Amid the Mist

If there is anything poorly written, I hope you can point it out! I will look at whether it is a writing problem or a plot problem. If it is a plot problem, I will not change it as long as it is not a bug. If there is a writing problem, I will consider it and modify it! I hope I can write a satisfying novel! So I'm sorry to trouble you all to read and write! Thank you for your support and reading

I feel like I have some problems writing articles recently, but I don't have any feedback. To be honest, I'm quite confused. I won't cut off this article, but I hope I can write it really well. So I hope readers can give me some feedback. I can polish it better. I really hope you can give me some feedback~~ I really want to write it well! orz

Today I saw another reward for book title 13733, which really makes me happy. I am really grateful to you who read my books, including book friend Mi Yueyi, and Sloyth who rewarded me, Starry Sky View, book friend 20220115191525572, book title 13773, I dare not slack off for you. . I still won't cut it in half, and the second volume is coming soon. I am currently setting the big map and the specific political environment of the kingdom. Because there are many forces involved, it needs to be carefully controlled. I have also read a lot of world history for this purpose, and briefly looked at some knowledge of geography and political economy. In order to prove that I am really not fishing, let me first present the currently set world map section. Although it may be changed in the future, you can take a look first. I have coded out the specific information (to prevent spoilers). I hope I can write a story you like in the future!

Come on

From the first chapter, I felt that it was unusual and very heartfelt. I am a new reader who has just started reading.

At first glance, one does not know the meaning, but upon closer inspection, there are many aftertaste, and the plot is progressive and fascinating. Not bad, not bad.

After reading the first few chapters and the later chapters, I suggested that after the author finished writing a chapter, he read it aloud. Second, it is recommended that the author not show off his writing skills, but try to use the simplest language to accurately describe the events, and then optimize the writing style on this basis.

The theme concept is quite good, but the writing makes people feel that it is very difficult to read, it is foggy, and the whole story is very fragmented.

The writing style is really good, and the sense of immersion is very strong. It has the feel of a best friend, but it is still a bit gray. You may be one of the few people I have seen who is suitable for writing in the first person. I personally think the story is difficult to understand. Was this cast internally?

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