Starting with Liberation Victory

Someone recommended this book some time ago, saying that it looks like a bird, but it is actually mysterious. This sentence really piqued my interest. I read it from the beginning to the latest update in one day. After reading it all, I felt extremely complicated, and I saw that the author seemed to have a lot of confusion, so I wanted to write a comment, hoping to inspire the author. By the way, this is the small account I use to post book reviews. The large account has been fully subscribed and supported. Let me know to avoid misunderstandings. Why are you feeling complicated? Because the advantages and disadvantages of this book are so prominent, I felt extremely strange when reading it. I didn't feel it was good or bad, but it was a pity, it was really a pity. Let's talk about the advantages first, which are very obvious. One is the writing style, and the other is the world view. If I must add one more thing, it is the author's own attitude, which is modest and sincere, and he has made obvious progress along the way. The disadvantages are generally two points, one is the character setting, and the other is the plot arrangement. (Note, it is character setting, not characterization. The character creation in this book is actually very good, but there is something wrong with the mold itself, and the carved things will naturally be less interesting) I won't go into details about the advantages, let's analyze the character setting and plot arrangement issues bit by bit In addition, it can be seen that the author likes mystery, so I will try my best to use mystery as an example for analysis.

The book is very good. If my grades are not improving, I think the title of the book should bear 90% of the responsibility, and the remaining 10% should be given to the introduction.

Plot setting: Bad luck strikes, and a broom star appears. There are too many coincidences, and generally speaking, it is average Protagonist image: Apart from being able to fight, it is just the way modern ordinary people show up on online forums, and there is no chivalry at all. What he did can barely be described as a man's anger, blood splattered five steps, but it can't be described as "free and dripping". At present, it can only be rated as average.

I don't know if the author's editor has told you that the biggest problem now is the rhythm, and the second is that it's not fun.

The most difficult thing to accept is that the weak sixteen or seventeen-year-old went to play in the gym, and the second was Wu Laosan. There is a memory for the protagonist in the article, and the causes and consequences are clearly written. The protagonist traveled through time and lived in a place where people lived, ate people, and then kicked the gym and caused trouble. This made me, a soft-hearted person, feel that it was too inappropriate. Hey, not to mention planning and then acting, at least clarifying the relationship, this behavior pattern of looking for a sword is also very speechless.

It's depressing to read... The protagonist wants to go home, the kindness of the third uncle and the kindness of Qizai If you don't repay the kindness, just use the tool It's going to be better soon. I insist on going out, so I deliberately create conflicts The review is not to say that it is not good, I don't bother to comment on the bad book reviews Also, can the protagonist use some brains when doing things? Don't be a reckless man... All he does is fight.

This book is hard to read, and the story seems to be breathing through a plastic bag. I have been following two books of the same type recently, Boxing Ghost and Infinite Brilliance Picture Book. The former is as evil as a ghost and the latter is as martial as a god. If you are interested, you can check it out.

These chapters have been like Gong Du recently. You haven't updated them well and the plot is too slow. In this era of per capita anxiety, where can we find such foreshadowing? I'm really a little tired of it. How can this Zhan Jiawei Wai Wai Wai be so awesome? Isn't he afraid that someone who wants to eat raw rice will kill him with a knife? So damn high-spirited

The author writes well. I came back from piracy to support you. The writing is still very strong, but there are a few plots in the middle that are aggrieved. But let's just look at today's chapter. It is definitely a fairy tale for its good writing.

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