Warlock Invasion of Naruto

It was quite interesting at the beginning, but I just skipped to the end. The plot development was too slow. One chapter was often just a one-sentence summary.

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Chapter One Hundred The protagonist invented a defensive outfit, but Tsunade and her brother still lost half of their lives. When the heroine was captured, she was forced to reduce her intelligence, strength, and defensive equipment but they had no effect. Fortunately, she had no murderous intent. At White Fang's place, he took a long time to write and came up with such a name, but he still died. So what's the point of having a protagonist? ? ? Isn't reading fan fiction just about making up for some of the shortcomings of the original work?

According to the general classification of wizard-style novels in the starting point. Wizard apprentices are just a little better than ordinary people. An official wizard should be able to challenge an ordinary Kage-level fighter among Hokages. The second level wizard is almost an ordinary Uchiha with kaleidoscope power. It's hard to say for a third-level wizard. But the weakest one has to have the strength of Uchiha Madara during the Valley of the End, and the strong one can already turn the Naruto world into his own personal space. Level 4 wizards are only slightly stronger than level 3 wizards, with no essential changes. Basically reaching level 5 is where the legend begins, treating the whole world as a laboratory. At the sixth and seventh levels, the world becomes a bottle and becomes a restriction for wizards to enter. If there are any combat issues, we can discuss them. However, wizards obviously have longer lifespans than ninjas, are more durable and cannot be beaten to death. (Removing Dangerous Experiments) Warlocks are stronger than ordinary wizards at the early stage, but weak at the later stage. This is a general situation.

Uzumaki Kushina

To be honest, this novel is very enjoyable to read. I mainly like the daily life of the male protagonist and Kushina. The male protagonist and the supporting characters also have the same IQ. I can't comment on the plot because I have never watched Naruto. I only know about Naruto through short videos and fan novels. It is now on the shelves, but it seems that the reviews have not been very good recently. The main reason is that the ten chapters are too watery. However, this reason is still acceptable, as long as the author learns the lesson. After all, it is only about 100 chapters now, and this problem does not affect the subsequent reading. Of course, if the author can add a few more chapters, these watery chapters will not be mind at all 🙂. After all, water is not scary, but water is always water. I also hope that the author will not be affected by these problems. Some people say that these problems prove that they all like to read it. Although I have been raising it now, there will be no shortage of subscriptions Come on, author!

Fat Fox🦊

Starting a business at such a young age? It's better to wait until you are older before doing it, it won't be fun if you are too young! 😭😭😭

The protagonist structure is really small. He taught Orochimaru how to practice as a wizard, but he was afraid that Orochimaru would surpass him. If his daughter was caught, he would not dare to do anything. He would only play dirty tricks.

I want to ask a question. Everyone wants to beat someone who secretly takes pictures of girls on the street. Why does Jiraiya peek into the girls' bathhouse and many people like it? Think of the heroine in Naruto going to the bathhouse to take a bath. Jiraiya is watching from outside.

Come on, the author reads after me 🙂

Why do you feel like Orochimaru is the protagonist? Bai Yu has always been manipulated by him?

It can only be said that it is too good-looking, the heroine is clear, not a vassal, the plot is reasonable and compact, and there is no mess at the end: randomly adding CP and suddenly the combat power skyrockets, excellent product! Ps: It doesn't matter how big or small the heroine is, it's the last word that is well written and impressive! Come on

On April 12, the 3789th year of the Taihua calendar, our sect was besieged by seventeen surrounding immortal sects, and the Qingya Sword Sect died. On April 13th, I woke up from a coma. Because of the forbidden technique of Sword Shattering the Void, I was seriously injured and lost all my magic power. On April 14, after simply treating the wound, I started to try to practice. April 15th, practice. April 16th, practice. On April 17, the injury improved slightly, and I began to explore the nearby area. On April 20th, after several days of exploration, I met a few strange people. They practiced weird techniques, and their behavior and speech were similar to those in Fuso overseas. According to them, they practiced ninjutsu. I probably came to a new world. On April 23rd, I initially recovered one percent of my cultivation and left here. On July 10th, after several months of hard work, my injury improved greatly and I was able to stand firm in this weird place. On January 1, the 3791st year of the Taihua calendar, the Qingya Dojo I founded opened for business and officially accepted disciples. Master, the glory of Qingya Sword Sect, disciple Chen Yuan will definitely recover! On October 27th, I met a young man, he is a peerless genius who has inherited my orthodoxy1 In the 3801st year of Taihua calendar, the boy has grown up, and I did not miss him. His performance can be said to be a unique genius in the history of Qingya Sword Sect! In the 3812th year of the Taihua calendar, I have no injuries at all and my cultivation has basically recovered. In the 3825th year of the Taihua calendar, in the summer, I began my journey to hegemony. If you want to revive the Qingya Sword Sect, you need countless resources, and domination is the fastest way to obtain resources. In the winter of the 3842nd year of the Taihua calendar, master Chen Yuan met a strange and powerful man named Bai Yu. After only three moves, the master was defeated and everything was plundered by Bai Yu. Following my master's orders, I led my brothers and sisters to retreat into the mountains to preserve the fire of Qingya Dojo. The glory of Qingya Dojo will be restored under my hands!

To be honest, I ordered 219 copies in total, and then I couldn't stand it anymore. Writing about parallel worlds was a failure, and the power system was a bit stretched in the later stage. I just finished the fourth level and completed the Naruto World map change. It's great. There are so many ancient sounds. Is this the first novel of the originator of wizards, Wen Chao Gong? The seven sins of killing are death. . . You're level 9 and you're only level 4, why can't you continue writing? Bad ending. . .

The early stage was exciting, but in more than 100 chapters, the plot took a turn for the worse, and the logic and rigor declined, turning it into a mediocre work.

Konoha actually deserves to be beaten four to one. The country of Uzumaki, the only die-hard ally, does not save them. Except for Uzumaki Kushina, the other remaining members of the Uzumaki clan would rather go to other countries than go to Konoha, which speaks volumes. When the other allies looked at it, they didn't even try to save such a die-hard ally. Can their relationship with Konoha be as strong as the relationship between the Kingdom of Whirlpool and Konoha? The lessons learned from the past are clear to our eyes. To be honest, apart from the Kirigakure Village where Mizukage is controlled, Konoha's operations are the most outrageous. If it were not for the blessing of the Six Paths Sage, Konoha would really be beaten to death by the crowd. Sarutobi Hiruzen would be almost the same as Lafayette in the later stage.

I have to say. A bad review. But the early and middle stages are very worth watching.

The front is okay, I thought I wouldn't follow the same old path as those of my peers. But I still couldn't help but sigh when I saw it later. We always have to bring these plots back to life. From the front, the plot is completely ruined. But you still have to turn back later.

As for the heroine Kushiyuna, Naruto will be gone. Naruto is just a translation, and the name of the animation is Naluduo.

I wanted to see the collision between wizards and ninjas, but it turned out that there were a lot of messy powers. Wizards were just the names that were occasionally mentioned, such as knight breathing, sharingan, and clones.

Let me introduce Guyinduo Warlock (go away from the mother river system in the book) People do not engage in charm/body, but specialize in souls. The soul condenses into a soul ring and is promoted to the devil to travel in various worlds connected by the mother river. He is one of the dominant forces under the mother river (Characteristics of the mother river system, it is difficult to travel through the physical body, so you can only develop soul travel with peace of mind)

When I read the title of the book at first, I thought it was a brainless recommendation, but when I clicked on it I realized that it was really good. The characters and combat abilities were not compromised. I was addicted to this pair of CPs, but I was afraid that the author would abandon the book because of the readers' opinions, and then change the outline, just like It turned out to be a situation where I went to a restaurant to eat, but suddenly went to the gym. The author should not be affected by the readers. This novel is created by your inner world. A thousand people have a thousand thoughts, but we readers are just watching your inner world, so just write as you like.

Thirty thousand words turned out to be three hundred thousand. I opened the book with great interest and started reading. I finished reading it in a short while and looked confused.

Daily writing, food, eunuchs To be honest, there are really not many books in the Wizard series that can reach the finale. Writing the first and second levels takes up almost half of the book. It's really embarrassing to leave the last one alone.

I discovered that the protagonist has never fought a sweaty battle. Every time I write about a fight, it always ends abruptly, especially the battle with the steam ninja in the projection village. At that time, I thought the protagonist relied on his physical ability to beat him to A and give him A, but I didn't expect that it was relying on the witch formation arranged in advance, which was not refreshing at all.

Why does this combat power feel a bit weak? The first level corresponds to the shadow level, then the second level corresponds to the super shadow, the third level should correspond to the sixth level, and you define the sixth level as the fourth level, so how to divide the second and third levels?

Why did you change your waistcoat? If the operation officer of the previous book hadn't posted a notice, I wouldn't have known about it 🤭

The Hokage map used in this book is basically correct except for some details. I have modified some of it myself, but Hokage cannot find a map that is completely correct. PS: Another picture. The ninja drove at full speed in the jungle for three days. It didn't feel much slower than normal driving, so the actual distance was still quite large.

Slow down the progress, take your time. When I first looked at the catalog, I thought it was all kinds of forbidden techniques and all kinds of ascension without even graduating from the ninja school. One word: good😁