mouth. You are really a master of weirdness. After reading a few chapters, you have no other impression at all. It is this weirdness that makes you unable to stand it.

Dress up as a weasel, and then use a golden finger to eat some marrow-washing fruit. As a result, your strength is reduced to 20%? Are plug-ins getting worse the more you open them?

The persuasive effect is quite strong! Also, the name of the protagonist is really impressive. Either he uses his real name or just Itachi. Others call the protagonist Uchiha, but you use his real name when you write the protagonist. Doesn't it look awkward? There is no sense of substitution!

Although Uchiha Itachi is a filial son and a white-eyed wolf, his talent is really not that great. He is a wall-mounted guy. However, when the protagonist wears him, why does it stretch his crotch so much?

If Susan still needs life force, Madara will be dead long ago

Is it because I want to save myself resurrection coins by taking so many three-magatama Sharingan? . . It is recommended to get a group of Sharingan crows to form an illusion LAN, with the protagonist's kaleidoscope as the server, and the crow's Sharingan as a broiler to improve the computing power of his illusions, or build a matrix computer to improve his computing power, so that the protagonist can sell basic attributes and perform bloodstain fusion.

Regardless of the content, the modern wisecracks are unbearable.

This protagonist is a master of face-changing. Why does he change his face every chapter?

The filthy weasel is so fucking disgusting, even I, Pain and Shinra Tianzheng, can forcefully interrupt it.

Buy it and recommend it. I can see you every time on Daily Guide.

I stopped watching it. When I saw the Eternal Eye, it only took 20 seconds to fly the Gundam. It's too outrageous.

After reading this book, my face couldn't help but become weird.

He captured Kakuto at the beginning - How to make big money in the ninja world💰, manual dog head🐶

I just started reading, author, how much do you like the word "weird face"? The protagonist has a weird face from time to time. This situation is just a twitching face in the eyes of others. Even if the protagonist notices something is wrong, he can just mutter in his heart. Does he have to have a weird face? Is this because you are afraid that others will not know that the protagonist has a problem?

Is the protagonist from the weird world?

There are too many settings of my own, and the writing style is immature.

The author slowly fell into the cycle of stereotyped villains again. Sarutobi Hiruzen, Danzo, after Danzo died, Sarutobi Hiruzen became Danzo directly. This is a bit of a change. The author can refer to the Swordsman Yue Buqun. He is glorious and behaves like a humble gentleman in his dealings, but in private he does do some plundering, conspiracy, calculations, etc. But even if he conspired against others, he did not say it outright and put it into action behind his back.

What I can't understand the most is that the protagonist sold his body to Orochimaru at a scrap price. I'm really speechless.

Weird expression

The settings of the author are pretty good. The only flaw is that the writing is unsatisfactory. It seems that there is no artistic conception and the characters cannot be written clearly. It feels like reading an outline, reading a running text, and looking at the setting. The fighting scenes are really written... Well, how should I put it... It is anticlimactic, because I think the fighting in both of your books has no action description. I don't know whether it is the setting or the author is not good at writing... The overall book is like a pot of meat, meat without ingredients and tasteless.

Brother, you are a capable person! The first one that made me spend money to read a book at the starting point

I feel like tying a cross and stabbing him with a knife is so low-key. If you go through all kinds of perverted/abnormal torture, you should be basically stupid.