Weird Master

Author, I really recommend that you write less about politics in the future. A book I read some time ago has a similar background and worldview to yours. The author was so obsessed with the writing that he kept focusing on revolution and leaning on it, which made me feel very disconnected. What you are doing is in conflict with the revolution you want to revolutionize. It's really uncomfortable, you can describe it, but don't become the main plot and main plot behind it. Really, this is my suggestion.

Too long to read version: The outline of this book has drafted four important female characters, and three of them have already appeared, including Novi and Catherine. You can guess who the third female character is Author's nonsense version: Regarding the issues of multiple heroines, single heroines, and no heroines, the author can see it in the book review area of almost every novel, including various posts posted on the forum every day. "Single heroine bar", "No heroine bar", "YY novel bar" and "Sad Snow Blade bar", etc... It must be admitted that this is an issue that many readers are concerned about. Although the good wish is that "everyone can understand each other", in fact, just like the sweet and salty tofu brain dispute, the author has to choose a side, and vacillation will only bring greater consequences. For this book, the elements written in the title and introduction, such as mystery, esotericism, and weirdness, must be the first and top priority. Whether it is the doll Novi or Catherine, the author follows a same tone when designing and describing: while describing the female characters, he is also describing weirdness and unfolding the worldview. The four heroines are all closely related to the core structure of the worldview, so there can be no more and no less. If you feel uncomfortable about this, the author expresses his regret ORZ In addition, I asked the editor for the reading data, and the reading and chasing ratio surprisingly exceeded 50. It is really a rush to grandma's house, so readers are advised not to buy books in the new issue, but just turn to the latest chapter and take a look (Zhijiang)

It feels like there are elements of esotericism, SCP, Cthulhu, mystery, and everything.

No, the protagonist must be led by someone, right? . . Why did he gain more power when he first came to Beihai? I'm not saying it's the protagonist's problem, but it's obvious that the protagonist could have been alone for a period of time, but he ended up boarding a pirate ship inexplicably.

The first chapter is very attractive to me, but for this type of book, the early results will not be very good, so work hard.

Don't include too many political aspects in the novel, as it will be difficult to write and you will suffer a loss. Instead, try more weird and extraordinary stone books.

Qidian Harem can't describe the sex scenes, it's really boring, lsp can only make do with it.

When a beautiful country accuses you of having nuclear weapons, you'd better really have them

I don't understand the weird identity of the protagonist. It has no disadvantages, no good, and no external abilities. Instead, it has hidden dangers.

Is it because there have been a lot of articles about esoteric Buddhism recently, or I just didn't notice it?

It's a weird stitch in all kinds of novels, but the writing is really good, and it can be accepted by multiple female protagonists, but the author likes to include personal information. If it is inadvertently included in the text story, forget it. When writing a novel, it is normal to express the author's point of view while inadvertently including some personal information. There is nothing wrong with it, but the author's export of personal information in the whole chapter is really discouraging to read.

I think I still need to write some settings. If I write it all at once, 90% of readers won't be able to remember it.

Dolls

I feel that these level warlocks are so weak. The sixth level warlocks only have so little power and have no ability to make qualitative changes. Shouldn't they be an instant kill for low level warlocks? After the external power disappears, the protagonist can easily reach the hospital even though he is in a weak state and the villain is strengthened... It feels like there are a lot of bugs

Please write carefully and don't listen to the person below who talks about sensitive topics. The investigation will be strict. .

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