Peerless Tang Sect Dragon Bear Douluo

I finally saw a more normal Douluo fanfic. It always featured the Dragon and Phoenix Divine Tree or some other artifact. After a few months, I finally got a more normal book instead of one about the Thousand Year Soul Ring at the beginning 😭

Finally I read a book with Ma Xiaotao as the heroine. To be honest, I really like Ma Xiaotao.

(Personal opinion) Good: It can be seen, as long as it doesn't collapse in the later stage. The bad: Let's talk about the first few chapters first. What you wrote gives people the impression that they are childish and not very mature. Logically speaking: 1. You are a reborn person. 2. You have all watched Dou 1 and Dou 2. It stands to reason that you should have your own set of ideas, or use your martial arts and the things in the novels you have read in previous lives to help you better organize a system of your own, instead of following what others say is really suitable for you. 3: Try not to lick people. No one can stand a novel about being a dog licker. 4: Try to make two modifications based on the original work to create your own thing. (The above are personal opinions for reference only)

Don't keep Huo Yuhao's opportunities if you can. There is no need to keep them for him. The protagonist wants to become a god. Just look at the current writing and there is no chance. Having Electrolux is equivalent to having a god-level teacher. Furthermore, the two eyes of ice and fire should have dragon bones. I guess, maybe I can get two soul bones. I hope the author will adopt it.

It's a pity. If the protagonist's martial spirit is purely a bear, maybe the martial spirit can rely on Behemoth, but the dragon and bear's words are too confusing and impure.

The most disgusting thing about Douluo is cheating in academy competitions

A level 42 soul sect, after fighting a four thousand year soul beast, you still look pale and say that it consumes a lot of soul power. How weak is the quality of your soul power? Your martial spirit is still a top-notch martial spirit. How much of a waste are you to be like this? Not to mention leapfrog challenges, this kind of thing can at least be punched in seconds, right? 4,000 Years is not 40,000. It's simply a waste of time. It's another rubbish book that doesn't reflect the protagonist's strength well.

The author wants to ask you something. You used to update twice a day, but now you only update once? Also, please don't spend so much time writing about roommates. It's too awkward. Is the protagonist gay? I write gay in a gay way.

Can you please stop cheating on the supporting characters? The six-level Xiantian practice improves to ten levels in one year, and the author is losing readers

Is the male protagonist a guy? I always drag my roommate along with me for everything. Your roommate is a man, so we are inseparable.

Let's open a harem, otherwise I'm sorry

I feel that the female characters are too drawn out and really naive. She blushes all the time. Personal opinion (if you don't like it... Then don't like it): In my opinion, Ma Xiaotao should be a very strong person. At least before she fails to win her heart, she should show the demeanor of a big sister instead of the mentality of a little girl. According to my memory, when Ma Xiaotao first appeared in the original work, she was a presence that frightened many students. Moreover, she likes the protagonist a bit inexplicably. Is it because the protagonist is strong? Handsome? I feel like there should be a reason for Xiao Tao to like the protagonist. Because of something, someone or something becomes attracted to the protagonist, or they don't know each other before, and because they feel that they have played against each other many times, they find it interesting and leave a shadow in their hearts. It feels like falling in love and killing each other. Of course, if you don't need a reason to like someone, then when I am in the water character. Everyone has different ideas, I'm just telling you what I think.

Just by looking at the name, I knew that the Dark Gold Dreadclaw Bear was about to be killed.

How about adding a Snow Emperor as the heroine? The author is big

None of the donkeys in the production team have such a rest like you!

I have read the first 28 chapters so far, and from chapter 25 to chapter 28, they are basically borrowing too obviously from the plot of "Douluo: Lotus Fan Douluo". Reference 1 Regarding Chapters 25 and 26, the author of this book's reference to Lotus Fan Douluo is completely to draw a tiger instead of a dog. Mu Ran, the protagonist of Lotus Fan Douluo, transformed into an ice soul beast after traveling through time. He had never seen Douluo or Peerless in his previous life. After enrolling in Shrek, he was entangled by Ma Xiaotao and Yan Shaozhe because of the ability of ice to suppress evil fire. In order to avoid trouble, he had no choice but to take out a drop of his body fluid before his transformation to solve the problem. At the same time, he made a few small requests to Yan Shaozhe, such as studying in Soul Guide hope and asking for a store in Shrek City. He paid for it himself. I hope Shrek can help with any reasonable requests in the future. Because the book Lotus Fan Douluo does not have a female protagonist, but Ma Xiaotao once liked the protagonist, so in order to get rid of the dispute with the woman, it is reasonable to take out the treasure liquid to treat Ma Xiaotao's illness. But the author's book Dragon Bear Douluo has nothing to do with Ma Xiaotao's Evil Fire, Eight-pole, so he forcibly borrowed it and gave it to Yan Shaozhe. He picked up the Mysterious Ice Essence of Ten Thousand Years from a roadside stall, and it seemed that the plot was made up to make up the word count. It is even more impossible for Yan Shaozhe to come out to meet the protagonist just because the protagonist rejected the request of level 29 Ma Xiaotao when he was at level 34. Although Yan and the protagonist knew each other before. But the requirements of the protagonist and Yan Ti are similar to those in Lotus Fan Douluo. They enter the soul guidance department and reasonably request help from the academy in the future. Learn from 2 What is outrageous is that in Chapter 27, the names of Lao Jin Barbecue Restaurant are copied. In Lotus Fan Douluo, Jin Nuo, the son of Jin Feng, the owner of Lao Jin Barbeque Restaurant, is the protagonist's classmate. Here it is replaced by Jinfeng and Jinhu. The content of the conversation, the description of the expression during the conversation, the intensity of the discount, and the unsold fruit wine were all copied directly. Moreover, Jin Nuo from that book and Jin Hu from this book are both known as PHS in the outer courtyard, because their uncles are both Du Weilun, the dean of students. Reference 3 Chapter 28 suppresses the evil fire, which is almost copied from Chapter 9 of Lotus Fan Douluo to eliminate the evil fire.

I haven't written anymore, my train of thought has stopped, and I can't write anything when I come back. I guess I'm a eunuch.

Why is the content of this book the same as the other book "Lotus Fan Douluo"?

In the original work, when there was evil fire, Ma Xiaotao was 19 years old and level 67. Now, with the Ten Thousand Years Xuan Ice Essence, she is 17 years old and level 49. I want to see how to round it up.

I really miss the days when you were here, turtles don't eat carrots

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20210305095407095","UserId":363028518} Where did this time go? The QQ group is gone, is it a scam? ? ?

The author should update it soon, the writing is really good.