Gods and Demons Sweep Across the Nine Provinces

I'll be honest, it doesn't look good. There are too many characters and events at the beginning, and a lot of settings are thrown in before they are substituted. The unfolding of the plot events has an inexplicable feeling. It doesn't look like the beginning of a novel, but more like an outline? The opening chapter is dazzling and the story line is a mess. I think the author should go to the rankings, take a look at the master's books, and carefully study how the master mobilizes readers' emotions through words and creates a sense of involvement. The author and I highly recommend several books that you can refer to: the first three chapters of "The Naming Technique of Night"; the first eight chapters of "Professional Players in the Universe". My humble opinion makes me laugh.