I’m Trying to Deal with the Heaven’s Chosen One

You can tell what kind of book it is by reading the introduction But it has many female protagonists

Everything else is well written, but the protagonist is suppressed too much. A reborn person like this should have countless trump cards. You can never guess what my backhand is, what my abilities are. It's okay if you don't mess with me. But if you mess with me, everyone involved in the cause and effect will be wiped out. The realm is very vague, and the combat power system has not been established. People who have lived for thousands of years have no scheming ideas. Not to mention the various incarnations of matryoshka doll routines and layouts for thousands of years. At least they can kill their own memories if they know things they shouldn't know. Those who are reborn are all invincible or hot-blooded. You try to make yourself invincible but not invincible, hot-blooded or cold-blooded, indifferent or indifferent, and you haven't even grasped the core. Also, the description of the characters is not profound. When I read it, I remembered that it seemed to have appeared before, and I couldn't remember it at all. Everyone has different personality and behavior. If you can remember it at a glance, it proves that you have written it well. I hope the author can work harder. Not everyone is born to be a master. I believe you will write better and better.

Your novel is very good. It starts well, but why does it get to the back? It's getting worse. Some people say that in your novel, the protagonist is too suppressed, and then the protagonist turns to Yuanyoujing in the blink of an eye. Some people say that pretending to be cool is not enough, so you forcefully pretend, but the result is counterproductive. The results of your book are still not good! I think that when writing a novel well, one cannot be influenced by readers. To please one reader will offend another reader. Writing a novel is to bring others into your world, so you have to write the world you want in your heart. You cannot satisfy everyone you write about, nor can you write it based on the reader's attitude. As long as your world is well written, some people will read it. If the content of the book is good, some people will read it. If you feel that the pretentiousness is not enough, then you will pretend to be pretentious, and if the realm is not enough, then you will improve. Then this is definitely a bad book, and the setting of your book is set. Because the reader's preferences are too early, or too backward, the content of the book will appear very abrupt. Writing is to bring readers into your world, into your world, not into someone else's world.

I don't have much desire to read on. I can't see the meaning of the protagonist's rebirth.

Look at the introduction and see how the female protagonists were killed. Although the ending is good and they all achieved greatness, why should we repay the kindness to the male protagonist? We shouldn't say: Thank you, but I will kill you. Something like that is more interesting

Protagonist: In my previous life, I was in the realm of xx. You guys are noobs. After a while, the protagonist was defeated. To be honest, I can't understand

The plot is not bad, but I really want to complain about the height and weight of the male and female protagonists. A girl who is 170cm tall needs to be at least around 60 to have breasts and ass, and a protruding front and back needs to be around 65. In the end, the two female protagonists are both less than 50, they are like steel! The male protagonist is even more outrageous. For a 182-year-old man, 70 is considered too thin, and a 60-year-old is almost skinny. It's so embarrassing to watch 😅

Personally, I don't feel much refreshed and extremely depressed. Perhaps in this fast-paced Internet age, my noisy heart has long lost the patience to read this kind of workథ౪థ

Why do I feel like something is wrong with the male protagonist after watching it? . Weird. But it seems that it wouldn't be impossible if it were explained as if one person will succeed and ten thousand bones will dry up? Why do I feel like when the male protagonist grows up, he always watches bad guys get rich🧐

The protagonist is reborn. It feels like he has not been reborn.