I Want to Be the Protagonist in Film and Television

This is a running account of the whole article, it's long and smelly, I'd like to mark it so that I won't turn to this book again in the future and waste time.

Over and over again, one sentence can fill dozens of chapters.

The book is too watery. After reading 40 chapters, the system is not reflected very well. I can write two or three chapters for a small matter. There are too many watery words. It is estimated that if the grade is not good, it is probably a eunuch. I need to change my thinking. The article should be as concise as possible. It does not reflect the advantages of modern people at all. It feels very routine.

If Silly Zhu just accepts Uncle Yi as his godfather and the old lady as his grandmother, everything will be solved.

😍Keep it.

This book is good. I, an old man who came out of a literacy class, could even guess and understand it. At least there is a high level. In order to take care of people with limited education like me, Che Zulu kept talking over and over again. He also taught me what meat dishes are (meat dishes are dishes with some meat in them). It was a great experience! I have no regrets in this life.

There is a scene in the TV series where Yan Jiecheng opened a restaurant and was short of money, so he wanted the third uncle to invest in it, or directly borrow the third uncle's money. Wo Cao, what I didn't expect was that Yan Bugui would have to pay interest on the money he lent to his own children, 10% of the interest. It was really good. Later, Yan Jiecheng and Yu Li agreed with their teeth. In order to pay less interest, they even took care of borrowing money from others and repaying it. My father's interest is in charge of borrowing money from others and repaying his father's money. It's really... The money earned in the first few months of the restaurant was used to repay the money to the third uncle. In the end, the third uncle was jealous of the stupid Zhu who brought the food home and wanted Yan Jiecheng to bring him a dish too. He didn't want Yan Jiecheng to look disappointed and sad, and looked at Yan Jiecheng as an "unfilial son". Oh my god, these three views are really explosive.

This writing style is really, at most, better than that of a primary school student. I really can't stand it anymore, a good subject matter has been turned into a piece of crap.

It's too watery, and the plot follows the TV series, which is uninteresting, and Goldfinger has no sense of existence. I don't know if the author has a bad memory. He often writes the same sentence multiple times. Is it because he has to say something important three times?

The whole plot is a running account! The rhythm is like chasing a ghost! Logic is completely unthought of! Give up early

I've read more than 40 chapters, and it's all about Silly Zhu's shit. You might as well change the protagonist to Silly Zhu. A group of people told you in your comments to keep your nose out of Silly Zhu's affairs. You said you were a newbie and changed it right away. In the next chapter, it was Silly Zhu. I felt like you were provoking, and the space seemed to have been forgotten. It seems that it has not been used, and there is no space for the protagonist to improve his life. Forget it, I am too lazy to say more. If you have said too much, you will think that I am a black man who came to blackmail you. I have withdrawn it. I can't stand it anymore. I won't say much else, it only represents my own point of view.

The writing is not very good. The key is that I don't have a lot of common sense, and I can't grasp the prices of the times. I want to write about business but I don't have common sense in finance, so I can't read it!

According to the author's setting, the protagonist is a wandering soul. Every world is about building a business and making money, all the same. I don't improve my quality in all aspects, and the space seems to be of little use.

I really can't stand it anymore. After reading the first few pictures, I really want to vomit. I would rather have some fan points than complain about it. Don't read this book. It's so rubbish. The real protagonist of this book is also a waste.

The way the author writes is similar to how primary school students write essays. For example, what will I do today, what will I do, what will happen in the middle, etc.

What the heck is Qingman Siheyuan? The starting point urban area is all like this, I almost vomited.

Yu Li is played by Duan Lizuan

I'm drunk too. You write a book just like a running account.

This book is also called Traveling through the Siheyuan and licking silly pillars to work as a nanny

The author has more than 800 chapters. You have no reflection at all. Have you counted how many chapters there are? In short, and, come on, anyway, at this time, can you use less of these words? The people listening are really speechless. How about you use the word "" more carefully?

If the author doesn't understand business, then he shouldn't write it. It's really embarrassing to read😓

Don't fool the readers here.

I feel that the author has the same character as the protagonist in real life. When I saw the protagonist asking others to borrow money, it really pissed me off. Others don't have that much money to lend you, so you just calculate how much their salary is for others. How could you not have that much money to lend to yourself?

The author's writing style is poor, and I don't know if it's due to his usual speaking habits or something else. He always adds "" or "" at the end of a sentence, which is very confusing.

The writing style is really bad, there are so many "that" and "that", it looks like a primary school student writing a composition 🥵

Can you vote for recommendation? I thought no one was watching now?

The writing is very poor and the sentences are broken and it looks so uncomfortable.

It's so well written. I haven't seen a really honest defense in many years. I haven't seen anything really bad since I was in junior high school.

The three views are relatively positive. It's just that the author's writing style is a bit poor (I don't know if it's intentional for the sake of word count). There are too many spoken words and they are all messy sentences. It is obviously a sentence that must be broken into two or three sentences. The sentence fragmentation makes it tiring to read. It sounds too uncomfortable to pause for a few words.