Congratulations on Your Arrest

Book Review 1. Plot 2. Characters 3. Setting 4. A little bit of my personal inner development 1. In the early stage, I was rushing to the progress. It was originally a bit of a Gintama modern ability user version, but after Uncle Tokugawa's accident, it became faster and faster. Nothing much to say. In terms of plot, I was able to hold on to the Wano Country chapter, but then I really let it go a little bit. 2. I feel that the author wanted to create the characters well. At the beginning, the funeral club did a good job. Shikamu, Snake Ghoul and his daughter, as well as the good-for-nothing man and his mother who appeared in two chapters are all vivid. After that, I was deeply impressed by the many scenes of Captain Aizen as the villain, but I felt that the scene with his sister was a bit off. Gaius' memory kill in Swordsman's Life and Death Battle was okay, and I was somewhat looking forward to the secret relationship between him and his master, but in the end nothing was said. I've always been curious about what happened between master and disciple. I really hate Amuro, an old politician, especially the section after the report letter where he confuses right and wrong, but this is also a good portrayal.        ，，……，！ Whether it's a forced 1-star crime or a plot design that becomes more and more marginalized later. Also, the woman from the Tianlong Tribe was originally designed to be the second wife, how come she was cut off?! Is it because Shura Field is difficult to write about? The battle description is unique in what I have seen, with a strong Japanese style, but the emotional scenes are not good, the dialogue between the characters is stereotyped, and the corners are too straight when driving. In the scene where the protagonist and his wife kiss for the first time, some of the words are too deliberate. Now there are three heads of the Nine Families, and they all feel the same, except that when the old fox asked his youngest son to go to Earth to kill the protagonist, he acted according to the situation, which was a little different. At that time, I thought that Betancourt planned that either Occam would kill his niece and nephew-in-law or be killed. One of the two parties who had a mortal enemy would die, and he could just befriend the one who was alive. I think he is ruthless and tall enough. As a result, it seems that in the dialogue when Alita was captured, he really just asked Occam to contact Alita to take revenge for killing his father. Why did he forget to send Occam to do this? It must be the author's fault! The head of the Nine Celestial Family has no courage as a person who knows the "truth of the world", and has never had a conversation about where the earth is from the beginning to the end. The third generation of Betancourt had no heir, but the two continued to drink tea, feeling that the heads of the nine families were not important. 3. From the setting, it can be seen that the author himself has to do a big job. From the section about the funeral home, it can be seen that at least up to now, the problem of setting up is not serious. The main plot of this book is the growth of the protagonist Higashinohara. On the big side, in the early stage, various problems caused the revolutionary army to fight against nature and man. Recently, strange demons are taking the initiative to attack, the orange boss is dispatched, and a world-class disaster is coming. I guess the author wants to use this to divert conflicts. Generally speaking, it's good. After all, racism, aristocratic capitalists, and the good and evil of human nature cannot be solved in a novel. In reality, human beings are still a mess of all kinds of confusion. I think the author can still hold on to the main plot, but there are really too many mistakes in the process. For example, the plot advances too quickly, the protagonist's battles rely too much on hanging, and the important emotional scenes (probably Shikamu and Phoenix Academy at the beginning, and more recently Alita and Ellie from the Tianlong clan) were cut too much and the romance described was insufficient. 4. Finally, there is a personal statement. The author should have originally come up with a Japanese manga light novel similar to the web version. The "Nine Families" correspond to the "Ten Master Clans" that I first thought of. Tokugawa Ritora is Matsudaira Katakurihu and Dingding. The esper is a typical Japanese manga, but the ninth level domain, rules, and order are the expression of the web novel system. I'm looking forward to it because these are frameworks and they are well done, at least it feels good at first. The overall outline design and world view are well done. It is unique among the online articles I have read. I really want to make a breakthrough. This is also the motivation for me to pursue it. The depiction of the battle is unique, the cool points are densely packed, and the tributes in many places are easy to resonate with. It's just that here, the background design, especially the alien demon earth, is careful. There is no alien invasion or spiritual revival. The heavenly being named the airborne landing at the beginning corresponds to the gate to the alien world later. The actions of the revolutionary army are also more realistic, which can be regarded as a satire of the revolutionary army in the previous Japanese comics (yes, I am talking about Wang Lufei's father, who is worthy of being a neon, and even revolutionaries dare not rebel). But then, both the portrayal of the good and the bad guys and the depiction of the original relationship between heaven and humans began to be one-sided, and then there were some places that could be called a clean break. I feel bad! Why is this happening? It's okay to have a normal number of words, and my escape from Konoha is not bad, but, alas. I think there are definitely reasons for the big changes in the plot that we don't know about. I don't know and I don't want to say more. I want to tell the author that I like your book. I will continue to follow it, just to finish reading this story. At least now, it has an important place in my heart. I will continue to read it. I hope the author will not hate me too much when he reads this. I really like it, so I said this😭.

Speechless (#-.-) Can you divide it into 1, 2, 3, and 4 final chapters like this? I haven't even finished it yet, but I can meet and talk to each other in 2 chapters. . . . . .

I'm speechless. This is so bad. In my opinion, this author can be blacklisted. . .

The world view is very stitched and the plot direction is very fixed. It's a bit old-fashioned. The combat power system is sloppy. If the protagonist is not strong enough, he will use the golden finger to forcibly improve it. After that, he will get a comprehension talent. If the system increase cannot be beat, he will rely on his comprehension to break through to force the plot. The original earth plot is very attractive. The origin of the heavenly beings is revealed in one chapter without sufficient foreshadowing. The biggest failure in the later period is this. It's like putting the outline in my face, and the explanation is unclear. The ending seems to be forcibly cut off💩. I wrote the final boss battle and the ending in one chapter. The word count is very long, but it is still a failure. It is really embarrassing for a great author to write like this. As a transitional author, I can barely accept it. I don't recommend it to old bookworms. Newbies can take a look.

Wear a mask to carry out justice, and get a 30-point super buff. Isn't this just Kamen Rider killing monsters after transforming? ! Blanching, the ultimate stitching.

My name is Kira Yoshikage, 33 years old. Living in the villa area in the northeastern part of Morio Town, she is unmarried. I work in the Guiyou chain store. I have to work overtime until 8pm every day before I can go home. I don't smoke, and I only have a taste of wine. Go to bed at 11 o'clock in the evening and sleep for 8 hours a day. Before going to bed, I must drink a glass of warm milk, then do 20 minutes of soft exercises, go to bed, and fall asleep immediately. As soon as you wake up at dawn, never leave fatigue and stress until the next day. Doctors say I'm normal.

Thank you so much to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง, I come from lol, even though I am the ultimate sewing monster, as long as it is fully sewn, it will look good (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

There are so many bad sentences, why don't you refine them?

It's well written. I'll give you the first two monthly passes as encouragement.

After reading part of it, I would like to briefly talk about my feelings. The world view and power system are quite interesting, the characters are quite exciting, and the story content is also quite interesting But there are also some shortcomings. There are too many characters, and the names are very complicated, so I can't remember them at all -_-||, It is also a good idea to switch to different perspectives, but meeting a lot of characters is confusing. My brain capacity is too small and I can't keep up with the author's pace. The most important thing is, can you expand the plot and write it in more detail, and make the characters more fleshed out. The running accounts are richer than this. You can consider this a summary⊙▽⊙The plot is too fast, the author is great! Everyone is welcome to express different opinions. I will continue to read books and update with new opinions.

Thoughts of an old bookworm who has read Chapter 210 of Arrest: Protagonist plug-in analysis + world view analysis + plot prediction + personal reflections The protagonist is also a strange demon, and the abilities of the strange demons are unique. The protagonist's ability is the panel, the type of cause and effect. After the earth was destroyed by a strange demon, the protagonist turned into a special strange demon, and then merged with the original body by chance. Based on the current plot, neither heaven nor supernatural powers are native products of this world, and should all originate from the world beyond the border. From the perspective that the earth is gradually turning into a world of strange demons, there may be more than one world behind the border, and the heavenly beings escaped from similar worlds. Judging from the desire of heavenly beings for strange demons, maybe heavenly beings have unique ways to use strange demons. A bold guess is the source of heavenly beings' unique talents that are independent of the ability sequence. This can be seen from the Devil Fruit that can give you the second ability at the beginning of the book and the words of the first judge saying "What Devil Fruit..." (Also, "Captain Aizen" is awesome, after all, he is a man who can control "Hengyu", and he is worthy of "I am just a scientist"). The original world of the Celestial beings was eroded, but just like the earth's one-to-two-year process, the Celestial beings obtained unique powers from the strange demons through research and adaptation to the environment during this process. Even the so-called dragons, eagles, and other changes in the Celestial Beings came about this way. After that, I found another world, which is now the main world. I came here and started to engage in racism between gods and humans. Rule, with the help of its own powerful power and all aspects of transcending the main world to rule for hundreds of years (more and more like the Draco and the World Government), to maintain its position in the subsequent revolution should be by sharing the invasion of strange demons to pass on the contradictions and the original world cannot be copied or the cost is huge Large and powerful weapons (definitely use them if they can be copied or the cost is not that high. Americans dare to test atomic bombs on their own people. In order to maintain their rule, rulers will do anything. The most vicious ones who killed the Boxers were the late Qing Dynasty, not to mention that the gods never considered themselves human). As for the ninth order [order], humans definitely have it, otherwise the revolution would not be half successful. The next plot development is definitely going to get bigger. The revolutionary army and the truly sovereign country are about to officially appear. The sky tree is about to usher in the era. The invasion of alien monsters is a crisis and an opportunity. The heavenly beings need to strengthen their strength. If possible, it would be best to return to the "Celestial Dragons". The revolutionary army and the human country also want to obtain the secret of the strange demon. If they have enough power, who would want to have multiple emperors? (Being submissive is like an island country, but there is still a subordinate who conquers the superior) The curtain is about to open, and whether this book is a dragon or a worm, you can only read here. Based on my experience of reading three major migrant workers comics and starting to get snarky halfway through them all, the biggest problem with a long novel is that the world is too big to control. In popular terms, "the pace is too big and it is easy to get lost." For this, I can only hope that "Broken Chapter Night" will have the experience of the first two books. The writing and outline can hold up, and I can continue writing without causing things like "The king is tired, the ground is ringing, and the green card is severed." Next, let me talk about some of my personal feelings about this book. There are only two books that I am willing to spend money to buy, one is "Escape from Konoha", and this one. The former is a normal three-view and I like it, while the latter pricked my ability, pirates, world government, and Wano Country (this is the key point, I was disgusted by Wang Lufei and Momonosuke). But the reason why it will continue after that is because the plot develops at a clear pace, the villains' collective IQ is online, and the climax is coming again. So I have to say one last thing, Baoer, breaking the chapter is not a good thing to teach! ! !

Take stock of how many stitches the author has stitched, not necessarily all, welcome to add. Wano Country, Four Seas, Celestial Beings: "One Piece" New Tokyo: "Neon Genesis Evangelion" Instant Prison Shadow Killing Formation: League of Legends Ittab Shura: "Fallen Knight Hero Story" Judgment Department Black Robe Execution Team: American TV Series "Black Robe Picket" (suspected) Strange Demon Ability Green Sorrow: Isn't this the Hulk?

Bad news: Stitch monster Good news: It's all sewn up

Let's put it this way, the background setting is similar to One Piece, the Metropolitan Police setting is the 13th Division of the Death God, the weapons are One Piece, the characters also have One Piece prototypes, Naruto skill prototypes, etc., But a few more words are added to the move names! Let's talk about ability limitations. It's impossible to increase physical growth or even ability growth through training (except for the protagonist). This is outrageous! I don't understand how the strong men in that world advance to higher levels, and I don't understand why they need to practice sword skills! The question is, can sword skills and other moves still be used? Isn't that weird? Slipped away

There is a question. From the beginning, the protagonist only has Shadow Shun, then he kills the councilman Cang Lei, and then uses Cang Lei, and then kills the water-controlling pirate, and then he can use the ability to control water the next time he appears, and then kills the female assistant who uses fire, and can use the fire again the next time he appears, can others really not see it? I was just blindly shocked. How could this man have another ability? Why didn't he think about why each new ability was the same as the ability of the person he killed last time? The female assistants are not counted because no one knows about it, but Cang Lei and Shui Shui clearly know that it is the ability of the two villains, and then the protagonist kills them and uses it No one has ever thought about this, they are just constantly shocked. This person has new abilities, just like a fool

Suddenly I found that there is no idiom solitaire in this book circle, so I will start from my side and increase my popularity Colorful

I originally wanted to experience a different life in the book, but it turned out that the male protagonist was an outstanding one.

You will always like these handsome guys

It turns out that 200,000 yuan is not worth it. I finished it in one night and didn't even let me stay up late.

The old thief Gou Ziye returns Xiaotong Jiang to me and takes a mouthful of thick phlegm from me! He~tui!

The protagonist of this book is completely divided. He usually relies on running to become stronger. Without the plot, his strength will not increase. The problem is put on the protagonist who usually has no contact with criminals. If he can't get in touch, why can't he take the initiative to look for it? This country is in such a mess, doesn't he know how many guilty people are in the government? If the protagonist doesn't dare, then why should he stand up and be a hero? Why should he go to class every day? Catching a few more criminals is no more useful than that. Where were all those criminals in the first place? Obviously not all perpetrators are particularly strong, will they die if they kill a few more monsters? Normal people are already hexagon warriors, but somehow they have to let the protagonist burst at the critical moment. Why can he continue to explode? Just because he is the protagonist? The mechanism of the manual is also full of loopholes. The will attribute is like being eaten, and I don't know what it is used for. It didn't say how the elemental ability becomes stronger or what attributes it depends on. You can use other people's abilities as if your abilities don't need to be exercised. You can be as strong as you want. The villains are also as if they have lost their minds. Even if they can't see the protagonist's abilities, they still insist on giving away their heads one by one. Look at what they say "go away". Normal villains with brains will directly let the boss go instead of sending soldiers to gain experience for the protagonist. I don't care much about the characterization. If you don't know how to depict characters, don't write it. The little girl is not the same person before and after. Originally, although the world view was inexplicably illogical, and the characters and backgrounds were all kinds of suture monsters, the subject matter was still a good one and was worth watching. Now I can only say one word, poison

It's both good and passionate, and the writing is pretty good. I haven't seen a book like this in a long time.

The writing style is good, and so are the three views. It's just that the Golden Finger's rise is too slow. Maybe the author is afraid that the Golden Finger will be too powerful and that it will develop too quickly and there will be no more writing, so he suppresses it and keeps adding water, resulting in a simpler plot and a more depressing overall story. Basically, he can't show his IQ. The author focuses on describing the trivial characters around him, and the readers are too lazy to read. I was looking forward to reading the first 100 chapters, but I ran out of patience after chapter 200. After reading the table of contents, I gave up on the book. If I continue writing, I will first delete many unnecessary plots in the past, especially those in which peripheral fish only appear once. Strive for simplicity. Internet articles must be of high quality in order to have a low word count, a single plot, no IQ show, and no one will read it in the later stages. Then increase the gold finger and climb with great force. Gain a private anchor point in the Earth realm and gain massive skill points without maliciously killing the original inhabitants. The heavenly government is so evil, and the judges are so powerful and arrogant, pinching chicks and slapping them in the face every day. I have never heard of an author who was unable to write because his golden finger was too big. The main character has a single main line of energy, which is too monotonous. That's it for this book. If you have any suggestions, might the next book be better?

The emergence of strange demons led to the birth of the consciousness of the earth called the consciousness of Gaia. Humanity, which had been tortured by heavenly beings for thousands of years, finally, at a certain moment, completely awakened its own consciousness and gave birth to human will. Ashaye, in the constant battle with strange demons, human will gradually assimilated, and the will of the heavenly people became The will of all the primates living on the earth, and then the two willpowers got bored and created the Hall of Valor, which started the Holy Grail War. Some of them escaped naturally, and there were also existences that forced Tianlun to the earth. They were also watching the earth with eager eyes. The two willpowers decided to summon heroic spirits to help humans defeat these existences.

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The plot is quite blunt. I originally relied on gaining points to become invincible, but I ended up just following the plot. Others have grown up over decades. The protagonist's attribute points are an hour late. Then there is no plot, there are no missions, and you can't meet bad guys in your daily life. A 0.5-Star thief on the street also has missions at the beginning, and later, even a 7-star or 8-star thief is not considered a bad guy.

I saw that it was a high-quality book and it was complete, but after reading dozens of chapters I just couldn't stand it anymore. As an old bookworm who has been around for more than ten years, I have rarely commented on books. But I really want to complain about this book. I don't know if the data is fake. The background setting of this book is a fusion monster without any characteristics, and the plot is not convincing. Fang, I really can't stand it anymore, so I'm going to cancel it. Of course, everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage, and it's understandable that some people like this type of book. But I still hope that the author can write some unique books, or have something of his own, even if it is a popular book. This can attract your own die-hard fans, otherwise it will just make readers lose interest in your other books after reading this one.

Book Review (to Chapter 370) This is the third time I have posted a review of this book. To sum up, it is full of regrets. Let's first talk about the analysis of the protagonist system. I think the protagonist has become a strange monster when the earth was invaded by strange monsters. Just because of ability or other reasons, he merged with the original body. The system is actually his ability as a strange demon. It is estimated to be a supernatural ability above orange. There is another guess, because of the setting of the awakening of the seven seals of [Doomsday Apocalypse], whether all the seven seals will be orange after awakening or advance to orange. The top 20 are purple and orange abilities, so will purple abilities be promoted to orange abilities when they are developed to the extreme? (Purple abilities correspond to orange abilities one-to-one) [Characters] Humans Higashinohara: The protagonist, the author should design his character according to the character of a ranger, bloody but not a virgin. There's not much to say about the force, but I think the character label is a bit bland, just not very distinctive, and it makes people think of what he is like when he sees him. I only saw the uniqueness of the time traveler when interpreting Chinese in "Earth of Strange Demons", but nothing else. To be honest, as a time traveler, there are actually many conflicts between the memory of the past life and the general atmosphere of the world in this book and the country of Wano. If you can pay attention to this aspect of psychological description, it should make the characters more three-dimensional.        :（），，， Aunt: The third female character has too few scenes, and she seems to have "unreasonable desires" for the male protagonist.        :＋        "":， It seems that he is not dead yet, looking forward to the follow-up. Summary: The author should have prepared a "Gintama"-style protagonist group from the beginning. At the beginning, these characters were quite fleshed out, but as the process progressed faster and faster in the later stages, the subsequent characters became thinner. Celestial Being The First Judiciary If other Judiciaries are villains with bloody hands, then the fact that he has sat in the Judiciary for decades with a gentle expression makes people shudder. His ability to silence "Hisoka" with just one glance is also a description of the tip of the iceberg of his terrifying strength. Apart from the protagonist in the book, he is the only person with the ability to master unlimited fields, making people think that he is invincible. He is extremely powerful and not lacking in wisdom. This clever move of withdrawing from the Adjudication Division and his subsequent performance can be seen that he still believes that the situation is under control. At the same time, he is an obvious racist, and his usual gentleness is just because he no longer needs to use his tone and expression to scare others. Suspected to be the final boss of Tian Ren Fang. "Hisso" Pusuo Hisoka is a ninth-level purple ability user, and he is a true genius who can see through imitation of other people's sword moves at a glance. He can become the second judge of Shangjing as a pure human being. Perhaps there are not many celestial beings in Shangjing who are his opponents. Looking forward to a battle during the harvest. "Empress" Alita, the heroine? I feel that her ruling is unorthodox Gaius: Seeking benevolence to death Summary: Nowadays, the description of heavenly beings is somewhat stereotyped. The newly emerged empress seems to be a heavenly being who prefers humans, but there is too little foreshadowing in this regard, which makes it feel sudden. The rest of the celestial beings are somewhat facial-shaped. "Insects" Revolutionary Army: It's just a little worse than One Piece's Revolutionary Army. Is it because my requirements for revolution are too high? The "Revolutionary Army" I met didn't match my impression of revolution. Councilor Capitalist: Can rent but cannot buy. Summary: The old man of Celestial Being is right, this group of people can't achieve anything, Celestial Being cannot be overthrown by them, unless Celestial Being is too powerful, but the Celestial Being in this book really has not reached the so-called "end of the dynasty". How can we possibly overthrow heavenly beings with these insects! Plot Wano Country: The first half is very well drawn, with many words and inks, especially the part where the uncle was framed and the Minister of Foreign Affairs confused right and wrong. I was really angry. The Wano chapter is probably the part that the author was most prepared for, so I got into it quickly.        :，        :!        :，，，，， Combat Martial Arts It feels a bit like a Japanese light novel, and the formula is unique and very attractive to me. [Summary] There are many books about supernatural powers in the Internet, but the systematic and Japanese light novel-style combat descriptions like this book are refreshing to me. The series of unfolding ability settings have always kept my interest. However, I still feel that the author seems to be rushing forward, and the settings are very good but not really used. I mentioned the unrestricted field, but I still haven't seen the specific effects. I don't know the situation when the author wrote the book, but judging from the early description of daily life and the first few female characters, the author should have prepared a lot of daily content. Again, I feel like it's a bit rushed. Last but not least, the above is just my personal opinion, and I have no intention of telling you to do this. I like this book very much and will keep following it

If you say you want to time travel, just do it. Why should you destroy the earth in your previous life? It was also changed into a place where a demon lives. The earth gave birth to you and raised you, but you also destroyed the earth at will.