My Journey to the West, the Immortal Road

Dear author, what do you mean by magnificent and majestic? In this aspect, you can write about daily life and local customs. Don't just write about realm. How does realm advance? That would run counter to your introduction (purely personal thoughts)

Wouldn't it be nice to go to Wuzhuang Temple to learn from Zhen Yuanzi?

In my personal opinion, Heavenly Court in Journey to the West is not bad, and even most of the operations are reasonable. It maintains order in the three realms to a large extent. The law enforcement organization must be less humane, but if you look carefully at what Monkey King did, isn't this what terrorists do? , Break into houses and rob (Dragon Palace), destroy the order of reincarnation (underworld), steal and destroy important resources (golden elixirs and flat peaches), disrupt the leader's drinking bureau, and even rebel against the leadership of heaven. If it is true that Sun Wukong rules the three realms, it must be a disaster

It's a great movie, but the protagonist is too timid. He finally came to Huaguo Mountain and was startled when he heard the Monkey King coming down. Didn't he prepare for the worst before coming? I was shocked. I really felt like that.

The writing style is good, but the writing style is a bit depressing, which is not good. The author writes about enemies and grudges along the way, and the minds of humans, ghosts and demons are treacherous and changeable. This is not an urban cool novel from 2012, a pretense of revenge after enmity. Come and explore some fairy tales and write some pleasant things. You can go and take a look. It has been against routines since a few years ago. Your model is a bit like the old routines. The protagonist passively responds to the enemy all the way. You can write that the protagonist is active and sinister. Wouldn't it be better to have a little fun in engaging the enemies? Just like that Wang An, a mortal, always spoiled him, find a place where no one is around and kill him, then he will be quiet, and nothing will happen afterwards. Instead of showing off your ability to act as a foil later, it would be very embarrassing. This kind of embarrassing B is not popular now. I feel that the author doesn't know much about how to write more character interactions, and the protagonist's personality is not very obvious, and it loses a lot of interest. If this continues, this book will be a hit. I can only say that this book has a good subject matter and smooth writing, but the content is embarrassing.

Another one who writes about spiritual practice as part of the underworld. It's still based on Journey to the West, but it doesn't follow the world rules of Journey to the West and makes settings out of thin air. Without the background of Journey to the West, he is just a gangster cultivator. A little disappointed 😔

In fact, the monkey is just one of a kind, 🤓, the irrefutable proof is that the monkey boasted that his golden cudgel could smash stones into pieces and leave marks on pig iron, but the facts proved that the monkey was bragging. When the yellow wind monster hit the Crouching Tiger Stone, his hand was sore due to the shock...🤭, so the strongest defense in Journey to the West... The Crouching Tiger Stone Tianzun... The group of gods in the sky and the group of monsters beaten by the golden cudgel are even worse among the weak. Their physical defense is not as good as a stone.      ……，……，，…………………………？ Wouldn't it be enough to just use the Erlang Shen hook knife to kill the monkey?

The five immortals of heaven, earth, humans, gods, and ghosts in Journey to the West are talking about the direction of cultivation, not the realm of cultivation, right? The most basic setting is wrong, right?

In the original work of Journey to the West, Sun Wukong is a monster who can be cut into pieces without mercy. Zhu Bajie, Monk Sha, and Little White Dragon all die without mercy.

The protagonist's mental, willpower and courage, cultivating immortality and seeking Taoism, are useless.

It's too depressing, the reality is uncomfortable enough

The writing style is too depressing... And I like to write about leapfrogging monsters... And the protagonist is a traditional person b

Forcibly creating conflicts and all kinds of troubles are meaningless at all.

There are no big poisons, but there are constant small poisons. In order to promote the development of the storyline, there are many blunt and unreasonable turns. A book of food and grass.

The ancestor gods of the Yellow Emperor are the highest gods of the Han people. Our ancestors Fuxi, Shennong, and Youchao are the real gods, and they are gods of integrity and bravery. Human heroes and martyrs are regarded as gods. In ancient times, the emperor even made gods, but now all the people can make gods. In history, our ancestors and martyrs who contributed to civilization are gods. Pangu, Sanqing, Hongjun, and Buddha are all bullshit, bullshit, bullshit.

This book is frustrating and poisonous at the beginning. Simply

First there was Bajie and then there was Tian, ​​Dapeng, the greatest immortal in the world. Jiuling Zhenyuan has great supernatural powers and always has a unique trick in a fight. The scorpion tail needle Wukong in seconds, how can all the injuries be healed overnight? Nine heads are originally a worm, and the monkey captures the pig and returns to the Dragon Palace in seconds. Liu Er was originally a trick to get rid of Wukong and replace him. Red Boy's divine fire is invincible and was taught by Laojun's own father. Except for the Bull Demon King, the Seven Saints are all from the lower realms of the Gods and Buddhas. The rolling curtain greened Duke Dong, but the Jade Emperor was angry. Xuan Zang's biological father was Liu Hong, a Buddhist monk who killed his father and his mother to obtain Buddhist scriptures. Erlang Xiaosheng named Yang Jian, single-handedly captured Wukong. If you ask me, Meishan Saint, my magic power is weak and useless. Bodhi is originally the Tathagata Buddha, and the Jade Emperor actually became a doorman. Buddhism and Taoism have a game to see who has the most delicate mind. Laojun is old-hearted and carries an iron fan on his back. The minds of all the immortals in heaven and earth are like demons, and they take advantage of the benefits of learning scriptures. Eighty-one difficult monsters, each one more powerful than the other. If you ask who is the weakest in Journey to the West, the most famous monster in the history is the one.

There is something wrong with the setting of this realm. Heavenly Immortals should be those who have become immortals and are canonized by the Heavenly Court and have immortal status. They can be called Heavenly Immortals. Earthly Immortals should have their own caves and blessed lands and can be called Earthly Immortals. Human Immortals should be similar to Erlang Shen who major in the physical body or enter Taoism through martial arts. Gods should be canonized by Heavenly Court and major in the way of incense and fire. They are similar to mountain gods, river gods, earth cities, etc. Ghost Immortals are also called Corpse Execution Immortals. It should be similar to the Ten Palaces of Yama, Black and White and Impermanence in the underworld.

Don't accept any apprentices. Once many writers from the Xiuxian sect have apprentices, they almost become nannies. It's frustrating to watch.

The writing is really good. A journey to the west world is narrated by the author. Different from Wu Chengen's perspective, the author explores the wonders of the journey to the west world from the perspective of an ordinary person. There are old monkeys who go on pilgrimage thousands of miles to repay a favor, there are bad but distinctive snake monsters, there are villains, there are gentlemen, and there are mortals. They are not plain but are logical and in line with their perspective. The author does not simply describe the growth of the protagonist, but some of the characters and monsters he encounters during his growth are very attractive, and the plot is not obtrusive. I look forward to the great sage created by the author, and the Journey to the West written by the author himself 🤭🤭🌹🌹🌹🌹

By the way, the 100,000 heavenly soldiers and generals who defeated the monkeys in Journey to the West were not just miscellaneous soldiers. Let's first take a look at the lineup of the One Hundred Thousand Heavenly Soldiers - [The Four Heavenly Kings, in collaboration with King Li and Prince Nezha, point to Twenty-eight Stars, Jiuyao Star Official, Twelve Yuan Chen, Five Directions Revealing Truth, Four Levels of Merit, East and West Stars, Two Gods in the North and South, Five Mountains and Four Mountains, and Universal Stars, a total of one hundred thousand heavenly troops, laid out eighteen heavenly and earthly nets, went down to the Huaguo Mountain to besiege, and decided to capture and punish him. The gods became the masters and left the heavenly palace. As soon as I left, I saw the yellow wind rolling in, covering the sky, and the purple mist covering the ground. He only deceives God for the monster monkey, causing all the saints to descend into the mortal world. The four heavenly kings reveal the truth in the five directions: The power of the four heavenly kings is the total system, and the truth revealed in the five directions mobilizes many troops. Li Tuota, the commander of the army, was in charge of the attack, and he was the vanguard of Nezha. Luo Houxing was the first to check, followed by Ji Duxing. The lunar star is full of energy and the sun star shines clearly. The five planets tend to be heroes, and the nine-star likes to fight with each other the most. Yuan Chenxing Ziwu Maoyou are all powerful heavenly beings. The five plagues and five mountains are placed east and west, and the six dings and six armors are placed left and right. The four dragon gods are divided into upper and lower parts, and the twenty-eight places are densely layered. The horny Di Fang is the general leader, and Kui Lou's stomach is used to churning. The bullfighting girl is in danger of the walls of the room, and all the stars in her heart are capable. The ghost in the well, the willow star, Zhang Yizhen, the wheel gun and sword dance show his power. The clouds stopped and the fog descended on the mortal world, and we set up camp in front of the Huaguo Mountain. - This is the most elite main force of Heavenly Court [Lineup: Twenty-Eight Constellations, Jiuyao Star Official, Twelve Yuanchen, Five Directions Revealed, Four Levels of Gongcao, East-West Star Dou, North and South Gods, Five Mountains and Four Desolations, Five Dou Xing Lord, Five Plague Messengers, Five Evil Stars, Universal Stars A total of 100,000 Heavenly Soldiers] are all elites, no miscellaneous fish, and the last ones are all stars, just like the 100,000 naval elites in the battle on the top of One Piece. It can be said that this is basically 80% of the main military force of Heavenly Court. Except for the troops of Leibu and later Zhenwu, all the elites of Heavenly Court are here. They are Li Tianwang, Nezha, the four heavenly kings, the twenty-eight constellations, the nine obsidian star officials, the twelve yuan chen, the five directions, the four levels of merit, the east and west stars, the two gods of the north and the south, the five mountains and four mountains, and the universal stars. Now let's introduce their identities one by one. ★First of all, it goes without saying that Li Jing, the Grand Marshal of the Three Realms Conquering Demons, and Nezha, the Great God of the Three Tanhaihui, are household names. The Four Heavenly Kings are respectively the Eastern King of Control, the Southern King of Growth, the Western King of Guangmu, and the Northern King of Duowen. They are the divine generals who guard the Dongsheng Shenzhou, Nanzhanbuzhou, Xiniuhezhou, and Beijuluzhou respectively in Buddhism. In "Journey to the West", these four guard the four gates of the southeast, northwest, and northwest respectively, and are the important guards of the gates of heaven. From this, we can see the strength of these four. ★Nine-Yao Star Lords are the Sun, Taiyin, Jidu, Rahu and the Five Virtues Star Lords of Metal, Wood, Water, Fire and Earth. Among them, Jidu and Rahu are evil stars. The Sun and Taiyin control good and bad luck in the world. In "Journey to the West", Taiyin is also the master of Guanghan Palace, that is, the master of Chang'e and Jade Rabbit. The Five Virtues Star King is linked to production and is worshiped by the king. ★The Twenty-eight Constellations are a group of twenty-eight stars in the four directions of the southeast, northwest, and enjoyed important incense in the official sacrifices of the Ming Dynasty. One of them, Kui Mulang, is stronger than 20 Bajie + Sha Seng. However, Kui Mulang was beaten many times by Wukong, and he was a god general who was afraid of being beaten by Wukong. ★Twelve Yuan Chen refers to the Tai Sui god who is in charge of the twelve months in an arrangement of the twelve earthly branches. It also received official attention in the Ming Dynasty. ★The Four Values ​​Gongcao is the heavenly official in charge of the four values ​​of year, month, day and hour. ★The Five Directions are the Golden-headed Revealing, the Silver-headed Revealing, the Polo Revealing, the Paraṣṇa Revealing, and the Maha Revealing. They are the powerful gods who protect the five directions in Buddhism. ★The east and west stars and the north and south gods generally refer to the stars. Among them, the south dipper is the palm of life and the north dipper is the palm of death. ★Five Sacred Mountains and Four Sacred Mountains, the five mountains are Dongyue Taishan Tianqi Rensheng Emperor, Nanyue Hengshan Si Tianzhaosheng Emperor, Zhongyue Songshan Zhongtian Chongsheng Emperor, Xiyue Huashan Jintian Yuansheng Emperor, Beiyue Hengshan Antian Xuansheng Emperor; Sidu is the water god of the Yangtze River, Yellow River, Huaihe River and Jishui. They are called the god of Dongdu and Dahuai, the god of Nandu and Dajiang, the god of Xidu and Daji. The Five Sacred Mountains and the Four Sacred Mountains were the objects that ancient kings had to offer sacrifices to. "The emperor bowed his signature in the Zhuwen, and sent officials to offer sacrifices with the title of Gengding God - "History of the Ming Dynasty·Book of Rites III"" ★Putian Xingxiang is the general name for the stars in the sky. These gods were gods that even the rulers in the Ming Dynasty had to worship and did not dare to neglect. ———— In addition, the author criticizes Sun Wukong's evil deeds of causing havoc in the Heavenly Palace, which is an act of deception, but at the same time he praises Sun Wukong's spirit and strength in causing havoc in the Heavenly Palace [The Great Sage Qitian is not a lie] [The hero dares to take the lead now] He also wrote later [Natural disasters lead to suffering, human affairs are desolate, and life is long. If he is a hero and can show off his talents again, he will worship the Buddha and go to the West. Fu shows off his strength and power, subdues the dragon and subdues the tiger to make him behave well. He stole peaches and drank wine to travel around Tianfu, and received his favor in Yujing. The whole body is full of evil and trapped, but the roots of good will continue to rise. Sure enough, he was able to escape from the Tathagata's hand. Let's wait until the Tang Dynasty produces a holy monk

It's a pity. It's an interesting book. It doesn't follow the crowd. It's quite creative. It's a pity that it was eunuched.

Cultivation of immortality is not about worldliness, but cultivation of immortality is the return of great power to oneself. What is the protagonist doing every day? Why don't you practice hard?

Good guy, another book that was raised to death, alas! ! ! I am thinking that the score of this book should not be bad╮(￣▽￣)╭

Objectively speaking, it is not very popular with most readers. There must be some ups and downs, and you can't always be depressed. Some mainstream Internet literature hopes that the author can consider this.

The protagonist is written as someone who forgets his life at the sight of small profits, and has no bearing at all on cultivating immortality and immortality.

In Journey to the West, if you are handsome and smooth-talking, you can try the Peacock Princess, or you can try the Bone Lady.

Has the author published a new book

A good book was interrupted by trolls who accused the author of being autistic.

This article ends in the most exciting place. This book has both immortality and moral integrity (especially the section on Fangcun Mountain) and chivalrous courage. However, the author hastily finished it. It is not as good as the eunuch section, and he will write it later 🤫