Myriad Worlds: The Fantasy World Begins with The Lord of the Rings

Everything was alright until the very beginning, when the protagonist joined the expedition, he became a babysitter, practically taking over Gandalf's role and doing even more than Gandalf. Why would such a powerful protagonist need to take care of a kid? This hardly qualifies as an adventure.

If entering the story isn't about changing all the tragedies, then what's the point?

If you're emphasizing love, then write a story with a single female lead; otherwise, it loses its essence. Look at Middle-earth—who among lovers has a harem? Otherwise, it's a betrayal of love.

Wizards in Middle-earth are lesser gods, not humans.

I just want to know when Game of Thrones will end. I'll watch it again when it's over.

Are you kidding me? Did they change writers? It's all just filler, if you're so great you could write a thousand chapters of Game of Thrones, this guy with superhuman powers is dragging his feet and doing nothing, you're even trying to scam money out of him.

Yawen

I've been reading the plot since King's Landing, and it's been so drawn out. Things that could be resolved in a few chapters have been dragged out for so long. How the former prime minister died—whether his death was painful or not—has nothing to do with the protagonist's future plans. What you need to write now is how the obstacle dies. Not this rambling, impromptu writing. I'm already tired of reading this, you know? I hope you'll put some thought into it.

After a while, I just didn't want to open it anymore...

I think the only truly problematic aspect right now is the fake marriage plot. After all, it's a Game of Thrones universe, and political maneuvering is fine, but this kind of character-damaging behavior is better left unseen. So much has been built up around the character's feelings for Twilight Star, and this sudden turn of events is just unacceptable. Even if it's fake, it's still a thorn in the side, leaving a bitter taste and severely damaging the character's image.