This Player Is Too Calm

What I think is unreasonable is that since Gu Han has brought Qi Ling Cake to reality, the protagonist has also bought it, and Gu Han also has the function of going online and offline at will. The protagonist has a storage room with a skylight on his balcony, and Gu Han directly uses the offline function to put some cultivation resources. After using up, he uses the offline function to put some more. The author is so stupid. I don't want to After reading it, the main character just bought it once. Why bother with blah blah blah? Don't talk to me about satellites or something. It's so annoying. Just put an anti-seepage fabric on the skylight of the building. Writing like this will only make me think that the main character is a fool 🤭🤭 Compared with giving so many spiritual cakes to the official residence.

The idea is great and the writing is great. It's just that the author is restrained, which makes people feel very inconsistent. The protagonist accepted the official recruitment, but did not receive treatment commensurate with his reputation and potential. And it's not even the slightest bit worse. If it were the real situation, I would definitely feel insulted. The point is that other people actually take it for granted, which is hilarious. Moreover, those people thought they could easily surpass the protagonist. In reality, people are not fools. Couldn't they understand the potential of the protagonist and how fast his cultivation is by asking? In order to appear reasonable, the intelligence was lowered too much. Since we have already written about the government, why not be more thorough and directly write about the emperor and ministers. You don't need to have many rules. Just change the name. As long as the writing is interesting, a large number of people will read it. Moreover, since ancient times, emperors have sought immortality regardless of the consequences. When the time comes to conflict with the protagonist, kill the emperor. Isn't this great? How can it be 404 if it is so reasonable?

The setting is very interesting, but after reading several chapters, I didn't feel comfortable enough. I felt inexplicably depressed.

The new plot is a vicious one. Di Hualiu also deliberately pretended to find a loved one.

The first few dozen chapters were okay, but I didn't feel happy at all after reading it. I just felt a sense of suffocation. The protagonist is even more useless, nothing to say. There are also issues with the character design before and after. In order to eliminate the sense of crisis in his heart, the protagonist built an iron wall and used a large trumpet to patrol the city to kill restless elements. However, he did not care about things that could threaten him.

The beginning seemed okay, but around the 30th chapter it became uninteresting. The protagonist was too restrictive, and there was no desire to continue reading. 🙄

Only the first 20 chapters of this book are available

Inexplicable characters, inexplicable female characters, such a good setting for Bai Xi

The heroine really persuaded many people to quit

Treating people like food and still having such high levels of compassion, this...

When I read about subscribing and became the 97th fan, I realized that this article, which I thought was a bit bland, probably didn't make much of a splash. I hoped that Quan Qin could work part-time to support the author's family. I was really starving to death relying on subscribing. I was a fan in my early 100s and am now ranked 55th. I read 300,000 words before it was put on the shelves. Although it was a bit bland, the overall reading was relatively smooth, but there was no particularly exciting point. The protagonist is the first person at the beginning. Because of the flow, he has the chance to achieve innateness in three days. The locals who are cultivating immortals are shocked. However, this is the fourth time to impact the innateness. The tide of spiritual power is baptized, and most of it is wasted each time to refine the physical body. According to this meaning, it should be baptized all eight attributes of spiritual power, and directly come out and shock the world. But just before this climax, it is not exciting enough. In the past, the planet was used as a relic, and the pattern suddenly opened up, but in the end it became a base for the sect to cultivate innate puppets, and cooperated with the country. As a result, people were teleported out, and they misunderstood the country. From time to time, a second team leader would come out and make speeches to suppress the protagonist. He was aggrieved, but it was not fun enough. Flow does not require resources. It is still acquired, but it is already considered the top combat power under the Yuanshen. With the improvement of the body's reaction force, it should be infinitely close to the Yuanshen's combat power. But now the number of words is still too small. I can watch the climax in one breath, but if I read it every day, I really have no motivation to follow it. There are too few small climaxes, and the branch plots are not rich enough. Basically, the characters in the game are constantly practicing, constantly dying and integrating spiritual power. Sometimes a year or two has passed in a flash. The main body is to practice step by step, and finally appear in front of others. Now ordinary people on earth and the locals of the Immortal League do not think that the protagonist is the number one person. In addition, the country has gradually developed ways to bring spiritual power back, and the high transportation fees are gone. So where is the joy?

If the author doesn't know how to write about female protagonists, then he shouldn't write about it. It's easy to collapse and attract bad guys. We write novels just to earn a living. We don't take that risk, okay?

The female character at the beginning is inexplicable. She is just a rabbit that she has known for a few hours. Because she is too cute, she feels like her parents died and she wants to avenge her. What's the comparison?

All kinds of stupid dialogues give me a headache I have tried my best not to watch this kind of stupid dialogues, but there are too many of them. Just looking at the dialogues, I feel that none of the characters who appear have an intelligence above 20. They are too mentally retarded. They are really too mentally retarded.

Well, the beginning is inexplicably not good.

It's quite comfortable to read and can make people watch it, but the plot is a bit bland. The protagonist has always been the day after tomorrow. Although the combat power is getting higher and higher, most of the spiritual power tides of each breakthrough are wasted, so the pleasure of choosing flow is not enough. I am waiting for a big climax. There are still a few chapters left to start subscribing. I wish the author will write better and better

Apart from anything else, saying that this book is well-written is basically an excuse. The dialogues in the first few chapters feel like they were written by a junior high school student.

Well written

What is written here? It's far worse than the full-level large version. It doesn't feel any better. No wonder the results are so poor.

Okay, it's good to watch, but I feel like the plot is a bit out of control and a bit boring.

Why can't I see this book on the author page from Doing Housework? I thought it was blocked. Let's see if it has been blocked.