Daliang: the Violent Scholar

First of all, the title has nothing to do with the content. Secondly, since my writing power is limited, I have to either write essays or write martial arts. Neither of them is good now. Then my cultivation level is too low and I am involved in a lot of bad things. Then it seems that the protagonist is very incompetent and can only be manipulated by others. Cultivation is fundamental, so laying out so many branches will only make it appear confusing. Especially when such a small character is involved in big events and various intrigues, the lack of writing skills will leave readers with a very bad impression. The most important thing is to practice in the early stage. Explain the background well and bury some clues. In the middle stage, you can expand and write as your practice improves. The climax will be in the later stage. Unlike now, when you are a weakling with a ninth-level cultivation level, you get involved in a lot of bad things, and you fight with each other all day long. If it is a Machiavellian book, it is easier to say, but the title of your book "Violent Scholar" will naturally attract readers who want to read cool stories, violence, and strong-related tags. Of course, they will not buy your book.

To be honest, if you want to write this kind of plot where people fight against each other, you have to fully put yourself into the role of the villain, otherwise it will feel very retarded. After more than 20 chapters, I just couldn't do it. It is the best choice to kill someone by leapfrogging a level and have also practiced proprietary skills to directly join the other side. What do you mean by the difficulty of jumping back to hell? Are you still going crazy and seeking death in a situation where you don't know the way out? The exercises are already special, so why do you still need to do them? This pig's trotter is very retarded.

Are there any friends watching this? Can you give me some advice?

Mr. Li did not kill the protagonist. There is no logic at all.

Neither civilized nor military 🙂

Congratulations, congratulations, well written

Is he a scholar or a policeman? ? Isn't it all? ?

This book: The biggest problem is that the author has too many personal items that are not integrated with his own story. Brother, you have been working very hard, but looking at the current situation, I suggest you re-think yourself as an emperor or a powerful minister, and write it clearly.

Does anyone like the character Xi Ren in it? The role is a bit small and I don't know how well it was written. I quite like it myself.

The author's problem is that he has not yet grasped the essence of online writing. First of all, we must understand that online literature is not traditional literature. Most of the readers are young people. They will have a great sense of immersion when reading the book and immersively experience the words and deeds of the protagonist. The plot can have ups and downs, but the protagonist should not be too masochistic, passive, or demoralized. Life is already very difficult, but reading this book makes me feel uncomfortable and has a very poor sense of empathy. How can this book be any good? The protagonist's early performance was too weak, and the Wen Dao who joined the team looked like a bunch of pig teammates. He felt superior after being manipulated by others. Later, the protagonist suddenly became reckless again, but after all, he still had to rely on others as a backer. I never saw the protagonist systematically and seriously thinking about how to maximize the utilization of his "hang", and he was obsessed with boring emotions all day long. It should be noted that in the extraordinary world, since it is necessary to cause trouble, the weak have no right to interfere too much, and it is urgent to consider becoming stronger. What's more, in cultivating one's mind through literature, it is important to remain unchanged despite the collapse of the mountain. The protagonist's performance is too naive, and he is often "terrifying" and "shuddering" in the early stages. It is very different from when he talks about literature and ethics, which makes people feel contradictory. Fortunately, the author's writing style is good. Although there are problems with the plot arrangement, it is not too bad, so I just talk about this in a haphazard manner. I wish the author a bright future in online writing!

The number of readers is gradually increasing, so happy!

Reader: Based on this plot, do you think we are mentally retarded?

Well written! I have also written a novel about Xianxia, ​​and it has been almost two years since I finished it. I know how hard it is to write. As long as you like it, keep going!

The beginning of this book is too similar to the book The Scholar of the Wei Dynasty

Why didn't you kill the protagonist and silence him?

It's okay if you look at it at a glance, but if you look at it seriously, it's a loser.

👏👏👏

It's boring. It's too ridiculous. It just keeps trying to frame you up. Come up with some new tricks.

Looking at the introduction and chapter titles, is it "Da Feng Whores a Prostitute"? I just want to ask if there are any plug-ins. If there are plug-ins, I will look at them. If not, I will not look at them.

Regarding the character descriptions of the supporting characters, I now feel that the Lord of Mysteries, the Son-in-law, and the naming skills of Night are all very good. The key is how to write

It's hard to explain in words! If the writing is weak, the story will be told in a straightforward manner, so that the readers can understand clearly. Everyone is happy and successful, and the conspiracy and conspiracy are all in the clouds. The protagonist is clearly not smart and smart, but he is also set to be scheming and naughty. It is really embarrassing!

Emotion, the big monkey? There are some plots and the writing makes people feel numb

The writing is very good, come on, I love reading it! I just discovered this article a few days ago.

No, they are not all invincible, just a comparison of dishes

What a great book! It solved many problems in my practice. My practice is similar to that of a scribe.

It feels like the pig's feet are getting a little too fierce.

If it were Gungun, these girls would all die.

What does this... Exactly mean? Are you a eunuch?