Girlfriend Is a Weird Story

The plot of the first twenty-one chapters is amazing, and the sense of crisis that can be seen everywhere is very good. The following parts are tasteless and it is a pity to abandon them. They have no highlights and some poisonous points. They also eat up the previous settings and marginalize them. I can only say that this is it.

How many pictures are there? The one with the code and the eldest lady is still alive, it's really hard to watch.

How the hell did you manage to have two female protagonists with a single female protagonist? What about basic trust between people? Damn outrageous

It was clearly written well before, but Rinko Arima came out and poisoned her, and the young lady acquiesced (even though she was told not to do this, but with her tone and attitude, hehe, I even suspected that the young lady's fear of the protagonist and the heroine was fake). Forget it, at least let the protagonist come back with revenge, but I couldn't read it for more than ten chapters. No, and don't tell me to look back. I hate people telling me to look back. It's as if you can't stand the front anymore and will look back. You can't figure out the front, who knows what will happen later I have already prepared a package to be deleted and banned. I have to say that although it is a poisonous point, the poison is very successful! Phew... As expected, I felt much better after I said it.

There are setting conflicts in the book, and some poisonous points affect the perception. It is purely a personal comment. If you don't like it, please don't comment When I saw that the bullies, both children and adults, were sending this book, I thought it would be a book about killing evil decisively, a fantasy setting with a strong concept of a male protagonist, or a book that gives back tenfold. After all, why would the male protagonist always attract the female protagonist if there is nothing special about him? As a result, a gangster lady came looking for help? Then her driver set up a small combo for the male protagonist, and the malicious intent was not hidden at all. Even if the setting was instant, but she didn't expect the male protagonist to retaliate, she didn't need to have any further interactions, right? And I didn't even send this to you. It was just a background board before? The setting collapsed instantly, and the male protagonist was put on hold to destroy the Virgin. The beginning was also a bit confusing. Why would the male protagonist take the initiative to contact Xiaoniao Game when there was a problem? Why would you think of using it as a springboard to cause trouble for yourself? You said the main plot of this book is a single female protagonist in love, right? There are two heroines You said the main plot is a Japanese fantasy genre, right? The setting of the male protagonist is also broken Everyone who was bullied before died, but this one is not dead. Isn't the setting of the male protagonist dying immediately? If it's not an instant death, why did the bullies who were bullied before all die instead of having one or two survivors? The author said that the eldest lady of the underworld is not the No. 1 In Nisgaru? The problem is that they didn't set up a conflict ps: It's purely my personal opinion. I think it's not suitable for me, so I was poisoned, so I posted a book review. If you think what I said is wrong, then you are right.

The person who saw Rinko Arima had an explosive mentality

Why did it feel so good before? As soon as the eldest lady appeared for the second time in Chapter 25 and Arima came out, she started to persuade her to quit. First of all, the protagonist has a problem with the mentality of the eldest lady. He himself has experienced what it is like to be polluted before. The eldest lady couldn't bear it and asked the protagonist for help. However, when the author dealt with it, it became the protagonist who took the initiative to help the eldest lady. So the question is, what is the motivation of the protagonist? In order to obtain something similar to the eyes, is he kind, or does he feel that he mentioned it before, and then the eldest lady came to him through various channels and paid, so he wants to help? You may not feel this when watching it, but if the author doesn't point it out clearly, it will lead to deviations in the plot later. The protagonist knows that being polluted is uncomfortable, and the eldest lady is polluted to the point that he can't stand it. The protagonist takes the initiative to help the eldest lady decontaminate the contamination. The reward is the money given by the eldest lady herself. Then the eldest lady is just knocked on the head by the protagonist, so the protagonist feels guilty towards the eldest lady. Is this unreasonable? If you are polluted, you will die or go crazy. It will hurt even if you have an operation or a doctor. It is nothing if you knock your head. The protagonist has a problem with his starting point, and there will be problems later on. The eldest lady doesn't know what she is thinking. Faced with weird things that she doesn't know, and there is a protagonist who can solve the weird things, so arrogant, acquiescing to Arima's attitude towards the protagonist, she is not afraid that the protagonist will backhand and kill her if she doesn't cooperate? The protagonist has a ceiling at home and is afraid that the hammer will not cooperate. Does he have an obsession with eliminating pollution, or does the author reflect the protagonist's starting point? To take a step back, the protagonist and the eldest lady should have an equal relationship. Otherwise, according to the role created this way, the role would be completely unbalanced, and the eldest lady would be in an absolute dominant position. But judging from the initial shaping, the protagonist is the one who takes the lead, right? Then there is the one with a horse, who doesn't know what he is doing out there. The protagonist is bitten by a dog, Lu Dongbin, but he covers it up without knowing it? After all, the protagonist still needs to have some basic blood, right? He's not just a piece of cotton that can be rubbed at random, with such a good temper? Then there is the legitimacy of Arima's character. What does she do here, help the protagonist train? The author said that for a new character, but after forty chapters there was still no one, he gave him a gentle beating. Arima gave the protagonist several blows and then used a gun to attack the protagonist. That's about it. I just feel uncomfortable not giving suggestions. I hope the author can write well. I will withdraw it now.

The author should be more careful. I only looked for the chapter where they died without even reading the content.

Let me lay out the bookshelf for you first, and give you a suggestion to start rewriting from a dozen pages. This book of yours is just a bottle of plain water. It was originally very good, and the writing style was good for daily writing. But as a result, two inks came in, and it was all black.

You should quickly remove your single heroine label. Label fraud is okay.

Tell a joke about a single female protagonist

What to eat in this setting? Are Rinko and Kuroi dead? Did you see the brother behind you? Now I can't see it at a glance and I'm too lazy to look for it.

It's pretty cool, keep going 🙂, I hope the harem is all non-human, my XP is a bit weird

It was so well written that it made me angry too🙄

Chapter 21 was okay before, but then it became poisonous inexplicably. It's really outrageous! What a pity

The character Arima is a complete failure. The twist is too blunt. It's a pity for this good subject.

Dear author, is this a single heroine?

It's so miserable, it's obviously pretty good-looking.