Naruto's Beginning: a Black Ball Beast

It's too long-winded. The details of the layout can be unfolded slowly. There is no need to talk about it all at once. It seems that it is uncomfortable to express it. The length of the inner activities can be abbreviated as much as possible. This is a novel and not an analysis post.

You haven't finished your last book yet. Just look at this book. Everything is written so well. Why not write it? I have never seen such an author before. Either write it well, or don't write it at all and write whatever the hell. Oh shit

Too many private goods, must be pounced on

How could Orochimaru attack directly? He hasn't defected yet. Orochi was doing experiments on ninjas from the same village or the outstanding new generation of the ninja clan. Danzo was about to fall out when he went to ask for someone. Orochimaru came so suddenly. If the Inuzuka family was in trouble, how would Yuan Fei Hiruzen deal with such a weak and against the will of fire?

I didn't finish reading the first chapter. It smelled like Long Aotian, and it was so hard to read!

Abandoned, abandoned. Judging from the latest chapter where the protagonist is rescued by war orphans and then seriously injured, it can be seen that the author must have several more chapters on this group of orphans, but I am too lazy to follow this kind of private plot. I hope I can catch you in the future. Goodbye!

What does this mean for Tsunade, a shrew?

The plot of being bitten by Orochimaru feels a bit problematic, after all, you are not a civilian!

I haven't read the book yet, but just reading the author's comments in the post is enough to dissuade people. They are just looking for money and self-pleasure. The readers are not important at all, right? I said that as long as your book is published, you will be responsible. If you want to enjoy yourself, just read it on your computer. Is it fun to play with other people's feelings? Even if you make little money, it doesn't mean you don't make a dime at all. Are you worthy of the readers who pay for your books? Who dares to subscribe to your book based on your remarks?

As long as Blackballmon evolves into WarGreymon normally and does not jump to evolve, it should be able to walk sideways in Naruto. After all, WarGreymon that evolves normally in Digimon Reboot can just win. In the end, Millennium is just as strong and even the vitality bombs are thrown out. . .

When I saw Chapter 7, there wasn't much plot. The whole story was based on the author's settings and analysis, speculation, and understanding of the original work. It affects the reading experience too much. You can even explain in the first chapter like those authors which chapters (volumes) can be skipped.

Brother, what are you reading? I can't even recognize the handwriting.

What's there to do in this poor village?

Now that you've written about Digimon, don't brag about the Naruto system so hard! Compared to digital, Naruto is really nothing. ! The Hokage can also play a role in the Douluo system. It can be considered a fantasy floor.

Hey, there is a bunch of useless words... I feel sleepy after reading them.

Hmm... The blackening is too forceful, and I can't accept it. Orochimaru's curse seal was also very deliberate before. Orochimaru would not have carved the curse seal on his fellow villagers when he was not planning to become a rebel ninja. Anko was all carved before Orochimaru's betrayal. If you are really interested, just accept him as a disciple.

It's well written, but a group of review writers write at a slow pace... I don't understand how people who eat fast food eat too much, and when they encounter noodles that are eaten slowly, do they have to swallow it in one go and burn their throats and stomachs? A group of people who talk while standing without pain in their backs