I Handed in the Crossing Door

I don't know if there will be a fantasy world or other fantasy worlds. It suddenly occurred to me that I had seen a paragraph in a novel about a Wuchang who traveled to another world, or one of the Wuchangs who traveled to another world, on another novel website. The following is a screenshot {"Url":"https://qdreaderpic-1252317822. File. Myqcloud. Com/229326 48/cddcc5d07af4488db210b014ad292e57_original. Jpg","Width":"720","Height":"10289"}

The writing is so bad, the most basic words cannot be written smoothly. Many sentences have the same names as Japanese light novels, with a lot of attributives. It's too tiring to read.

Hello author, the last time I wrote about submitting it to the country was already 404😭

After reading the book review, I feel that the author has been scolded a lot, and there is something I want to say to the author. . Everyone has a greedy and selfish side. . If some readers always put pig's feet on themselves when reading novels, they will resent the author's great and upright deeds of pig's feet because of their own dark emotions. This is also human nature (I can't say it too detailed, I'm afraid even I will be criticized later) . . The book was suddenly finished It's a pity

To be honest, I personally don't think the country will treat you badly! If you think about it with your buttocks, you will know how important a door that is impossible to have with today's technology is! As for research and the like, I am convinced that %0.00001 Can be found now. This is no longer something that can be researched in tens of thousands of years! Travel through the dimensional universe! !

The national think tanks have been downgraded too much. Hundreds of top smart people also use the protagonist to remind the world that it is different? People will only think about more. .

In fact, this is also an option for normal Chinese people. It is too difficult to enter the first world and make the first pot of gold without thermal weapons and high-end force.

The last protagonist who had a time-travel portal slowly built a large enterprise that radiated around the world, and had his own army. The army used top-level biotechnology, human cloning, control chips, and black-tech weapons. By the way, the book was called "I Have a Super USB Flash Drive." The country is powerful, but people have selfish motives. For example, if a powerful person is old and miserable, doesn't he want to regain his youth or even live forever? Not everyone is of the same mind, and there are spies.

If I have a portal, the first condition that prevents me from turning in the portal is that the country checks my life, and then the browser records are discovered, and I will be killed immediately. Here's a picture, that's the one "I want to submit this browser time record" "Judge, I killed the person"

How many years have passed and these authors still haven't understood that the protagonist's IQ depends on the author's IQ? Don't just write protagonists with high IQs. Most authors won't be able to write them because you have average IQ levels.

If you write this kind of article well, you will get 404. This is the case with Raising the Dragon Flag High in the New World and The Manual of Conquering Different Worlds. If you don't write well, you will be criticized. In fact, it is quite difficult.

Well written, I like the best cooperation with the country, plus a bloodline of the alien queen, cooperating with the country to fight the war, I will keep reading it

Was this written like this on purpose? Every sentence has a bunch of adjectives or attributives, and it's so confusing to read! A very good idea, it's really written like this

It is impossible to write like this. . . Do you think your IQ alone can simulate that of an entire country? It will definitely be full of loopholes, and you will be sprayed all over your body.

The common man is not guilty, but he is guilty of possessing the jade. It is too dangerous to hand over the portal. The darkness of human nature is unimaginable

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. The subject matter is quite good, but it seems too laborious. Every time I have to find the subject, predicate, object, and definite adverb to supplement it. Can you write the sentence more smoothly? There are so many attributive adverbials and it seems too uncomfortable. Can't you break it into several sentences?

Bring less personal information and adjust your writing style more. The Wandering Earth movie you recently wrote is really messy

The author's structure is too small, and the strength and wisdom of a big country will not be so weak.

Author, every sentence of yours sounds so strange. Yes, it is strange. I cannot describe this feeling.

Can you please stop engaging in private goods? Emotional problems do not represent real problems. Emotional problems caused by real problems, Solving emotional problems does not mean that real problems are also solved.

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The writing is good, and the writing style is okay. After all, I am a new writer. You can read it. Great cheers for the author.

It should collapse later... The subject matter is okay, but I feel like I'm going to keep reading... It seems that the subscription sales are not very high...

The author's writing style is really hard to put into words

Yes, the more I write, the more exciting it becomes. At first, I couldn't stand it because the sentences were too long. But after I got used to it, I felt that it was still very exciting.

It just took me an hour to read the latest chapter, discarding some complicated and redundant sentences and psychological descriptions. In other aspects, especially the imagination, it is very good. It is suitable for reading when I am short of books, but I feel that I may not be able to follow the series.

Didn't you say you were going to be the proudest man in the world? Did I remember it wrong? How to become a wandering earth?

He is still stubbornly resisting, waiting for tea

…. Mmp.. The protagonist's name changes again and again. There are also a lot of typos.

After the mission of Wandering the Earth is completed, should we return it to one of the technologies in Liu Ci'en's novel? The author recommends that you choose the "Grand Unified Equation of the Universe" novel