If You Were Asked to Participate in a Variety Show, How Could You Become a Working Emperor?

Overall, the writing is okay. I recommended it to someone next door and read 51 chapters in two sessions. According to the score, it is about 65/100. The writing is okay, the hot topic type is interesting, and I can read a short plot in one breath at intervals, but I really can't catch up on it. Personally, there are three suggestions for improvement related to the plot (the plot can be improved): 1. Someone commented on Old Fairy - Married Sister - xxn on the Internet. The villains of the three are seriously homogeneous. In fact, they can be distinguished. For example, the image of xxn on the Internet regardless of the truth, the sister representative cannot see the good gossip, the old fairy uses external tactics to suppress her in order to protect her interests, and then uses ambush to slap her in the face, etc. It's real and feels better when slapped in the face. 2. The opposition between the good and the bad is too obvious. For example, you can lose in competition but still receive encouragement, and then it can be extended to a positive image of the protagonist unintentionally getting a lot of help. For example, the ancient singer can add a plot. In order to surpass the protagonist, he resists capital, but he is no better than a cheater, and finally becomes a supporting character who is both an enemy and a friend. After writing the game in this way, the subsequent transitions will not be blunt, and the results will not drop too sharply after a climax. 3. The biggest problem lies in the selection of songs. The songs should be for the plot and not the other way around. For example, "Night Taxi" can be used for "All the Way North". This is consistent with the previous plot. It can be said to be a love song. From an outsider's perspective, the protagonist begins to let go of the past love and is left sad and lonely. It corresponds to the previous plot, rather than the basic nature of the movie, "All the Way North". For me, this is just a zero-hour mission reward. Then I rated the first song a little weaker but not too bad. The rich second generation provoked me, and then I reversed it with the Cantonese song "Under Mount Fuji". It can also distinguish the gold content of the main line role-playing reward songs. Similarly, the short plot of "The Storyteller" was very well arranged.

Songs of Brother Fengzi (Seventeenth Preface to Sophora Preface) in the book 1 Black sweater 2 Dear, that's not love 3 There is always a group of people 4 Storyteller 5 Hongchen Inn 6 Under Mount Fuji 7 All the way north 8 Big Fish 9 Preface to Orchid Pavilion 10 On the Qingming Rain

Why is it that as long as today's entertainment novels are related to music, pig's feet are like full-picture ridicule? Everyone wants to fuck him and everyone looks down on him?

Not bad, but can you change some of the bad writing methods? For example, it was deliberately arranged for the old fairy to wear a black sweater and write a song... It was too deliberate! For another example, gaining experience is not added until you start singing...

I have read too many celebrity articles of this kind recently, so I would like to summarize a few points. Whenever the protagonist sings a song, it is a golden song. No matter what kind of song you sing, the judges or instructors are all asking for it, and the diva invites you to sing. No matter what kind of songs are sung, passers-by can tell that one is good or the other is good, as the average music conservatory professor is a passerby. Finally, I want to say one thing: not all big stars sing golden songs, some are praised by fans, but they are not that good.

I understand that working emperors are at the top of their profession. You can only talk about experiencing life. If you use it as a book title, you are suspected of selling sheep over dogs.

Looking forward to an update soon, but the main character's name feels a bit weird. Meifeng, not sealed, not crazy? Author, how afraid are you that your book will be blocked? 😂😂😂😂 However, I was really afraid of being criticized by the pastoral guards for some of the things written in the book. However, the author, don't be a coward and work hard all the way to the end! Then, I hope that the green tea bitch will be punched to the end in the future, and never give a little chance to get ahead. This kind of woman can just be a passerby villain. Punch her to death, and don't give her a chance to stand up. I feel bad when I write too much.

I have no problem with Jay's good songs last week, but I can't stand the bad songs he played last week. Aren't Swords Like Meng Hongchen Laughing ten thousand times better than Hongchen Inn?

Already invested, the author will keep updating By the way, I'm actually not too cold about the element of the brainless fairy. After all, I've been disgusted in real life, and I don't want to be disgusted again by reading a novel.

Can you please stop writing about Ji Bolei? It was outrageous that he was the last to reach the semi-finals in the end, but now he is planning to open a studio and he should be brought along with him? Is he really an adopted son? I don't want to see being a nanny anymore, it's so poisonous!

I'm really speechless... It's over

Nine out of ten women written about are abnormal.

Feel. . Recently, there have been a lot of books about celebrities and side hustles. Do you have any ideas?

I have a wish that the author only uses Jay Chou's works from beginning to end. This may be something no other author has ever tried

To be honest, I really don't feel the laughter of Canghai. Every time I read entertainment articles, I always talk about how ridiculous it is. But I am not a professional. I, an ordinary person, can't feel it! 😰😰😰😰😰😰

Yes, there are three chapters of gold (as we all know xx is yellow), all the elements are complete, you can successfully persuade me to quit, and I can dream back for a few years.

Okay, more updates, you can use your feet if your hands are tired.

As soon as I saw the introduction, I frowned and said, "Quit!"

Others have gone out into the world without their swords being fitted properly, but you have already fitted your swords and found out that the door is welded shut 🤫🤫🤫

I was attracted by the title of the book, but then I found that the content was completely different from what I thought, and the routine was too old, and it was very clumsy, and I didn't even know how to choose a song... When it comes to heroes, even if you don't make Canghai laugh, you don't have to be called a hero, right? ! Hongchen Inn...... I'm convinced

Is your singing ability just about your pitch and pronunciation and timbre? What about emotional contagion? What about the singer? What about techniques? What about vocal range?

It's OK to fill the water, but it's your fault to fill the sea.

It's already 2023, and it's really unnecessary to still be doing the same thing.

Depend on. I gave you my monthly ticket and you want me to enter the palace?

After reading the beginning, I found a lot of male-female antagonisms and various descriptions of fairies. I really didn't like it, so I put up with it. At the beginning, I banned the memory of the earth and thought that there was no copywriter. After completing the task, another form of copywriting was really too much.

Why do I feel like I'm a eunuch if I continue to write in this state, don't do it 😭

If you can write quickly, take a look at your grades. If your grades are not good, you can still pile them up if the writing is large.

It started to leak after it was put on the shelves, and the monthly tickets have been torn off

After reading Chapter 6, I felt a little overwhelmed!

Plot summary: The protagonist travels to another world and participates in the variety show "Voice of Creation". When he is at a loss, the advent of the "Baifida Life" system becomes his life-saving straw. Little did he know that this made his life more and more abstract, and his identity became more and more... Tags: entertainment, music, system, time travel Recommendation: Entertainment articles copied official documents, and most of the protagonist's works came from the system. Many things were clearly not experienced by the protagonist at his age, but he wrote songs. This has always been a serious bug. But this book adds a link before the system sends songs - Baiwei Life. From this, the songs in this book all have their own legitimate origins. This is the author's most outstanding point in setting, and it is very worthy of recognition. But this wonderful family is missing a small flaw. My parents wrote songs about their parents for the future, but the second sister was too abrupt, there was no need to create a conflict, and besides, she was still in the third golden chapter. Most of the entertainment stories are just pretentious and slap in the face. Coming to this one when the protagonist has just got the song and wants to show off his strength, it feels a little inexplicably aggrieved. In short, the flaws do not hide the virtues. With an excellent setting and a careful handling of family issues later on, this book will undoubtedly become a new star in the entertainment and literary circles. It is worth following everyone. Rating: ★★★ Status: Stable serialization {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}