I Just Want to Live

I would like to call the book an outline flow writing method, which is almost waterless and has a fast pace. Recently I have come across several books whose synopses have been leaked, and I just want the author to provide more details.

Starting from chapter 36, it can be regarded as two books. White Blindness has a good beginning. It starts to change from a dream, let yourself go, 36 explodes, and I start to have a lot of expectations. I thought I found a good book, but I didn't expect that it won't change at chapter 50. Oh, that's it. Of course, this is my feeling. You can understand it after reading it. You don't need to reply to me about what happened next. When you find that the rice is sour, will you still eat it? Yes, that's the feeling, so bye bye, author, please take your time and work harder

I didn't plan to post it at first. After all, I didn't have the energy to sort out my thoughts and type them out. But when I saw that the author only asked for orders for twenty books, I stopped dead in my tracks. I thought I'd send a book review to encourage the first order. Although I have abandoned this book, if the author is a newcomer (in my opinion, the first book of a newcomer has not been published), there is still the potential to make a living in Internet articles, and this is more than half of the Internet article authors. The traditional Western fantasy has declined (please pay attention here), and the Western fantasy novels that have merged with the two-dimensional style harem Galgame and other otaku novels have great prospects at this time, and the author is promising in this regard. Back to this book, this book is undoubtedly a failure. As another reader said, before and after the "dream" plot are simply two stories. The main thread of the story is almost broken at the neck here. The "Dreamland" episode started off very well, but then it fell apart. The previous main line of the story can be described as "a young man struggling with the use and deception of his mother, and having a sadistic love affair with girls", but what follows is "the young man gradually reunites with his previous life under the arrangement of a system called the evil god". The type of story has almost become a systematic novel, and more importantly, the protagonist's character point has disappeared. The protagonist can be good at deceiving emotions, calculating and despicable, but he cannot aim at it, let alone be indifferent to it. Just imagine, what is the logical support of the male protagonist in the subsequent "abuse" and "abuse" scenes? Working to complete the mission of the evil god? Such a male protagonist doesn't even have an understandable reason, he is just a tool for "strategy". And this problem is not isolated. Another problem is the author's weak setting and background of the story. Not to mention those illogical political descriptions, although I really want to complain about the Supreme Commander of the Inquisition who can execute the Emperor. After the Supreme Commander of the Inquisition was killed by the Emperor, his adopted daughter took over his position. As for the settings of those forces, they are also quite unconvincing, at least it cannot explain why they act like a joke. Even if these are ignored, we can easily find that this book has no clear background and details. All stories unfold between the male and female protagonists, and everything else is just a background board serving the love story of the male and female protagonists. There is no chapter in the following story that can be separated from the male protagonist's system strategy and the description of the female protagonist's status. So although the author's writing gives people a sense of simplicity, like line drawings, this is not due to sophistication in writing but to weakness. Therefore, even if the male protagonist lives in a noble family, we can hardly get a glimpse of the life of a noble family. Even if he goes to school later, we have no way of knowing what school life is like. After all, it's just one blurred background board after another, with only the male and female protagonists and a few supporting characters moving around. Isn't this story progressing very fast? Isn't it like a three-million-word book cut into one million words, because there is nothing else but this. If such a story were to be long, I would probably have to continuously introduce new characters and even new heroines. Finally, let me tell you my thoughts. There are three signs that a novel is failing. One is that the structure of the storyline collapsed when the world view gradually became clear, and the author had to constantly rewrite the outline and background settings, and even made things mysterious, such as many dragon fanfics and the book "Bloodline of the Kingdom"; the other was that the contradictions in the story actually changed the character's personality during the development of the plot. The logic of the pattern or the general background is contradictory, and the author needs the readers to brainstorm and explain themselves; one is the disappearance of the core contradiction of the story, and new characters and settings must be continuously introduced in order for the story to continue. Many books are changed to infinite flow after six or seven hundred chapters. The collapse of this book was unexpected. It was completely the author's deus ex machina that used past lives and dreams to change into an unsystematic flow of systems. Although I understand that it will be much easier for the writer to write this way. After all, it can avoid plots with complex conflicts and character tensions that are difficult to write, and focus only on the emotions of the heroines who are easy to write and routine, but why not give it a try? Looking forward to the progress of the author's future books.

After reading it in one sitting, I was really speechless. Seeing my heart beat wildly at night, it was so satisfying (physics), and I made you cry with such a strong man. Ahem, let's be serious. I hope the author won't listen to the suggestions of readers like us. This kind of abuse text is quite niche. There is no need to abandon some people for the sake of the xp of some people. The author can write whatever he wants. We believe in you. Just follow the way you feel when not many people are reading it. If there are too many people, it will be chaotic. Anyway, our suggestion is, write whatever you like and feel comfortable with it, and don't care too much about our feelings. Anyway, everyone here likes this kind of book to some extent (maybe a little yandere), except of course the trolls who have never read the book and just want to criticize it. Moreover, you are the author who wrote the book. We have only read a lot of books. We have no experience in writing books and cannot give any useful suggestions. But don't be too niche. Minotaurs and the like are still not advisable. In short, it will develop into the aspect of torture. For example, every chapter now gives us a heartbeat, which is very exciting. (ps: It's really too short 😭😭😭)

I'm going to quit porn. I'm only 18 years old. I just want to live. What's wrong with me? Please supervise me, please🙏!

Lively The author didn't know where he stole the picture from, but he stole it because he thought it looked good.

Emmmmm……

Are there any other books similar to Chasing Husband in the Crematorium?

Maybe I have a slight masochistic tendency, I just like the feeling of grievance, the slight pain in my heart, the kind of feeling of being misunderstood and then suffering it silently, and the relief that the heroine feels after learning the truth. Chasing Her Husband in the Crematorium makes me want to stop. Unfortunately, I have only found a few copies so far.

Is the author about to take the college entrance examination? Then come on, and then you must remember this book. There are still many people thinking about it. It's finally on the shelves. Don't be a eunuch.

The author's writing is too messy, and the plot is really rushed. I don't know, I thought you showed me your outline. You didn't describe many details, and it felt dry. Other authors were just filling in the water, and you just didn't have any water. Author, have you read the article you wrote carefully? After experiencing the first 50 chapters, the first feeling is that it is really messy and I had a hard time reading it. The second feeling is that it is very uncomfortable. The protagonist has never been able to get hard. Of course, this may also be the author's characteristic of the article But Chasing the Husband Crematorium does not necessarily make the male protagonist weak. Reading through the whole story, the male protagonist is almost weak in every punctuation mark. Moreover, the author himself couldn't remember what he wrote. The audio recording of Enzo was useless in the end. So what's the point of using it in your plot? The author also has very few descriptions of actions. Most of them are verbal and psychological descriptions. That's okay. He also intersperses dream fragments from time to time. Do you know that it is very tiring to read like this?

If you have anything to say, please post it below and the author will read it.

Maybe I've read too much Shuangwen, but I couldn't stand it anymore after Chapter 7. But gold will always shine. If we are destined, we will meet again in the world.

I don't know why, but I really like watching the plot of the heroine being deflated. It's so satisfying to torture a tsundere.

I can only say that the writing is okay. Although it is a bit literate, I can read it. But there is a very serious problem: the author personally spoils the story, Haixing? Watching it suddenly give you a plan for the future plot really affects the viewing experience, even more disturbing than the sudden dream. In other words, how you write a book is up to you as the author. I'm just a bad reader. I don't want to read the ideas or spoilers.

Although I don't know the function of the dream chapter, I can still be sure that it is garbage. Compared with other chapters, it is like the idle moaning of a down-and-out literati.

When can we show Chasing My Husband? I'm really looking forward to it.

Gender swap, put it as a guarantee for the author of the female channel, a great god will not run away

The protagonist has no golden fingers, no time travel, no rebirth, and it seems to be a book about a sadistic protagonist. At first, it is difficult for people to have the idea of ​​​​falling into the trap. After all, the purpose of reading is to have fun, not to feel uncomfortable. I had this idea at the beginning, but after reading it, I found that it was really well written, and the protagonist somehow felt like being protected by the world (the flavor of Goldfinger), rather than the kind of abusive main text that has no bottom line and ignores the reader's senses.

The poison test was completed, almost poisoned to death

If it really doesn't work, please send me the outline. I really beg you.

Where are the people and the books? My stomach hurts when I write it, but there has to be an ending. I'm still waiting to see the hero and Fu get back together.

What is the name of the new book? Why can't I join the group?

I'm very curious what happened to the author 🤐

Dear author, can I continue writing this book? Super pretty! !