
Douluo Dalu: Zhongli, the Martial God
斗罗之武神钟离
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 930k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
315Chapters
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It's very embarrassing to see. I have to go to Zhongli to take the exam for everything on the Zhongli panel. Zhongli doesn't bring any money, and the protagonist also forcibly doesn't bring any money. Zhongli has a son to pay for, and the protagonist must have one too. . . This setting is very speechless. There are also personal thoughts. When writing a fanfic or making a second creation, you still have to abide by the original setting. The protagonist now has elemental combat skills, elemental bursts and dragon transformation. What will I write in the future? Summon Ruotuo? Also, a 6-year-old child watched a play, drank tea, and said to others that based on universal rationality. Old-fashioned. It's really a show. Get rid of it, what you wrote is about the modern people who have systematically obtained Zhongli's panel and played Genshin Impact, not Zhongli's time travel.
There are more than 40 chapters in this book, let me know your thoughts First of all, you are Zhongli's template, not Zhongli himself Secondly, I can understand that you hide your clumsiness. I can understand that properly concealing your abilities from outsiders is beneficial to your own growth and safety, but half of the chapter is either lying or thinking about how to lie next. , I didn't even tell the truth to my friends, I didn't even draft a lie, it was a bit jarring to watch Then, this may be my problem, the first one started to awaken the martial spirit, more than 40 pictures have not yet entered the academy, an entrance test has written more than ten chapters (maybe less than ten chapters, but it is definitely very long), what is this? Entrance test? In the end, the protagonist only absorbed one soul ring because of his ability to continuously become stronger, and then he was stuck at level 20, which is only level 13 to the outside world. Please, people at level 30 or 40 can't tell, people at level 50 or 60 can't see it, people at level 70 or 80 can tell it at a glance. Okay, you wrote it yourself, Jin Crocodile can see it at a glance, Jin Crocodile can tell when he sees a cheat, two of the three most powerful people in the entire Wuhun Temple know what you are hiding? To hide it from people who are in their 30s, 40s, 50s and 60s? I clicked on this book because of the original one, but I really didn't expect that there are only 40 chapters, and I have no desire to read it. Unfortunately, I was looking forward to it and spent money to buy chapters just for comments. Farewell!
I have no idea what I'm writing about. What is the Demon God of Rock? I clicked on it when I saw that the martial spirit was Sui, but I didn't see the effect of Sui's strong attack at all. I just saw a one-ring soul master using the ability of the Demon God of Rock to kill a bunch of soul kings, soul emperors, and a soul saint. Since the Demon God of Rock is so awesome, why does he still need martial arts? If the hang is too big, it is equivalent to being directly invincible.
Is it true that when Douluo and Genshen are combined, all kinds of monsters and monsters come out? I can't tell what the author's component and the reader's component are.
What's wrong with you, Yanshen? Yanshen
I couldn't find the word "Guan Hong" in either Cihai or Xinhua Dictionaries. What I found mostly refers to the simplification of "piercing the sun". Bai Hongguanri refers to a treacherous villain? So do you know where it comes from? Baihong Guanri first came from Wei Ce in the Warring States Period. The king of Qin called people Anlingjun. It originally meant a celestial phenomenon. Here it refers to the vision of a warrior getting angry and the sky coming down to help him during an assassination. And where does the meaning of "Bai Hong Guan Ri" referring to a treacherous villain come from? The book of Nan Qi used to mock Chu Yuan's eyes for having so many whites and a small pupil in the middle that they looked like a white rainbow piercing the sun. Moreover, this was a frivolous person who used his reputation to mock him, and Chu Yuan himself had not done much to disappoint his boss in his life. Do you think that the frivolous person could judge him as a sycophant just by saying "Chu Yuan's eyes are white, like a white rainbow piercing the sun, which is a sign of the Song family's lust"? Was Song's death caused by him? So I wonder why a frivolous person who speaks inappropriately, uses his appearance as a joke, and gives him nicknames can be judged on his life? Moreover, the term "Baihong Guanri" in history books mostly refers to celestial phenomena, and there is no lack of praise. Taking advantage of this point, saying that "Guanhong Guanri" is a derogatory term, and those who still say it with certainty, don't they really have problems?
I just want to say that the book's combat power collapsed in the later stages, and the so-called heroine was also fake. The author's initial outline also had A Qing as the heroine. Later, it was discovered that the combat power was out of line and the heroine was the same as the daughter, so there was no heroine, but the protagonist The maid and him ✘✘ (about three hundred chapters, it is almost finished), and there is still the final unfinished story. Huo Yuhao's story has not been finished yet, and it has just started. The author felt that it was seriously out of line, so he stopped writing it and ended it with flowers (la shi). Overall, this book has the protagonist's understanding of the Douluo series. It's really, really good. Tang San's character traits, as well as the various internal and external factors of what he did, and the Peerless Tang Sect (Tang Sect's Dog Training Biography), Huo Yuhao is completely a flag, a dog, and the understanding of class struggle.
Although I have never played Genshin Impact, I have watched Dijun's videos on station B. He didn't look like he was retiring at the beginning, but he also saved people's sufferings. But the protagonist hasn't done anything yet and is thinking about hiding his clumsiness all day long. With all due respect, this protagonist is like a tiger rather than a dog.
This protagonist is outrageous. I wonder if this is not Zhongli himself. What did Zhongli go through before he wants to retire? What about the protagonist? He didn't do anything, and if you think about a six-year-old kid having the same habits as Zhongli, you get goosebumps just thinking about it.
Let me state in advance that I haven't read the main text yet, but just the introduction of Wuhun's evolution from Guanhong Zhishuo to Kunwu Duanhong makes me feel sick to my stomach. What is Guanhongzhishuo? It was the magic weapon used by Prince Yan himself. A rock spear followed Prince Yan and killed countless demon gods in the Demon God War. The whirlpool demon Osai was nailed to death in Guyun Pavilion by Prince Yan with a shot of Guan Hong. Where is Kunwu Duanhong? It was a weapon made by Kunwu, a mortal. Even if Kunwu finally became an immortal, he would still be at the same level as the Three-Eyed Five-Appearance Immortal. From this, it can be seen that Duanhong is at most the same level as Puyuan. It evolved from a demon-level artifact into a weapon most used by immortals. How about playing it?