Madara, I Didn't Open My Reincarnation Eye Until I Was Eight Years Old, Is There Any Hope?

The title and introduction of the book make me not want to read it at all. If it hadn't been for a long time, the content would be okay.

I see a lot of people think this book is going to be gone. Let me explain. Don't worry, everyone, this book won't be too late, I promise. If the book is less than 2 million words, the author does not have a girlfriend. By the way, I am the author.

You add one or two chapters of driving to the main plot of chapter 12, and everyone laughs after reading it, and you also start reading it. But you can't write two chapters for one main plot and three chapters for driving. If I want to watch driving, I can't open the browser? I came to Qidian to watch the fighting adventures, not to read TM books.

? ? ? That's it... Chapter name, the car speeds up. It turns out that the content of the chapter is leading to kindergarten... If the author bluffs the chapter title and implements it in the chapter, it will not be exempt... Do you know the story of the boy who cried wolf? Who is fooled again and again?

Author, I think you should skip this dummy as soon as possible. You are going too far. You wrote too little about the main world and the dummy was too long. Your first dummy was very good! Why not write it in several times so that the plot can continue better. You have written forty or fifty chapters of the world in one go. It is very uncomfortable to watch. Also, the author, if you are a newbie, don't try to control the system in the main world. You won't be able to control it. Make the Blue Silver Grass Emperor's spirit normal in the main world.

I hope there won't be tauren, the pure love God of War hates these things 😢 Otherwise, I can only bear the pain and give up my love.

In fact, if the Third Hokage excludes the influence of the author of the original work and writes it according to the real world, when the Third Hokage was killed by Orochimaru, the ninjas did not take action, it is probably his fault and unpopular. In the original work, Jiraiya fought several psychic beasts of Orochimaru. Kakashi and Gai were dragged by the soldiers and failed to fight. Those human ninjas basically took people to escape. There were only a few ANBU jounin who wanted to save the third generation. The elites of Konoha basically stood aside and watched their third generation Hokage fight to the death. Looking at it this way, he has really lost his heart. This is why Orochimaru came to kill him. His teacher is Shinobu, the Hokage of Konoha. Instead of being a lingering politician, let alone dying as a politician, his best ending should be to die fighting to protect Konoha. Maybe that's why Jiraiya took action. Their teacher, the Third Hokage should be the Ninja hero. The best way for him to die is to die fighting for Konoha, and it is best for Orochimaru to do this.

This book reminds me of a manga I read before, a serious manga, White Zetsu Prison and Konoha Hospital

Let's start the chapter on Brother Corpse. There are really very few fan works about Brother Corpse now, and there are many fans of Brother Corpse

Congratulations to Douluo for reaching a new low (Ps: Dou Wu's)

This book is a sand sculpture novel. Although the routine is relatively old, it is very interesting. I provide a brain storage service. When reading this book, please remember that 1/2 of your brain is stored in my hands. I will naturally send it back three days after reading it.

The plot is very good, but the description of data, such as thousands of kilograms or hundreds of kilograms, is really embarrassing and rubbish. It feels like the author doesn't even have basic physics knowledge right. In addition, I seriously suspect that the author has never watched Naruto at all. Even the size of the psychic beast is wrong. He may have checked the information, but he has definitely never watched the video or anything like that. Because no matter how you look at it, there is no way those psychic beasts in the original work were only a few meters long. You wrote that Wan She was only more than ten meters tall, so tell me, why is Orochimaru standing on his head? Based on the above, the author's knowledge of physics is really low, and his description of qualities is always weird. But the plot is really good I still hope the author can slightly change those values ​​that are too small.

I made a prediction: In the future, all the memories of the female ninjas in the Sims will appear in the real subject. After brainstorming, they will find the protagonist and start giving them to them for free, and then the protagonist will open a big harem. This post is proof!

The Demon Slayer Breathing Technique is useless. Come and cultivate immortality. Convince yourself with nine breaths and practice your Qi to achieve immortality. Breathing is the appearance, and divine will is the foundation. Breathing in and out of heaven and earth, Qi combines with all things.

Stop writing this copy. It's smelly and long. Can't one copy have more than ten chapters?

First of all, the book is good, with good ideas and features. The author is very imaginative and the subject matter is very novel. Interested book friends can take a look at it, it can be regarded as a good source of information. The fact that I took the time and energy to write such a long paragraph to talk about the problem instead of abandoning the book directly shows that the author's subject matter is still very attractive to me. Then let's talk about a few problems (most of them can be overcome, so it's a good guide) The first thing is water, there's too much nonsense, there's no need to describe it too much. One event can be understood in dozens of chapters. At the same time, different people in different places wrote the same thing repeatedly. There were signs of this from the beginning, but the Inuzuka family episode was too much to bear. The second is depression, which is most obvious on Inuzuka's side. To raise before suppressing is a mature and stable technique, but the degree of raising and suppressing must be grasped. When you are suppressing, it is foreshadowing. Your foreshadowing is like this. My mental journey in the fourth chapter is like this. The first part is not bad. Just skip to the next section, or skip to the chapter. (You can refer to this. The entire book made me feel depressed but didn't make me feel depressed.) Speaking of which, I can be regarded as one of the book friends who can resist drug abuse. I didn't expect that they made me feel depressed (I don't know if I feel depressed enough to type such a long paragraph). Wrong) In the end, it actually has something to do with the subject matter. This book actually feels a bit like a group portrait in it. The relationship with the protagonist gradually becomes less and less. There are too many descriptions of other people, and there are a lot of unnecessary plots. The second thing is that the plot is really slow to advance (unless the introduction is really your outline). So far, I have only introduced wood-escape plants and wood-escape Pokémon. We can't just play around with Mu Dun. We can just start a book and write about this. This idea can support an entire new book. I feel that this ability should be dug wider rather than deeper each time. It is said that it is too short, but it is actually too watery. Many plots actually affect the senses and can be said to be inconsistent. For example, there are strange ambiguous ways with female characters interspersed. Some are interesting but some feel do not match the overall feeling. Here we need to sort out the outline and clarify the specific audience. I hope the author will work harder. I suggest you sort out the outline. Then, I suggest you write in your own way. I just said some of my own feelings. You can take a look at the specific writing but don't be affected. The authors who were influenced by readers before were not happy with both sides. Come on, the creativity is really good.

I don't feel good about eating psychic beasts later on, so I'll get over it as soon as possible. The psychic beast is a comrade-in-arms. It feels like feeding it to a good brother.

It's a bit confusing at the end. Let's make the main line clearer. Describe the protagonist's virtual experience of life and write more about reality.

Can't you write about psychic beasts well? The Thousand Hands chapter is stinky and long

Now I just hope that the parasitic species does not have the function of self-infection. Otherwise, no matter how fast scientific research is, it will not be able to withstand the speed of infection. The thought of this monster in the Warring States Period makes me feel sick. The consequences of letting oneself go are bigger than the previous times, and even more difficult to deal with.

What does the Blue Silver Emperor Martial Spirit represent? It is the basis of the ultra-abridged version of the Gaia model, the possibility of a wide-area network covering the planet's vegetation.

Come on, author, I feel that virtual life is better written than reality. I like to read imaginary articles 😍

Will Madara come to the real world? It would be very interesting if he did. Age spots: "I have three younger brothers." Youth spots: "What a coincidence, I also have three younger brothers." Age spots: "I became close friends with our family's archrivals." Youth spots: "Me too" Age spots: "We We jointly created Konoha Village, but later we had differences in ideas and then he and I fought in the Valley of the End for three days and three nights." Young Madara "Me too, but he took me to the Valley of the End and fought for three days and three nights, and finally we agreed."

Author, hello, Pinru! 🤓I have been thinking that if Sasuke and Madara were women, it would be a soap opera about chasing his wife in the crematorium😜

Author, parallel time and space need to be distinguished clearly, don't confuse them

For the link between the world and the world behind the author, you can refer to Infinite Tsukuyomi. Is the dream world of Infinite Tsukuyomi really fake? So everything appears because of people's expectations? Is it possible for Naruto to have a parallel world? Infinite Tsukuyomi just uses illusions to replace the parallel world that people long for. What if Infinite Tsukuyomi becomes a technique that connects worlds and travels through parallel worlds?

I feel that my power has grown too fast, and I will soon become invincible. How can I write it later so that I don't jump? Please give me a lot of support, the author 🤓

The author will update soon, I can't stand it anymore, it's too short, I really can't stand it.

It's a very novel and imaginative article. It's very interesting. I hope to keep writing it.

You can try to turn a plant into a large-scale supply system, so that the troops within the range can focus more on attacking, and no longer need to worry about restoring chakra by themselves (hiss... It seems to be quite similar to the Zerg carpet, just an idea, if the author has a detailed ability division in the future, it will be fun to watch)