Tokyo Juggernaut Daily Life

It can be seen that the author borrowed the character of the senior sister from Academy Apocalypse when writing Busujima. However, the reason why the character of Busujima in Xuemei is liked by people is because she is tough on the outside but still has a soft side towards the protagonist. As for the poisonous island in your novel, the author, there is no such feeling. It just makes people think that this is a sb woman, so give up, it can't be corrected.

It's quite interesting, but there are too many characters in a short period of time. The previous characters haven't stood out yet, and new characters have appeared. Now my sister has only appeared for a while, and I have almost forgotten about it. The chapter has a lot of words, but some words feel unnecessary. It would be better to simplify it, so I subconsciously skipped it. I complained about too much explanation. , So far, except for the swordsman, the protagonist has no special features, but don't be a bitch in the later stages. People don't dislike the fact that there are many female characters, but if you continue to use female characters to promote the plot, it will appear that these women are causing trouble to the protagonist, and they will become bitches. Well I will complain, come on, author...

Busujima-senpai in School Apocalypse is a good woman who can say "It is a woman's reserve to protect a man's dignity" and do it well. The Busujima Chifuyu in this book, I must be honest, this woman is a complete madman. Twice she held a sword against the protagonist, once she wanted to cripple the protagonist, and once she wanted to kill the protagonist and taste the taste of blood. And now there is a trend of whitewashing, and a lot of descriptions are given. There is a high probability that she is one of the heroines. Isn't it good for the cute little Sangong? In the last kendo competition, in the team competition, most of the kendo club members who disliked the protagonist asked the protagonist to be the forward, and then the protagonist and the forward 1vs5 led these FW passers-by who looked down on the protagonist to win.

Call it a cool novel, but the protagonist has no sense of empathy for the public readers. The source of the protagonist's power is not clearly explained. It describes how powerful the protagonist is and can defeat all enemies, but he is not known and recognized by the world, and the protagonist has no growth trajectory at all. It is said that the protagonist is a time traveler but does not look like a time traveler at all. More like an old monster who died and was reborn. You can say that this is a home story, neither passionate nor funny.

I have a time-travel quota in my hand, which is first come, first-served. You can time-travel to the world where this book is located. If you reply with the golden finger you want below the comment, I will send you time-travel. It doesn't cost any money anyway, just believe it a little bit, just in case what I say is true (˘•ω•˘)

Congratulations to myself for writing another book

I can't figure out whether the protagonist is strong or weak. After reading Chapter 9, it took a long time to fight the two strange protagonists. If you want to say he is strong, can't you say it with a single blow? If you say he is weak, he wins again.

I hope there will be a single female protagonist . The male protagonist himself is emotionally weak and it would be strange to have a harem.

Are only Japanese people such trash? Can they be bullied if they read minds?

When I read the seventh chapter, the monk kept jumping up and down and taunting him. He said, "If you don't have the ability, forget it. If you have the ability, why don't you fight back?" This is a monster world view, and you still use this kind of humiliating plot. No wonder the book is not popular.

It's still a bit lacking in taste, this protagonist. . . Every cat or dog can step on them, and they can endure it. . .

Author, let me do the math for you. You code one word per second, which is 3600 per hour. There are 24 hours in a day. You sleep for 6 hours, eat for an hour, wash for an hour, and give you another hour for conception. With 15 hours left, you can code 54,000 words, a chapter of 2,000 words, almost 27 chapters, but what does it mean that you only updated 1 chapter?

After all, you have also experienced countless swordsman killings in the dream, and the number of deaths is unknown. So why Busujima Chifuyu will destroy you at the beginning, and even use the killing move in the backcourt, what is this concept? Not to mention other killing moves with wooden swords, kendo moves like Cut Back can kill you, and moves like Face Back Keto can break a few of your ribs, not to mention that this person is using the most penetrating thrust, and the location is at the throat. What is behind the throat? If you are lucky, your brainstem will be disabled and you will never touch anything except your head. If you are unlucky, it will twitch like an electric pig on the ground like a pig and then die. Don't believe that Busujima Chifuyu's wooden knife can break the floor. And I am talking about normal people. When Busujima Chifuyu uses it, it is a rush to death. She was maimed to death. I really don't understand why the murderer, Hitoshi Toto, didn't kill her in the follow-up. However, the three women were solved well in the early part and the follow-up, but they were immediately cleared up later 😅 I can't appreciate Busujima Chifuyu anyway. If they join the harem later, I really have no desire to watch it.

Why is it another eunuch book? What kind of things does the daily guide recommend to labor and management?😅😅

I discovered a problem. Japanese comics and light novels generally have a coquettish feel to them. I thought it might be a problem with people in Japan.

Why do you want to help (killing demons and slaying demons who had a good life in childhood?) Anyway, I don't feel how many of them die. I don't know why, maybe it's because I'm cold-blooded! By the way, have you ever traveled through time or been reborn in the past to let monsters destroy and create a harem (a novel about a good life)

I just read a few chapters, is the author really a novice? It can't be some old eunuch's new skin, right?

Another book to keep to death. . I originally planned to come back one month after it was put on the shelves, but when I arrived, I found that it was already a eunuch.