My Path to Immortality in Journey to the West

In my personal opinion, Heavenly Court in Journey to the West is not bad, and even most of the operations are reasonable. It maintains order in the three realms to a large extent. The law enforcement organization must be less humane, but if you look carefully at what Monkey King did, isn't this what terrorists do? , Break into houses and rob (Dragon Palace), destroy the order of reincarnation (underworld), steal and destroy important resources (golden elixirs and flat peaches), disrupt the leader's drinking bureau, and even rebel against the leadership of heaven. If it is true that Sun Wukong rules the three realms, it must be a disaster

It's a great movie, but the protagonist is too timid. He finally came to Huaguo Mountain and was startled when he heard the Monkey King coming down. Didn't he prepare for the worst before coming? I was shocked. I really felt like that.

The writing style is good, but the writing style is a bit depressing, which is not good. The author writes about enemies and grudges along the way, and the minds of humans, ghosts and demons are treacherous and changeable. This is not an urban cool novel from 2012, a pretense of revenge after enmity. Come and explore some fairy tales and write some pleasant things. You can go and take a look. It has been against routines since a few years ago. Your model is a bit like the old routines. The protagonist passively responds to the enemy all the way. You can write that the protagonist is active and sinister. Wouldn't it be better to have a little fun in engaging the enemies? Just like that Wang An, a mortal, always spoiled him, find a place where no one is around and kill him, then he will be quiet, and nothing will happen afterwards. Instead of showing off your ability to act as a foil later, it would be very embarrassing. This kind of embarrassing B is not popular now. I feel that the author doesn't know much about how to write more character interactions, and the protagonist's personality is not very obvious, and it loses a lot of interest. If this continues, this book will be a hit. I can only say that this book has a good subject matter and smooth writing, but the content is embarrassing.

Another one who writes about spiritual practice as part of the underworld. It's still based on Journey to the West, but it doesn't follow the world rules of Journey to the West and makes settings out of thin air. Without the background of Journey to the West, he is just a gangster cultivator. A little disappointed 😔

In fact, the monkey is just one of a kind, 🤓, the irrefutable proof is that the monkey boasted that his golden cudgel could smash stones into pieces and leave marks on pig iron, but the facts proved that the monkey was bragging. When the yellow wind monster hit the Crouching Tiger Stone, his hand was sore due to the shock...🤭, so the strongest defense in Journey to the West... The Crouching Tiger Stone Tianzun... The group of gods in the sky and the group of monsters beaten by the golden cudgel are even worse among the weak. Their physical defense is not as good as a stone.      …，…，，…？ Wouldn't it be enough to just use the Erlang Shen hook knife to kill the monkey?

The five immortals of heaven, earth, humans, gods, and ghosts in Journey to the West are talking about the direction of cultivation, not the realm of cultivation, right? The most basic setting is wrong, right?

In the original work of Journey to the West, Sun Wukong is a monster who can be cut into pieces without mercy. Zhu Bajie, Monk Sha, and Little White Dragon all die without mercy.

The protagonist's mental, willpower and courage, cultivating immortality and seeking Taoism, are useless.

It's too depressing, the reality is uncomfortable enough

The writing style is too depressing... And I like to write about leapfrogging monsters... And the protagonist is a traditional person b