Starting with Liberation Victory

Someone recommended this book a while ago, saying it looks like a story about a ghost or a mythical creature, but it's actually a mystery. That really piqued my interest, and I spent a whole day reading it from beginning to end until the latest update. After reading it all, I felt extremely conflicted.

The book is excellent. If the book's grades aren't good, I think the title should bear 90% of the responsibility, and the synopsis should bear the remaining 10%.

Plot setup: Misfortune strikes, a jinx appears. Too many coincidences, overall just so-so. The protagonist's character: Aside from being a skilled fighter, he embodies the typical behavior of an ordinary modern person on an online forum, lacking any chivalrous spirit. His actions can be loosely described as a fit of rage, but they don't quite deliver the feeling of exhilaration. Currently, he can only be rated as average.

I don't know if the author's editor has told you, but the biggest problems right now are the pacing and the lack of enjoyment. There are no enjoyable moments.

What's most unacceptable is that a weak sixteen or seventeen-year-old goes to challenge the dojo, followed by his relationship with Wu Laosan. The story gives the protagonist memories of Wu Laosan, and the cause and effect are clearly explained. The protagonist transmigrates, lives in a place where people live, eats their food, and then challenges the dojo and causes trouble.

It's frustrating to watch... The main character is En Qi Zai, who wants to go home. If they don't report it, they'll just use someone as a tool. If you're about to get better but insist on going out, then deliberately create conflict. The review isn't saying the book is bad; I'm too lazy to even write a review for a bad book. Also, can the protagonist use his brain a little and stop acting like a brute... All he does is fight?

This book was indescribable; the plot felt like breathing through a plastic bag. I've recently been following two similar books, *Fist Ghost* and *Infinite Glory Record*. The former is utterly malevolent, the latter a martial arts masterpiece. You might want to check them out if you're interested.

These lately chapters have been like palace intrigue, with slow updates and a dragging plot. These days, everyone's impatient; who cares about all this build-up? I'm genuinely fed up. This guy surnamed Zhan's incessant whining is so arrogant; isn't he afraid someone might actually kill him? And he's so full of himself!

Author, keep writing! I came back from the pirated version to support you. Your writing skills are still very strong, although there were a few frustrating parts in the middle. But let's see how this chapter goes. If it's well-written, it will definitely be a masterpiece.

Four Masks