Be the Captain with the Warehouse

After reading more than 80 chapters, I feel that it is uninteresting, like a running account, and then you have reached middle age after writing only a few chapters. How do you plan to write next? Water characters? Or directly cultivate immortality and immortality? Or die once and come back?

This book should be placed in the romance category. After reading more than 20 chapters, I didn't do anything to develop the production team. Instead, I was messing with women, refusing and being a bitch at the same time. It was putting the cart before the horse!

It's fine if this kind of writing is plain and simple. Don't make fun of meme. People who read this kind of book are all old bookworms. If you make fun of meme, they won't read it at all.

Isn't there that kind of positive period writing? What I want to see is that the protagonist goes back to that era to lead or get out of poverty and become rich, and his life is moving towards a better life, and everything is prosperous and positive. Instead of talking nonsense, moral kidnapping, hunger kidnapping, and intrigue all day long, I know there were many such phenomena in that era. If I want to watch these, I can just watch TV, and I can also read Mao's novels.

Post a post! After reading more than a dozen chapters, I found several problems. The first one is, don't always write about what the author did before! I, the reader, don't care what happened to you in the past, what does that have to do with me. Originally, poor writing skills in writing this type of novels can easily lead to a poor reading experience, but what happened before you added another author? Still don't think you're in a good mood? The second one is that as an old man in his fifties or sixties who has been reborn in his previous body (soul travel), the future boss worth tens of millions must at least have social experience! Is it possible (soul travel) that if you go back to 1977, your experience will be gone? As a person with a net worth of tens of millions and owning an electronics factory, there should be a lot of workers! Managing a factory is no easier than managing a brigade, right? What about your management? At the very least, you have to understand how to understand people and how they behave! Don't force conflicts to subdue some story lines. It's very childish and reduces the reading experience. I was so poisoned here that I couldn't stand it anymore. Seeing that it was still in a seedling state, I ran over to tell it. If it were an old author, I would abandon the book and run away immediately. The third point is that you can selectively write about things from that year in the author's remarks or easter eggs at the end. Don't just write in the main text. Most people will find it difficult to read. This is my personal opinion

After reading the synopsis, I no longer had the desire to read any more. For the first time, the protagonist did not take the college entrance examination but became a production captain. How much water did he have in his brain to be able to do this? What's more, the protagonist is still a reborn person, doesn't he still know how important this matter is? Even if you want to live a better life in the future, you have to take the college entrance examination. Do you like to work hard so much? As for the first batch of college students, if you want to become a civil servant, you can just pass the qualifications and make no mistakes. It will not be a problem to become the county party secretary before retirement.

I feel that the author is not from that era, and the writing is full of mistakes. I've read about twenty chapters, and the plot is awkward with my feet touching the cracks of the floor. The male protagonist was nearly 50 years old in his previous life. After his rebirth, without any rules and regulations, he wrote notes to needy households in the team asking him to go to the team to borrow food on credit! Who can a normal person with brains and social experience do this? Then, a man worth tens of millions of dollars, and his wife actually opened a rice store... Come, let's talk about the profit point? Is the sale price enough to rent the warehouse? The author is just imagining things and has no experience at all... Don't tell me not to care about these details, it's all a bug, okay?

You're a 40-year-old time traveler, don't you even have any common sense? You've lived most of your life in vain.

You, the protagonist is a middle-aged man in his 40s? I look like a minor🙂

It's not without reason that I rush into the street. This kind of time travel to the past, with plug-ins, what the readers want to see is to push forward all the way, like the protagonist's warehouse, I just have the ability to get back food and drink, what's wrong? According to the environment at the time, of course some people would be jealous and report it. What readers want to see is how the protagonist solves these problems and recruits his confidants to make the people he cares about live a better life. Instead of having a cheat and still living a miserable life. Haha, being teased. The people are in trouble, and they are suffering from a lot of troubles. The author does not mention the description of the protagonist's emotions. Just read the comment section and you will understand. There are cheats and a vision that is 50 years ahead of the world. Not to mention masculine charm, he actually wants to lick women. It is such a failure.

I'm really confused. If you want to be real, don't bring a warehouse. If you bring a warehouse, don't go straight to open up a way to write about it, and just bullshit the common people. I can accept being forced to be the captain, but I brag about how awesome I was before my rebirth, and now that I have taken the warehouse after my rebirth, my level is really low and my structure is small. Is it better to follow the normal operating routine?

The author is not from that era. He wrote based on imagination. Feeding cornmeal to pigs only started in the 1990s. Do you know what they ate during the lean years in 1977? In my memory, my family did not have enough food in the 1990s. After beating the rice, I had to find a way to pick out the broken rice and eat it. Let alone corn, it was really hard to save everything that could be eaten.

This is the worst class of time-travelers I have ever seen. They time-traveled in 1977. After more than ten years, they only earned more than one million yuan. Then they went to the countryside to help others get rich. There are more than 40 households in the countryside. No matter how rich a rural area is, it is just like that. Farming is worthless, growing fruits is even less profitable, and raising fish is even less profitable. In a few years, there will be a few young people who are willing to lead the countryside. In China, a country with many people and little land, there is no way to get rich in the countryside. You can only live in a state of not having enough to eat but starving to death. If you are just writing a chronicle, you shouldn't ramble on.

I doubt the author's cultural level. The protagonist doesn't have enough money to provide capital and technology. The woman says that for 20,000 yuan, the protagonist will give him 50% of the shares at one time. If there is a conflict, who can convince whom? Then the woman says she wants 49%. You two are playing house here.

Well, how can I put it, the author has too little experience. I don't understand enough about rural areas at that time

It's so ridiculous. Others' time-traveling is all justified. You, the time-traveling protagonist, are like a loser.

Go check the information and see who dares to divide the land for war preparations. Xiaogang Village doesn't dare to divide the land for war preparations. They all say don't make fun of me. Let's see how you write next.

The most disgusting thing about these authors is that they wrote stories about people who traveled back in time and were farmers and educated youths. If you want to take the official path, you can wait for the college entrance examination. If you have a business idea, don't you want to go to Hong Kong? In an era when there was not enough food and clothing to keep warm in China, any time-traveler who is not stupid will know that there were time-travelers in Hong Kong in that era, and they were all very rich when they got there.

The garbage among the garbage, even if you don't need a gold finger, you can do better than him.

I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter. Why did the author write this if he can't even do math? It is obviously about a man in his forties traveling back to thirty years ago, but the author insists that the protagonist is twenty years old, so he must be at least fifty years old. Those years were eaten by you 😓

Reborn with a warehouse, wouldn't the best way to use it be to become an international bankrupt when the Soviet Union collapsed? Not 404, right?

Indeed, the literature of this era is my favorite

Now I suddenly discovered that this is actually a romance novel.

I've read a few chapters and let's talk about it. But if it's because of that, there's still the end

Special thanks to truant at the age of 3, and to 150721****350 for the reward of 500 points each. At the same time, thank you to all the monthly votes, recommendation votes, comments and collections for support. Although the author is older, he is new to online writing. The novel has many bad points, but I believe he will get better and better as he writes. Progress takes time. Anyway, thank you for your support, thank you!

I hope the author will persevere. There are too few articles like this

This book is good. If I write it well, I feel that I have some strength.

The writing was okay, but the plot jumped too fast. In addition to the good writing at the beginning, the emotional scenes later... Pull the crotch

After looking at the table of contents, the title, the beautiful leader, the beautiful woman, I ran away quickly.

It's so well written, if you keep at it you will become a god.