
My Practice System
我的练功系统
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 962k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- High-Martial World
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The protagonist actually can't even read much of the text, and I don't understand how he understands the secrets of martial arts? This is actually a time traveler? He completely threw away the memory of time travel, like a simple and reckless native, with no brains at all and no intention to learn. When he was young, he didn't know how to do anything and didn't have any strategy. Even if you know how to make some earthen explosives, it won't be that difficult. It's not a profound knowledge. One sulfur, two nitrates, three charcoals, you can just slowly experiment with the specific ratios. If it weren't for the system, the grass on the grave would have grown into a tree.
I feel like I can't go very far with two worries by my side.
The eldest eunuch is afraid that you will suddenly enter the palace.
I'll go, this is written as if someone is mentally ill, it's too poisonous
The two soy sauce bottles next to the protagonist are not very impressive in themselves. There is no strong willpower to fight. There is no vision or plan in mind. Weak idiot.
Do you know why everyone writes about time travel? Even starting directly from the fetus, because we have the consciousness of modern people, have the learning ability and insight of modern people, and know what is of great use, it can effectively enhance everyone's sense of involvement. So, if you create an aborigine who has acquired the memory of modern people but has not fully utilized it, do you think you are very powerful and the design is very special? You write about an aborigine who has the memory of a modern person but still doesn't know the benefits of reading. How can everyone tolerate being so vicious? Assume that a person can get 100 opportunities during his lifetime. A person who does not realize the usefulness of reading may get 100 opportunities, but not even 10 can be used. With this kind of utilization, do you still want to rise? Still want to be strong in martial arts? What's more, the world you wrote is very tricky, and the difficulty of survival has almost increased to an order of magnitude. At this time, in order for the protagonist to survive, you can only help him to open bigger obstacles yourself, and then collapse.
Even the hall leader can only escape from the fish monster. How could you, a little shrimp, kill him?
Did the author see it? This is the ending where you have great ideas and don't care about the readers' feelings. Nowadays, most readers will not look at the protagonist who takes care of the family at the beginning. The so-called younger sister and younger brother are the most poisonous points. And I don't like to see the protagonist repaying evil with kindness, like the Holy Mother in the world. I don't even like seeing a woman unable to walk, the man will retaliate, and the woman will be so cute and unruly. It's a pity that you wrote it all, you are very thoughtful.
Original text: Although Chen Guang was born into a wealthy family, he had little interest in literacy and did not know many words. There are less than three hundred in total, and some of them are from reading "Collapse of Stone Palm". For him, it is normal for him to be unable to understand a book at all.
I just started watching it now, but I still want to say: Why do most old bookworms like to watch time-travelers instead of indigenous people? Because our lives are different, our education is different. The education we receive determines the way we think. The large amount of information flow we receive unknowingly every day allows us to see the light and darkness of the outside world, which also determines our vision. We have studied history and politics since primary school, which poor people in ancient times had little contact with, so writing about the rise of aboriginals from abject poverty is too difficult, and we feel it is unreasonable.
It starts with a gang, a coach with a bold personality, a beautiful little sister, and a grudge against a rival gang. There are too many similar beginnings
How do you say the protagonist is sick, or a serious illness? When I went to investigate something strange, I was misunderstood by a person, and then got beaten up. In the end, the protagonist became wildly angry, and when he saw that he couldn't beat him, he quickly said it was a misunderstanding. The protagonist was like a kindergarten student, standing obediently and glaring at the person angrily There was no defensiveness at all. What if this Taoist was not a decent person, but an evil person? The protagonist is so obedient. Has he found his long-lost biological father?
Although the protagonist is an indigenous person, he has merged with the memory of the time traveler. Even if he was originally illiterate, the time traveler cannot? Are you talking nonsense? Even the people in Shangougou are not illiterate. You are force-feeding poison. How can a person who cannot even understand martial arts secrets be qualified to become a strong person? It is better to die early and be reincarnated, and replace the soul of the time traveler. He is stupid and stupid and refuses to make progress. I really have no desire to watch it. I should have killed him when I saw the ghost before.
The protagonist is illiterate and thinks literacy is of no use, so he directly persuades him to leave.
Md, four of the six eunuchs, not only read
It's really decent, it's really decent, holy bitch
The idea of the novel is very good. But the writing is too poor, and the main line is not smooth. The characters in it are not deep either, and they all feel like fools who suddenly and unexpectedly start to cause trouble for the protagonist, who is also a stupid young man. It seems like I don't have any thoughts, I just feel like I'm just messing around for a day. There seems to be no long-term plan. The incident started inexplicably and ended inexplicably. Live each day like a running account. It seems that we are not reading a novel, but just messing around. When we get to the peerless master, the book will be over. It is not interesting at all, but the creativity and ideas are really good.
It's a mess, what did you write?
You give the protagonist a wit at the beginning. No wonder your book did not do well.
The starting point is really something anyone can recommend.
Why do most of the current articles write about the protagonist having no IQ, 2 likes to write about the protagonist's ink marks, and 3 has cheats, why don't they try their best to understand and become stronger? 4. You have cheats and like to be a good person. What kind of feelings do you have with them? You want to become stronger. You like to watch them become stronger. Stop writing about children's growth. You will die long ago through time travel. You use a modern person's brain to write it. If you are a modern person with this kind of brain and personality, you should quickly go to work in a factory.
I read the first dozen chapters of this book in a daze, and I felt like I didn't understand much of it as if I was fast forwarding. Was it deleted?
This fight is so intense that I can't watch it.
Some people also praised the creativity. Seeing such talented book friends made me feel relieved. All the joy of life comes from reading reviews. 🐶🐶🐶🐶
The reason why I write time travel stories now is because what I write about is not reality. Since it is not the earth we live on, people's thoughts and other things are in conflict with ours. The main perspective of writing a book is still the protagonist. If the protagonist is a time traveler, then the protagonist's thoughts and behavior habits still rely on our daily life, and occasionally add a little bit of the ideological outlook of that world. The protagonist can also slowly change the world view, giving us a space to accept it. If I were to write a book about cultivating immortals, I really don't think our earth's current technology can compare with cultivating immortals. What we play with is gunpowder, etc. But cultivating immortals involves cultivating the four arts. The reason why there is an earth traveler named Niu is because it is impossible for the author to write thoughts like Taoism and Buddhism, right? The time traveler Niu is Niu's thoughts left by his ancestors and his current thoughts. Anyway, when I saw Xiuxian talking about technology, I immediately walked away. We don't even understand the earth now. Can we conquer the world in the world of Xiuxian?
This Mr. Tang is so kind to you. I think the Sanyin Sword technique is just average, but you haven't used it a few times.
How many chapters have I written about Gathering Qi? Anyway, I saw more than 140 chapters and couldn't stand it. I was a little confused about the realms of skills and so on. There were too many and it was confusing. I gave up and stopped watching.
To be fair, the author's writing is quite good. The contradictions, conflicts and changes at the beginning are understated, and the family aspect is understated. There are few people who write such fluently at the beginning these days. There are a lot of people who grasp the details and complain all the way. It is really unbearable to watch.