
Across the Heavens, I Got a Magic Phone
横跨诸天,我得到了魔幻手机
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- Completed
- Length
- 43k Words
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- Male
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Introduction, bucket realm? 😄
Find a copy of Superman's Ability World, and you can basically master it in the early stage!
The writing, the plot, the imagination, none of it is taken up. Bonus points for the magic phone element. The routine is too old and the plot arrangement is poor. The writing is not very bad, but it is just ordinary.
As I said before, the author is a eunuch. Does the author dare to give his address? I'll send you something good
In fact, the author, you might as well just give me the magic secrets from heaven. What kind of Chinese boy are you going to steal secret books? What leaves me speechless the most. Is there any difference between the magical power and the Beiming magical power? At most it's just a name change. And this is the name I have used in other novels for magical secrets. What is the Beiming Xiaoyao Creation Jue Xiaoyao Creation Change. Can't you come up with a more novel name for the author of Xiaoyao Kunpengjue, etc.? None of these have similar names. Refreshing. And the author, you let the protagonist go. Does Chinese Boy have any meaning? Why bother to go to the Chinese boy when the secrets of the exercises are directly dealt with by Tianshou? Since you went to China to steal secret books, why do you need to do any god-given magic? This is simply unnecessary.
I think, the author, you might as well start at the peak, and then write the protagonist to travel around the world. The silly girl in the TV series can be 50-50 equal to Sun Wukong. What kind of existence is Sun Wukong? It's not too much. Then let's compare it like this. Think about it, Sha Niu is at least a cosmic level or even a half-step multiverse level existence in the scientific world. Look, with this comparison, having a Sha Niu is at least a golden immortal or a cosmic level powerhouse. You can just write the plot to play or travel around the world and finally become a powerful person with the rules of the avenue or an omniscient and omnipotent level powerhouse. Comparing the saints in the system of cultivating immortals to the scientific world is just a matter of comparison. It's omniscient and omnipotent. It's written in a setting like An's. Think about how broad it is, the author. I like the silly girl in the magic phone the best, but after searching for the novel about the magic phone, there are no novels. It's a pity. Author, why don't you write a book. Goldfinger is the silly girl. The starting universe level is neither high nor low. She is not bullied and is not too strong. It is much better than some novels that start by beating Pangu or even Dao or Chaos or Hongmeng. It can also be a novel. Master Pangu cried when he saw it, that's an exaggeration. Silly girl's words are neither too high nor too low, just right. You can wander around for a while without being too exaggerated. Traveling around the world freely and freely, it's just right, and then slowly improve your strength and realm. The main plot is to travel around the world to see and watch various novels, movies, and TV series. If it's good, you can just help or watch. If it's not good, it's humanely destroyed or bullied. It's both good and evil. It's just right.
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Does the author have a manuscript on file? How many days do you update? Can you guarantee that there will be no eunuchs? I like this subject very much. I haven't read it yet. I'll save it for later.
The writing is really good, but the name Dragon Group is a bit ancient. I suggest changing it to a more modern name, which is in line with the trend.
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