Rebirth as a Song of Years

The author should look more at other people's language structures. The character is 54 and reborn at the age of 17. No points? It has been going through decades of ups and downs, but after reading your first chapter, I felt that the author wanted to write something with a deep rural atmosphere, but his writing skills were not up to par and he was powerless! What you write is about a middle-aged man reborn as a 17-year-old, not a simple young man. He has never seen anything dark, but being ridiculed by a fellow villager makes his heart feel like a knife! A protagonist with high ambitions and low hands is impossible to like! I hope you can make progress. It doesn't matter if your writing skills are small, but you can write less about the psychology of the protagonist!

I still had a golden finger when I was reborn, but I gave it up.

The three golden chapters are all nonsense... I can't arouse my interest in continuing reading at all. How many books are there now? How many people have you persuaded to quit with these three chapters?

Reborn at 50, just like a child. Author, you'd better go to Guangdong to make screws.

Does the author want to arrange more women for the male protagonist? I kept getting broken up with for no apparent reason several times.

There is an author called Sometimes Confused, who also wrote a book before (Rebirth: Cantabile Years), and your name is exactly the same as his.

After reading more than eighty chapters, his relatives were not helpful at all! Although your relatives have concerns in their own company, at least they have helped you and loaned you money!

Nowadays, urban novels are so rubbish. When you see others' popularity, you just copy them and learn from them. The problem is that they all rely on complex and imagination, and you never check the information, especially the rebirth novels. It's all thought up. The authors all stayed 10 years ago. Now, if you look at website b, you can understand the historical background . Unlike 10 years ago, there was no place to understand, so it seems that the current novels are very naive.

Occupy the sofa and start a new book, come on!

There is no book worth over one million, so I have the nerve to call it big.

Author, this is the third book, and it is still at the same level, with no progress at all. You are not suitable for writing novels, so change your career.