The Universe Starting from Naruto

The writing is too bland, the protagonist has an outsider's perspective, and there is too much development content, and there is no specific strength reference material interspersed with the content (commonly known as a slap in the face). The sense of immersion is also relatively poor. The protagonist is an outsider, and the readers are even more outsiders.

Oh, I'm being carved as a caged bird and still think it's okay. It's really 666. I believe it was to protect the branch family at the beginning, but it changed later. Dangerous matters are separated from the family. People in the clan have the power of life and death in the branch family. To put it bluntly, those in the branch family are just slaves. If the clan wants you to die, you have to die.

There's nothing wrong with being forced to carve a caged bird, but if you think it's okay and accept it, then you have a pure slave mentality.

The protagonist has not achieved anything yet, yet he is called a genius, and then Konoha strongly supports the establishment of a laboratory. This is too fake.

Personally, I feel that the world of Naruto is a truly realistic world. If ninjas have unparalleled power and want to become the masters of the world and unify them, how should the conflicts between people be resolved? So do ordinary people still have value? Aren't these people all cattle, the lowest level of exploited people?

The logic is clear and looks good

Reading this novel is very depressing, the protagonist is completely the author's puppet.

It feels less like an adult traveling through the past and more like a student traveling through the past.

Chapter 95 Author Hello, you are so naive! It makes me want to laugh

The chapters written by the author concerning Metkai and other aspects are full of positive energy. The writing style is good and beautiful\(//∇//)\.

…………It's dispensable, give up, stop writing

It's pretty good so far. The author plans to go for the hegemony stream or the personal strength stream. Also, Naruto's power system seems to be in the direction of the five spirits, not the five elements. Will the author add elements of the five elements? There will also be compression or purification of chakra. Do you want to follow the path of cultivating immortals? There is also chakra to strengthen the five internal organs. . There are also blood inheritance and body. Three aspects of spirit, energy and spirit.

Byakugan's only potential. Probably Otsutsuki's average eye roll per capita

Come on, brothers, let's make progress together!

I can't watch it without thinking. There are so many questions that I don't know what to say.

The protagonist doesn't know Cixuan? What the hell is going on with your protagonist who obviously knows the plot but also doesn't know the plot? Is it disgusting to write? Withdrawn!

Uniformity is a particularly unwise idea. Real capitalists never sit on the front desk.

Did this book kill the Zong family and destroy Konoha?

There is a kind of mindless beauty. Let's learn to play Bamen Dunjia. Let's not talk about the use of those few months of training. If you get supercilious and don't use the soft fist, you can dig it out. The soft fist not only exercises the ability to control chakra, but also builds physical fitness. You occupy the manhole and don't poop.

This timeline is obviously wrong, right?

There is a problem with the introduction. Byakugan is one of the three major pupil techniques that are as famous as the Sharingan. What other pupil technique is among these three? It is not mentioned directly... This is a sick sentence in itself, and to be honest, I did not expect that besides the Byakugan Sharingan, there are other pupil techniques that are as famous as these two.